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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 111)

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 1:08am | IP Logged
unres pg 106

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Let go of your worries


Let go of your worries
and be completely clear-hearted,
like the face of a mirror
that contains no images.
If you want a clear mirror,
behold yourself
and see the shameless truth,
which the mirror reflects.
If metal can be polished
to a mirror-like finish,
what polishing might the mirror
of the heart require?
Between the mirror and the heart
is this single difference:
the heart conceals secrets,
while the mirror does not.

Mewlana Jalaluddin Rumi :




and this poet is one of my favoirite poets.. 

Rumi.. i love his sensuous and sensitive emotional poems a lot.

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 1:11am | IP Logged
thats it for today..

nice chapp .


cant type much..

loved reading it..

way to go..

and the prvs chap ..

LOVED SHLOK AND HER TOO..

AGGRESSIVE AND SUBMISSIVE..

MOTH AN THE FLAME..

SUN AND THE MOON..

SUN AND THE FIRE../ FLAME

FIRE AND THE FLAME

FIRE AND THE HEAT

HEAT AND THE SUN

FIRE AND FROST

FROST AND ICE

ICE AND FIRE..

COLD AND HOT..

LOVED THE COMBO..

GREAT.. READING AND FAB WRITING..

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 1:17am | IP Logged
Loved ur update mahi..beautifully written evil queen..
The part I liked the most the mirror reflection.u explained beautifully about astha's feelings.loved astha's fighting spirit eventhough she lost her innocence ..her spirit is  very much alive.
Unknowingly he too started caring for her..her reactions matters to him..he can't keep his hands off from her.
By her mere presence all his past is coming infront of his eyes..and his growing physical attraction makes it complicated .he can't love her and he can't hate her too..
U r a wonderful writer mahi..eagerly waiting for the next drug dose evil queen,

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepavasudev

Dja Vu


Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
Surly you do lie.
Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
We don't see eye to eye.
Mirror, Mirror by the stairs,
Your image is surly haunting.
Mirror, Mirror by the stairs,
My self-esteem you're taunting!
Mirror, Mirror above the sink
Are you showing my insides?
Mirror, Mirror above the sink
Why cant you give me pride?
Mirror, Mirror in my hand,
It really isn't fair
Mirror, Mirror in my hand
I cant help but stop and stare
Mirror, Mirror on the ground,
Now you're smashed in thousands.
Mirror, Mirror on the ground
A thousand me's surrounding


Truly a haunting poem Deeps, but the lyrics are so beautiful. Mirror showing internal reflection, the true human face behind the mask, the twisted soul.

Loved those lines, she break the mirror in anguish, quite a reflex action, she wanted to blame the mirror for showing one face of her and now being smashed on the ground, it's thousands of pieces are showing her reality, a thousand reflections means a thousand twisted faces.

Mirror, Mirror on the ground, 
Now you're smashed in thousands. 
Mirror, Mirror on the ground 
A thousand me's surrounding


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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 1:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepavasudev

Before The World Was Made


If I make the lashes dark
And the eyes more bright
And the lips more scarlet,
Or ask if all be right
From mirror after mirror,
No vanity's displayed:
I'm looking for the face I had
Before the world was made.

What if I look upon a man
As though on my beloved,
And my blood be cold the while
And my heart unmoved?
Why should he think me cruel
Or that he is betrayed?
I'd have him love the thing that was
Before the world was made.





Splendid poem Deeps! Thumbs Up About vanity, and the self-destruction that a person brings on himself, no longer pure like a newborn, to much indulgence in self-egoism. 

Loved those lines.

I'm looking for the face I had 
Before the world was made. 

Really searching for himself. 

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepavasudev

Let go of your worries


Let go of your worries
and be completely clear-hearted,
like the face of a mirror
that contains no images.
If you want a clear mirror,
behold yourself
and see the shameless truth,
which the mirror reflects.
If metal can be polished
to a mirror-like finish,
what polishing might the mirror
of the heart require?
Between the mirror and the heart
is this single difference:
the heart conceals secrets,
while the mirror does not.

Mewlana Jalaluddin Rumi :




and this poet is one of my favoirite poets.. 

Rumi.. i love his sensuous and sensitive emotional poems a lot.

Yes Deeps very good choice Wink me too love his poems, infact his poems were in our course, 8th standard till 10th standard. Agree with you really enjoy his poetry. Wink So beautifully explained the difference between a mirror and the heart. Loved those lines

Between the mirror and the heart 
is this single difference: 
the heart conceals secrets, 
while the mirror does not.

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 1:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepavasudev

thats it for today..

nice chapp .


cant type much.. No worries Deeps, me too, fingers aching so going to take break till tonight or maybe till tommorrow morning! 

loved reading it..

way to go..  Thank you so much Deeps your special appreciation is very close to my heart and means a lot to me! Hug

and the prvs chap ..

LOVED SHLOK AND HER TOO..

AGGRESSIVE AND SUBMISSIVE.. Thanks dear as you know I am sadistic like you, Wink so that's why loved writing it! EmbarrassedWink

MOTH AN THE FLAME..

SUN AND THE MOON..

SUN AND THE FIRE../ FLAME

FIRE AND THE FLAME

FIRE AND THE HEAT

HEAT AND THE SUN

FIRE AND FROST

FROST AND ICE

ICE AND FIRE..

COLD AND HOT..

LOVED THE COMBO.. Thanks Deeps, Big smile i love the four elements and everything about nature, earthly desires and everything, that's why try to put them in every writing! Big smile

GREAT.. READING AND FAB WRITING.. Thanks a lot Deeps, really your appreciation and your love in your words for me quite touches my heart! Hug

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