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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 102)

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 8:00am | IP Logged

DARKNESS WITH IN...

I hear the Darkness call my name;
I am drawn closer to the Flame.
I hold back; I must resist.
But how can I forget the Darkness that exists?
My Dark Desire, my Beloved One;
Two hearts beating one by one.
I hear your Voice, I see the Darkness smile.
I'd walk on coals, crawl for miles,
Just to feed my Dark Desire,
To draw closer to the Fire.
I must give in, be taken whole;
Give away my very soul.
To the Darkness I will give,
Every breath, every tear,
All my love, all my fears.
His mistress I shall become,
Devoid of emotion, not quite numb.
To throw myself into the Flames,
Burning brightly,
The Darkness calls my name.
I feel his Breath upon my face;
I am forgetful now of time and space.
When the Darkness is near I forget myself,
Forgetting all but the Darkness itself.
Feeling his Fingers burning hot on my skin,
Whispering in my ear, 'Now let me in.'
The Darkest of Desires consumes my soul, my flesh.
And I give in, I give in.
Take me now, my Darkness Within.




this is for using NERO STORY .. THE FLAMES AND THE BARBARIC LAUGH OF NERO..

MANY HATE NERO..BUT I LOVE HIM FOR SO MANY THINGS..

HE WAS FIDDLIGN WHEN ROME BURNT..

I WROTE NERO STORY FOR MY SHAKES PEARE FF FOR A DIFFERENT TAKE...

THE FIRE BURNING .. OF SO MANY PEOPLE .. LIFELESS ..HOME LESS WHEN ROME BURNED..HE WAS LAUGHING AND SINGING.. I MATCHED  ASTHAS HEART BURNING WITH RAGE TO SLAP SHLOK IN MY FF..




Edited by deepavasudev - 06 January 2015 at 8:12am

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Priya_ShrAvi

Reader's NoteLOL
Choco chip ...you writing essays to warn me/readers won't stop us from reading bcos you know the reason...WE'RE ADDICTEDLOL 
Yep i know, evil mahi has succeeded in her mission! Evil SmileLOL
Then even after reading ur so called warning...laughed my hearts content and scrolled down to read my doseLOL early in the morningSleepy Yep couldn't help her yourself na, second symptom of addiction! Evil SmileLOL
Results: was totally intoxicated...so prep bf was the last thing in my mindStern Smile so only managed to prep some toast which was not at all edible..ROFL so made some hot hot noodles for myself...selfish me..slurpTongueLOL Nothing left for me! OuchLOL But don't worry i only take a glass of freshly squeezed blood in my breakfast! Evil SmileROFL
And my MIL who's already sick..bcm numb like asthu...seeing me changing colours like a rainbow reading something in my phoneWackoROFL HA HA HA! ROFL Don't ever read it while sitting near her with a mug of coffee or tea, otherwise you'll burn the poor soul! OuchLOL


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Choco chip love ya for double delightHug...kinda overdoseLOL but loved itEvil Smile Yep an overdose of dark love! Evil SmileLOL Wrote it while listening to Katra Katra main giroon, from the movie alone, so you can see what happens to me after listening to a sensual song! Evil SmileROFL
Ikr..u asked me to remove my rosy glassesGeek but i couldn't...so I thought he won't do anything*cough* that was somewhat unexpectedStern Smile Yeah couldn't control his raging hormones poor boy and she was all the way with him, beastly Asthu! Breaking bed! ROFLROFL
I better not talk about astha and her agony.. you have written it with such description and detailing...thati felt everything was happening with me...It took a while to clear my head...am just reading itOuch my heart goes to all the astha's of the world! Yeah she is in a strait jacket! He is truly twisting her insides, still don't know what is happening to her and why! Ouch
Take a bow my dear choco chip for writing  fantabulous updatesHugThanks my vanilla pudding! A bear hug from me! Hug

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RAW PASSION..


Passion holds my heart's desire,
Lust, and ravage, light my fire.
Lovers embrace in twilight's choir,
Songs echo to the tops of spires...

It starts off with a simple kiss,
Lips merge and do not miss.
Lungs expand in breathing hiss,
Hands tremble, you want this.

Tongues entwined in moaning dance,
This is it, our wanton chance.
Loins on fire within our pants,
Physical needs do now advance.

Arms tangle as they explore,
Passion climbs a little more.
Buttons pop, one through four,
Shirts fly, and hit the floor.

Chests bare, as they titillate,
Pressed together, increase heart rate.
Bodily needs can no longer wait,
Hormonal urges to procreate.

Zippers fumbled with shaky hands,
The hour glass slows it's timing sands.
Naked flesh that now understands,
How it must meet it's demands.

