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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 131)

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 8:33am | IP Logged
First of all I am so sorry for my late comments buddy..Hug     
Chapter 23                                                                        
Shlok wanted to be a police officer when he was a child..OhhhCryCry Look at Fate's cruelty..What he became in his future lifeOuch.

Aastha is really in a mess..Poor thing..She is confused about her feelings for him and the agony of being kidnapped and raped is killing her.CryOuch

Prabhakar Joshi knows about Shlok..He is someone from Shlok's past who has great relevance in this story I guess.. And he is afraid of Avdhoot..

Loved the way Shlok entered with Ramlal and Shyam..Awesome heroic entry..ClapThumbs Up

Now the real war is going to beginBig smileBig smile

Loved the whole update Mahi dearestHug

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Chapter 24

Loved the way Avdhoot was cornered by Shlok and his men. He was injured by the gunshot..Awesome..LOLClap Great job Ramlal..Thumbs Up

Aastha was trying to escape..Tongue But Shlok is more cunning..The way he closed her routes to escape..Wink

That pic was a surprise Shocked and shock..Who is Abhinandan Agnihotri..Is he Shlok's own son..????

Avdhoot is trapped now and is at complete mercy of Shlok..Loved the way he recognized Shlok at last..Big smile

But the scenes from Avdhoot's attack on Niranjan was sadCry Shlok was a brave child even then. He put up a little fight on his ownSmile

Fantastic update MahiiiHug

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 5:49pm | IP Logged
just read the last 2 chapters in the thread...i am busy but trying to catch up when i can...
things are getting more interesting hereSmile

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 5:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by akashavani

Mahi...Ur indepth of characters  is simply ...brilliant ...very complex and detailed .. Revealing  the  darker  parts  ..,of inner sighs  of reality of oneself...Astha ...,and outer harsh  realities ...leading  the sighs of  frustration  inwards...,Shlok  ...seeing ourselves  as  someone else ...we are familiar with ...but still can't seem to touch ...or feel ..or Accept truly ...our actual inner reality ...trapped in the ..mirrors of harsh reality of  life with  true death of innocence...in ourselves ...without Love or  Happiness. ...but only basic needs  of exsisting ...reflections   ..trailing us like shadows ...waiting for a chance ...to devour our souls completely. ..through  the...Looking Glasses  ..leaving us ...with nothing inside  ..but empty shells ...of our own selves...outside ...the Mirror .
Thank you so much Vani! And agree with you that Shlok is truly dead from inside, broken beyond repair, and when nothing is left to give then only the basic necessities are left lust, sex, and they reflect out from the soul. The soul's innocence is lost due to the harsh and bitter world and only an empty shell is left, a dried husk of a man.

The true looking glasses or mirrors  of souls  are ...The Eyes Itself. ...which can Reflect inwards to reality of  Love and Understanding  of Soul ...bringing happiness finally even after struggles ...or can see  only the.,., Outside Blinding  Reflections ...shadowing  us  in Blinding Love or  Hate. ..both  blinding us to our real self and ...bringing only ...Miseries All Around .

Yes it's true eyes are the mirrors of the soul and in Shlok's case they only reflect, a broken him, dead emotions, that's why he is cold, unapproachable because he has nothing to give and nothing inside.

Innocent Astha should never have been in the place she is now...forcefully  kept ...as mistress. ...and made love ..,.without love ...,,even though  not rape ...still is ravaged deeply  by her own harsh realities of ..herself ...woken up by Shlok ..,,.in the ...mirror of her Eyes...lost to herself  by death of innocence ...for ever ..,,...only Love and Understanding  A Solution now ...if not ..only misery  and contempt of ourselves  more  than the one who caused it ...never gone away ..cause it is our own our eyes...,,which keeps on  reflecting ...ourselves. ...in love .. happiness  ...or  hate and ...contempt...BUT CHOICE IS OURS TURLY.

Yes it's Astha's choice now, her innocence is dying already day by day at the hands of Shlok. It's really she who can find out behind his eyes, only if she is woken to harsh realities by him.

Mahi ... loved  ur updates  ...and the  description of  lovemaking..with passion and hate ..superb  dear  ..,,..but very dark more dark than  expected...you must be  ..exausted  after writing  these intense  updates ...,,,after reading  ur updates ... can't  stop myself ..,from giving my views...truly...srry for that...just skim and don't  think. Tks for pm...srry late...need lots of time ..to read deeply ...and answer all updates.

Thanks Vani for your care and for your love. You know i truly appreciate your words, Infact i wait eagerly for you to comment. You can give your views to your hearts content sweetheart. I love them and thanks dear for understanding the depth of characters and for giving a deep analysis of them. That is exactly that i want to convey.

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Serviana

just read the last 2 chapters in the thread...i am busy but trying to catch up when i can...
things are getting more interesting hereSmile

Thank you so much buddy! Big smile And you take your time dear, no worries. Wink

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 6:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hp_2006

First of all I am so sorry for my late comments buddy..Hug      No problem sweetie! Wink
Chapter 23                                                                        
Shlok wanted to be a police officer when he was a child..OhhhCryCry Look at Fate's cruelty..What he became in his future lifeOuch. Yep all his dreams got shattered, by Avdhoot! Ouch

Aastha is really in a mess..Poor thing..She is confused about her feelings for him and the agony of being kidnapped and raped is killing her.CryOuch Yes she is feeling a spark for him in her heart, because it's not dead like him. It's easy to feel an attachment to your kidnapper, when you have only him to rely on. Confused

Prabhakar Joshi knows about Shlok..He is someone from Shlok's past who has great relevance in this story I guess.. And he is afraid of Avdhoot.. Yep he is Shlok's neighbour and knows about his past and his family.

Loved the way Shlok entered with Ramlal and Shyam..Awesome heroic entry..ClapThumbs Up Thanks Naina! Big smile

Now the real war is going to beginBig smileBig smile 
Yep the confrontation between two masterminds! Wink

Loved the whole update Mahi dearestHug Thank you so much sweetheart! Hug

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 6:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hp_2006


Chapter 24

Loved the way Avdhoot was cornered by Shlok and his men. He was injured by the gunshot..Awesome..LOLClap Great job Ramlal..Thumbs Up Thanks Naina! And yep Ramlal is very loyal to Shlok! Wink

Aastha was trying to escape..Tongue But Shlok is more cunning..The way he closed her routes to escape..Wink Yes he is very clever and manipulative, after all he is a gangster and the boss, knows few tricks of his own. Wink

That pic was a surprise Shocked and shock..Who is Abhinandan Agnihotri..Is he Shlok's own son..???? That's a secret sweetie, but i'll soon disclose it! But i can give you a hint that it's not the picture of his parents. Wink

Avdhoot is trapped now and is at complete mercy of Shlok..Loved the way he recognized Shlok at last..Big smile Yes Shlok resembles his father, and Avdhoot found out the child in him, the defiant one. 

But the scenes from Avdhoot's attack on Niranjan was sadCry Shlok was a brave child even then. He put up a little fight on his ownSmile Yes he was always courageous, that's why he survived. 

Fantastic update MahiiiHugThanks sweetheart! Big smile

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 6:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepavasudev

Happy lohri

Aww happy lohri to you too Deeps! Hug

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