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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 101)

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swathin

superb
too hot
loved the mirror part


Thank you so much dear! Big smile

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 8:20am | IP Logged
When I first strated reading the FF
I thought that aaasthat has got great parents ut this avdhoot turned out to be a big masterplayer.
Having affair with Anjali and Sanjana Uffghh That's disgusting.
Shlok is taking revenge from Avdhoot for his parents!!
I am still confused that why Avdhoot killeed Niranjan and Anjali.
Who is Sanjana!!!
Really feeling pity for AAstha.
The best part of this ff is Dark and full overdose of hotness.
I prefer reading drk ff as the dark ff shows more passion rather than in those sweet sugary FF.I have read many dark ff's but not this kind of any.
 After seeing some banners First I thought it was something about vampires.No it turned out to be something different.
I just hope Shlok opens up with AAstha.
And please reveal this mystery part also.
At the end hats off to u girl for writing such a hot passionate dark ff.
Really You would become a good writer also.

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anjipankaj

When I first strated reading the FF
I thought that aaasthat has got great parents ut this avdhoot turned out to be a big masterplayer.
Having affair with Anjali and Sanjana Uffghh That's disgusting.
Shlok is taking revenge from Avdhoot for his parents!!
I am still confused that why Avdhoot killeed Niranjan and Anjali.
Who is Sanjana!!!
Really feeling pity for AAstha.
The best part of this ff is Dark and full overdose of hotness.
I prefer reading drk ff as the dark ff shows more passion rather than in those sweet sugary FF.I have read many dark ff's but not this kind of any.
 After seeing some banners First I thought it was something about vampires.No it turned out to be something different.
I just hope Shlok opens up with AAstha.
And please reveal this mystery part also.
At the end hats off to u girl for writing such a hot passionate dark ff.
Really You would become a good writer also.

Thank you so much dear! Big smile I rather too a risk by writing about dark love and that too on my first ff. Never knew that i'll got such an appreciation from you Ashlokians. Thanks a lot dear. Hug

I too love reading about dark love, never liked those sugary romances. And that's why wrote a dark romance. I've made all my characters somewhat flawed, or dark so as to give a hint of reality...

Ashlok love will take time, as he is completely in revenge mode now and don't trusts anybody specially the daughter of his enemy but once Astha will start to understand his point of view she will start to love him and that will be after she'll know about his father...

The mystery part is soon to be revealed now. Wink

And Sanjana was Shlok's sister and Anjali and Niranjan his parents.

Thanks again dear for your appreciation! Big smile

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Well I somehow don't know what do feel about aastha and her personality
Stty easy to underdtand knowing his reasons and his intentions but aastha is a book which is wittem in chinese
She loathes him but knows that he somehow needs to be saved that he is bitter inside and broken
Shehates him but likes his touch poor her seems very cobfused and i mean who could res8s scobtjnue soon loving your writing soo much deaeesr mahii

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by GoWithTheRhythm

Well I somehow don't know what do feel about aastha and her personality 
Stty easy to underdtand knowing his reasons and his intentions but aastha is a book which is wittem in chinese Yep Astha is so confused with what is happening with her, she is torn between her attraction for her kidnapper and her morals, she don't know what is happening to her and why!
She loathes him but knows that he somehow needs to be saved that he is bitter inside and broken
Shehates him but likes his touch poor her seems very cobfused and i mean who could res8s Yes he is mentally breaking her apart! scobtjnue soon loving your writing soo much deaeesr mahii Aww thank you so much Amelia! HugWill continue soon dear! Wink

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Hi EQ Mahi wonderful dark update yaar Clap. Avdhoot is really dangerous this will be a very dirty dark game between this 2 equally dark mastermind no one going to leave it that easily but in their nasty play Astha have to pay most Cry. Poor soul lost her innocence n Shlok very well know how his black shadow engulf all her purity from heart n bosun she also become a ugly dark shadow which she can see in mirror n get afraid pathetic she is paying for her father sins Cry. One thing clear Shlok will not force himself to her he will seduce her make her ready for him but will never do anything without her choice.
Thanks for PM n waiting for next dose Hug

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Nice update...Shlok has started to soften.  Big smile

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
Mahi...MY HEART IS POUNDING HERE reading your updates..what magic you have your BRAIN...PURE MAGICAL...by the time I finish you rupdate I go nuts...I make sure none disturbs me and no one watches me Wjile reading...becos i get expressive while readingLOLLOLLOL..and I dont want anyone to read meLOLLOLLOL...awesome update MAHI...ClapClapClap...keep going..Shlok has changed and Astha tooo...she is trying t understand that Shlok has something within him that he is hiding...and all this has a PAST HISTORY ..not just FATAL ATTRACTIONSmile...waiting of the next step by AVDOOT and SHLOK...Hope Astha is with SHLOk after the revelation...hmmm...my brain going HAYWIRE now..I will stop..And thank you for a wonderful update GAL..Waiting fo rthe next ..please dont make us wait for LONGWinkWink
BTW..Thanks u so  much for giving a reaosn behind the mirror and BABY connection...i have been asking this for so long..and BAMN!!! you give it to me...ClapClapClap...


Edited by potomac - 08 January 2015 at 1:40pm

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