With lust at an all time high,
No stopping now, you must comply.
You have the needs of my supply,
Let me slip into your thighs.

We two souls become as one,
Hearts race from the starting gun.
Like fire thrown from the desert sun,
Dirty deeds have just begun.

Down our bodies, the sweat pours,
A rhythm wild, my piston bores.
Silence broken, with animal roars.
Time stops, pulses soars.

Take it hard, take it fast,
It won't be long, I'll try to last.
Loins slapping, needs amassed,
This spell we're under, our bodies cast.

The time has come to release my seed,
This I must, it is my need.
Take me deep, I must concede,
There's nothing left, to impede.

A final thrust, I must eject,
As spirits fly, and we connect.
In your womb, I do affect,
Tiny tails, left unchecked.

Exhausted from our hours of bliss,
Loving tenderness now in our kiss.
Attention to you I won't dismiss,
Our passionate moment, we reminisce.

As I stare, I must confess,
Hair entangled, we're quite the mess.
A new found joy, we coalesce,
Lover's embrace, a soft finesse.


I DEDICATE THIS ONE FOR UR FF ..

I DINT WRITE..

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepavasudev

When Two unite as One ..


It starts with a look you caste my way,
There are no words we need to say,
I always know that certain look,
We know each other like a book,
Next you reach out with your gentle touch,
That says you want me very much,
Soft kisses and a warm embrace,
As I stare into your pretty face,
I lean in closer as our lips meet,
Where we touch, I feel the heat,
Lovingly we start to undress,
As exploring hands start to caress,
Delicately kissing every inch of flesh,
Our wanting bodies start to mesh,
Passion overtakes mere desire,
Our inner heat turns to fire,
As every inch I begin to explore,
You softly moan and call for more,
As your sweet juices start to flow,
My engorged member starts to grow,
You open your legs in a show of trust,
As we join together I start to thrust,
Our tension builds as we unite,
Your legs around me holding tight,
Nestled between your creamy thighs,
Your soft moans turn to cries,
Our lusty passion begins to explode,
You scream in pleasure as I shoot my load,
Afterwards we lie side by side,
Coming down from our wild ride,
Once again we enjoy our touch,
Loving each other, very much,
Savoring the moments, after we're done,
Of when two people, unite as one.


this is for ur EROTIC TWO CHAPTERS FOR DARK LOVE AND FANTASY..



Deeps i think you posted that same poem two times, the other title is darkness within but the poem is same, as two unite with one.

But totally loved it, a poem about earthly passions, subconscious desires and best description about the final union.

Love making is not only the meeting of two bodies, but of souls two, soaring as one understanding each other. Loved it!

And when i was writing about Astha's burning passion, i fantasize Shlok as Nero playing the fiddle, while she burned. So good that our minds match Deeps. Two sadistic friends. Wink

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 8:14am | IP Logged
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this sometime back i did one picture OS on FIRE and ICe..not ur dark wala..

but abt women standing for self ... for her self estemm .

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by deepavasudev

When Two unite as One ..


It starts with a look you caste my way,
There are no words we need to say,
I always know that certain look,
We know each other like a book,
Next you reach out with your gentle touch,
That says you want me very much,
Soft kisses and a warm embrace,
As I stare into your pretty face,
I lean in closer as our lips meet,
Where we touch, I feel the heat,
Lovingly we start to undress,
As exploring hands start to caress,
Delicately kissing every inch of flesh,
Our wanting bodies start to mesh,
Passion overtakes mere desire,
Our inner heat turns to fire,
As every inch I begin to explore,
You softly moan and call for more,
As your sweet juices start to flow,
My engorged member starts to grow,
You open your legs in a show of trust,
As we join together I start to thrust,
Our tension builds as we unite,
Your legs around me holding tight,
Nestled between your creamy thighs,
Your soft moans turn to cries,
Our lusty passion begins to explode,
You scream in pleasure as I shoot my load,
Afterwards we lie side by side,
Coming down from our wild ride,
Once again we enjoy our touch,
Loving each other, very much,
Savoring the moments, after we're done,
Of when two people, unite as one.


this is for ur EROTIC TWO CHAPTERS FOR DARK LOVE AND FANTASY..



Deeps i think you posted that same poem two times, the other title is darkness within but the poem is same, as two unite with one.

But totally loved it, a poem about earthly passions, subconscious desires and best description about the final union.

Love making is not only the meeting of two bodies, but of souls two, soaring as one understanding each other. Loved it!

