edited the secodn poem..u may check.Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar
Deeps i think you posted that same poem two times, the other title is darkness within but the poem is same, as two unite with one.But totally loved it, a poem about earthly passions, subconscious desires and best description about the final union.Love making is not only the meeting of two bodies, but of souls two, soaring as one understanding each other. Loved it!And when i was writing about Astha's burning passion, i fantasize Shlok as Nero playing the fiddle, while she burned. So good that our minds match Deeps. Two sadistic friends. 😉
Originally posted by: deepavasudevRAW PASSION..
Passion holds my heart's desire,
Lust, and ravage, light my fire.
Lovers embrace in twilight's choir,
Songs echo to the tops of spires...
It starts off with a simple kiss,
Lips merge and do not miss.
Lungs expand in breathing hiss,
Hands tremble, you want this.
Tongues entwined in moaning dance,
This is it, our wanton chance.
Loins on fire within our pants,
Physical needs do now advance.
Arms tangle as they explore,
Passion climbs a little more.
Buttons pop, one through four,
Shirts fly, and hit the floor.
Chests bare, as they titillate,
Pressed together, increase heart rate.
Bodily needs can no longer wait,
Hormonal urges to procreate.
Zippers fumbled with shaky hands,
The hour glass slows it's timing sands.
Naked flesh that now understands,
How it must meet it's demands.
With lust at an all time high,
No stopping now, you must comply.
You have the needs of my supply,
Let me slip into your thighs.
We two souls become as one,
Hearts race from the starting gun.
Like fire thrown from the desert sun,
Dirty deeds have just begun.
Down our bodies, the sweat pours,
A rhythm wild, my piston bores.
Silence broken, with animal roars.
Time stops, pulses soars.
Take it hard, take it fast,
It won't be long, I'll try to last.
Loins slapping, needs amassed,
This spell we're under, our bodies cast.
The time has come to release my seed,
This I must, it is my need.
Take me deep, I must concede,
There's nothing left, to impede.
A final thrust, I must eject,
As spirits fly, and we connect.
In your womb, I do affect,
Tiny tails, left unchecked.
Exhausted from our hours of bliss,
Loving tenderness now in our kiss.
Attention to you I won't dismiss,
Our passionate moment, we reminisce.
As I stare, I must confess,
Hair entangled, we're quite the mess.
A new found joy, we coalesce,
Lover's embrace, a soft finesse.
I DEDICATE THIS ONE FOR UR FF ..
I DINT WRITE..
Originally posted by: deepavasudev
DARKNESS WITH IN...
I hear the Darkness call my name;
I am drawn closer to the Flame.
I hold back; I must resist.
But how can I forget the Darkness that exists?
My Dark Desire, my Beloved One;
Two hearts beating one by one.
I hear your Voice, I see the Darkness smile.
I'd walk on coals, crawl for miles,
Just to feed my Dark Desire,
To draw closer to the Fire.
I must give in, be taken whole;
Give away my very soul.
To the Darkness I will give,
Every breath, every tear,
All my love, all my fears.
His mistress I shall become,
Devoid of emotion, not quite numb.
To throw myself into the Flames,
Burning brightly,
The Darkness calls my name.
I feel his Breath upon my face;
I am forgetful now of time and space.
When the Darkness is near I forget myself,
Forgetting all but the Darkness itself.
Feeling his Fingers burning hot on my skin,
Whispering in my ear, 'Now let me in.'
The Darkest of Desires consumes my soul, my flesh.
And I give in, I give in.
Take me now, my Darkness Within.
this is for using NERO STORY .. THE FLAMES AND THE BARBARIC LAUGH OF NERO..
MANY HATE NERO..BUT I LOVE HIM FOR SO MANY THINGS..
HE WAS FIDDLIGN WHEN ROME BURNT..
I WROTE NERO STORY FOR MY SHAKES PEARE FF FOR A DIFFERENT TAKE...
THE FIRE BURNING .. OF SO MANY PEOPLE .. LIFELESS ..HOME LESS WHEN ROME BURNED..HE WAS LAUGHING AND SINGING.. I MATCHED ASTHAS HEART BURNING WITH RAGE TO SLAP SHLOK IN MY FF..
Originally posted by: deepavasudevhttp://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4137949
this sometime back i did one picture OS on FIRE and ICe..not ur dark wala..
but abt women standing for self ... for her self estemm .
now .. u will not use this poem anywhere..Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar
Quite a hot and descriptive poem Deeps! 😳😉 Loved the raw burning passion. Was missing your poems and comments so much! Thanks dear! 🤗Loved those lines:The hour glass slows it's timing sands.As spirits fly, and we connect.Take me deep, I must concede,
There's nothing left, to impede.Thanks Deeps wholly loved your dedication! 🤗
Originally posted by: deepavasudevnow .. u will not use this poem anywhere..
i want it for my blog.. 😉
even me too loved it///
cant type much..
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