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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 116)

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Subhashini_chow

Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by Subhashini_chow

Wonderful Mahi mix of all Masalas Update Clap Thanks Subhashini! Big smile
I don't think Avadhoot get any info About shlok n Astha untill This Ramlaal Following like him a Shade..First get rid of that Ramlaal AngryU will get Ur daughter Then. Yeah he don't know that Ramlal is Shlok's mole because Ramlal is his very old henchman! Avdhoot is a stupid Don! LOL
Still Avadhoot is a Don?...we know That Shlok is Powerful Embarrassed Don now 
Avadhoot is so late Latif ..his daughter had been kidnapped 1 week before ..
But he could n't get any info herConfused Yeah first he was waiting for his commissioner buddy to find her out, but when he saw that the police was digging in too deep, he sent them packing and then actually he is afraid of going in that neighbourhood of Shlok, because he knows what he has done, so he sent Ramlal there and now when nothing has been found out so he wants to go and dig the neighbourhood now, and that's why he took help of his corrupt friend and police commisioner.
Let see his Plan going to success this time or not Ouch Yeah a big bomb blast in the next update, very spicy! Evil SmileLOL

I think U showed Us sexual interest of Shlok first time untill now 
he just take his revenge on Astha 
Now he is showing her his Nirma Love... Embarrassed Yeah he knows only one way of expressing himself, and that's physically, EmbarrassedLOL he won't show her his mental scars soon, too afraid of betrayal.

I love Mirror Part ...U elaborated it very well ..Love that concept Thumbs UpStar Thanks dear it's an ancient superstition, souls travelling through mirrors, even saw a movie too on it. Mirrors that was the name, very good movie, both 1st and 2nd part.Wink
Finally Astha comes to her senses..she really ashamed of her inner monster.
Love the way She Pushed him and Screamed,roared ... Yeah he awaken the beast inside her! Evil SmileLOL
She did n't get kicked him..where he need to be( U know where one kick is not enough for us)AngryAngry Yeah and she bit him many times too, and don't worry more will come in future, if I am the writer. Evil SmileLOLLOL
Anyway She really became a submissive now Confused
Shlok got what he intended to do with her Cry all of her innocence killed and 
she becomes Dark like him... Yeah she is growing bitter now, just as he wanted to make her his shadow, just broken like him, a shell with no spirit and all innocence gone! 
She get Food to Eat Big smile hope she eat it with out any fuss otherwise Shlok have his way make her eat Embarrassed Yeah she will! LOL
he slammed a fist in the wall Why?
Did he regretting about something? Yes guilty conscience too, but can't backdown now, has gone too far! He has started to feel pain too! 




Yes I saw The Mirrors two Parts ..Like the First Part most Coz I feel Its more scary than 2nd Part ...no wonder U saw them ..U r a dare Devil Evil Smile 
I like Black Swan movie too Big smile

Me too loved Black Swan, like all psycho movies! ROFL

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by Subhashini_chow

Update Update Update Update 
Update  Update Update Dear   Evil Smile
Please Update soon  Day Dreaming 
 I think Chapter 23 is your Last Update on this Thread U will Post Chapter 24 on 3rd Thread  Party

Yeah just going to! Wink Actually my fingers were aching a lot sweetie, OuchLOL that's why got late! 
Sorry Dear to hear that but I can't help it ...i am addicted ..so become pushy ..I like to Push pplWink


Edited by Subhashini_chow - 10 January 2015 at 8:06am

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mishtypiya

Great updates.
Sorry for d late reply..

No worries dear! Wink

Thank you so much buddy! Big smile
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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Thanks for pmSmile
all the ch from 20 to 22 are just ausumClapClap
ch 21 OMG how u did that mahi with asthaShockedShockedi was speechlessWinkWink
Ch-22 mirrorr that is too goodBig smileTongue
Avdhoot i just hate himAngryAngry
shlok i can't say what a powerWinkLOLROFL
poor asthaConfusedWinkcould not enjoyed her firstConfusedROFL
update soonWink
thanks for the dosesTongueevil witchWinkLOL
I'm backWink
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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahirmukhtar


Yeah just going to! Wink Actually my fingers were aching a lot sweetie, OuchLOL that's why got late! 
Hey, EQ, Shall i tend your fingers!

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Oh my evil queen I am going to send u balm for your aching fingers...can do that for the next dose.
Don't make ur doses late  otherwise we all will be sick..

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aamir.Aashlok

great chapter mahi. i do not comment on 20 and 21 chap.bcoz i am angry with u and ur shlok for taking my poor aastha's virginity.i really thought shlok only try to seduce aastha.but all thought gone to window.Grrr mahi. when will u allow aastha to escape from shlok? all bcoz of that bloody avdhooth. i hate him.                                             P.S.mahi,missed tanvis HSD.but after reading ur ff , that missing decreased.waiting for more nirma chap.

Oh sweetie! TongueLOL  Shlok did seduce Astha, she was all the way with him, EmbarrassedWink Astha and Shlok, are soulmates buddy, the dark one, not a normal romance told you! Evil SmileWink But you did like nirma hai na! EmbarrassedWink

And about Avdhoot you'll know more about him, in the upcoming update, every mask will wear off. WinkAstha's value is only of a pawn now in the game between Avdhoot and Shlok, but it will increase, when Shlok will defeat Avdhoot, and cleanse himself from all poison, he is beginning to love her but in his own way, he has no more heart to give her. Broken people can't love and he is broken all the way will only heal with Astha's love. 

And thanks sweetie that you liked it and your missing decreased! Wink

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 8:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Fimiramak

Again I have to start my comment by saying; I am sorry for late response. I was working. No worries buddy! Wink

But loved the update; especially the mirror part! Thumbs Up Thanks dear for liking it! 

Avdhoot - wonder what will be his next move? He is very manipulative! 

And the end of the chapter was good too...how he slammed his fist... Finally; he is showing some feelings, but he doesn't realize it or he doesn't want to realize it...

Yes he is fighting with himself, a battle is raging between his mind and heart! 

Update soon, but I guess you will do it soon since I am so late... Nope you are not late! Wink And i was just going to update! 

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