And when i was writing about Astha's burning passion, i fantasize Shlok as Nero playing the fiddle, while she burned. So good that our minds match Deeps. Two sadistic friends. Wink
edited the secodn poem..u may check.

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepavasudev

RAW PASSION..


Passion holds my heart's desire,
Lust, and ravage, light my fire.
Lovers embrace in twilight's choir,
Songs echo to the tops of spires...

It starts off with a simple kiss,
Lips merge and do not miss.
Lungs expand in breathing hiss,
Hands tremble, you want this.

Tongues entwined in moaning dance,
This is it, our wanton chance.
Loins on fire within our pants,
Physical needs do now advance.

Arms tangle as they explore,
Passion climbs a little more.
Buttons pop, one through four,
Shirts fly, and hit the floor.

Chests bare, as they titillate,
Pressed together, increase heart rate.
Bodily needs can no longer wait,
Hormonal urges to procreate.

Zippers fumbled with shaky hands,
The hour glass slows it's timing sands.
Naked flesh that now understands,
How it must meet it's demands.

With lust at an all time high,
No stopping now, you must comply.
You have the needs of my supply,
Let me slip into your thighs.

We two souls become as one,
Hearts race from the starting gun.
Like fire thrown from the desert sun,
Dirty deeds have just begun.

Down our bodies, the sweat pours,
A rhythm wild, my piston bores.
Silence broken, with animal roars.
Time stops, pulses soars.

Take it hard, take it fast,
It won't be long, I'll try to last.
Loins slapping, needs amassed,
This spell we're under, our bodies cast.

The time has come to release my seed,
This I must, it is my need.
Take me deep, I must concede,
There's nothing left, to impede.

A final thrust, I must eject,
As spirits fly, and we connect.
In your womb, I do affect,
Tiny tails, left unchecked.

Exhausted from our hours of bliss,
Loving tenderness now in our kiss.
Attention to you I won't dismiss,
Our passionate moment, we reminisce.

As I stare, I must confess,
Hair entangled, we're quite the mess.
A new found joy, we coalesce,
Lover's embrace, a soft finesse.


I DEDICATE THIS ONE FOR UR FF ..

I DINT WRITE..


Quite a hot and descriptive poem Deeps! EmbarrassedWink Loved the raw burning passion. Was missing your poems and comments so much! Thanks dear! Hug

Loved those lines:

The hour glass slows it's timing sands.

As spirits fly, and we connect.

Take me deep, I must concede,
There's nothing left, to impede.

Thanks Deeps wholly loved your dedication! Hug

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepavasudev


DARKNESS WITH IN...

I hear the Darkness call my name;
I am drawn closer to the Flame.
I hold back; I must resist.
But how can I forget the Darkness that exists?
My Dark Desire, my Beloved One;
Two hearts beating one by one.
I hear your Voice, I see the Darkness smile.
I'd walk on coals, crawl for miles,
Just to feed my Dark Desire,
To draw closer to the Fire.
I must give in, be taken whole;
Give away my very soul.
To the Darkness I will give,
Every breath, every tear,
All my love, all my fears.
His mistress I shall become,
Devoid of emotion, not quite numb.
To throw myself into the Flames,
Burning brightly,
The Darkness calls my name.
I feel his Breath upon my face;
I am forgetful now of time and space.
When the Darkness is near I forget myself,
Forgetting all but the Darkness itself.
Feeling his Fingers burning hot on my skin,
Whispering in my ear, 'Now let me in.'
The Darkest of Desires consumes my soul, my flesh.
And I give in, I give in.
Take me now, my Darkness Within.




this is for using NERO STORY .. THE FLAMES AND THE BARBARIC LAUGH OF NERO..

MANY HATE NERO..BUT I LOVE HIM FOR SO MANY THINGS..

HE WAS FIDDLIGN WHEN ROME BURNT..

I WROTE NERO STORY FOR MY SHAKES PEARE FF FOR A DIFFERENT TAKE...

THE FIRE BURNING .. OF SO MANY PEOPLE .. LIFELESS ..HOME LESS WHEN ROME BURNED..HE WAS LAUGHING AND SINGING.. I MATCHED  ASTHAS HEART BURNING WITH RAGE TO SLAP SHLOK IN MY FF..



Loved that poem the most, darkness's mistress. I love dark poems, infact obsessed about them. The way they describe human emotions, nothing can...

And that poem darkness within totally described the condition of Astha, how she is crawling on coals, burning for Nero, that is Shlok. She is starting to get addicted and Shlok will now make her fully addicted, craving for more, until she won't be able to live without the dose of dark love...

She is now being consumed in his darkness and her own little darkness is taking over her too, he had woken up the beast inside her...

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