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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 114)

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 11:37am | IP Logged
so finally he openly admit
nice teaser

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 11:44am | IP Logged
15...

what is he hiding...

and shlok is deep

there is more astha going to suffer

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Mahir! Awesome update ! True that you can't hide anything from the mirror!! Astha's fiesty alright!!!! He's got a whole lot off trouble coming from every direction very soon lol... Love that he just can't keep his hands off her! despite what his head is telling him! He's a fallen Dark Angel. Wink

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hp_2006

Awesome...Awesomer..Awesomest...!!!Big smileBig smileBig smile I have now words to expain how I feel right now..You are one hell of a writer Mahi..Absolutely outstanding..Clap
Aww sweetheart ! Thank you so so much Naina! Hug It's you fans that really encourages me to write! Love u dearest! Big smile

Avdhoot is going to meet Shlok in person...Angry God this man..So arrogant..He thinks that no one can't beat him and none is greater than him..D'ohYep he is a know-it-all stupid and doesn't know still that Ramlal is Shlok's righthand man! ConfusedLOL

Aastha is beginning to try and understand Shlok..Big smile Yeah she is, beginning to think about him, a bond has been formed between them, but she is still unaware about it! Wink

The mirror scene was truly commendable..You are a great writer buddy..Never quit writing..You have a great future I must say.. Thanks naina i'm really overwhelmed dearest Big smile and yep buddy never gonna quit, how can i miss the chance to twist you people into little knots! Evil SmileLOL

I would like to mention a few parts of the update which is my favorite. Those are..

Who she was, who he was, she wasn't Astha, he wasn't Shlok, she wasn't his captive, he wasn't her captor...

Then who she was? Nothing but a beast and he was the monster who had woken him up inside her..

The woman arching her neck in the reflection was not Astha, where was Astha, her mind screamed...

Shlok lifted his head to look at Astha, when he felt that she had gone completely still in his arms. Her dilated pupils were frozen, gazing at something behind his head. He turned to see what it was and caught sight of them, in the mirror of his dressing table...


He was the dark soul travelling through the mirror, and she was the innocent soul on whom he had latched himself...

I just loved the way you are explaining their inner turmoils Mahi..God bless you my dear.. Thank you so so much dearest! Your devil Mahi is really overwhelmed! Hug

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by miac

Amazing as always. ..the best part 4 me was that mirror scene. 

Thank you so much dear! Big smile

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sumayya_Ejaz

wao loved it Thumbs Up i guess now shlok would have a soft corner for astha Wink waiting for the next update Embarrassed

Thanks dear! Big smile Yeah he is softening because he is feeling pain in his heart that Astha has awoken inside him, long dead and buried emotions! 

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Edna_Philip

Last three updates are nice.
Thanks for the PM.

Thanks dear! Big smile And my pleasure buddy! Wink
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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Linsie

15...

what is he hiding...

and shlok is deep  Yep he is very dark and secretive! 

there is more astha going to suffer Yeah she is going to! 

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