#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) - Page 74

Awesome, fabulous double update! ⭐️

But I really don't know what to feel right now...

First I feel bad for Shlok. A young boy losing her mother.. It must be devastating for him.  

So in a way I can understand his hatred. Such a emotional flashback.

But is right thing to take a revenge on Astha? She is unaware of her dad's crimes.

And their union ☺️ -> I didn't see that to come. It was very sensuous and hot scene, very well written too.

But I wonder did it break Astha's spirit? I hope she will not be his "puppet" from now on.

And will Shlok ever be able to feel something else than hatred, like regret or sorrow? Will he ever be able to feel love, sympathy?

And the final question; what will Shlok do next?

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon!🤗

Originally posted by: charanyaaj

Dnt cry mahir!
I think jessi is teasing you
Jessi 😡

Originally posted by: Elation

Why would i tease her dear, Mahi is my Jaan😳

Congratulations my EQ, on hitting 100 pages🥳

Originally posted by: SahriShrAvi

100 Pages of 2nd Thread ...🥳
Congrats Maahi👏😃

Originally posted by: whitelily

Marvelous updates,written brilliantly

Originally posted by: .Biggi.

       WOW!!! MAHI IT WAS                            

     

Originally posted by: Honeypot

Mahi...thanks so much for the note..it helped me a lot as I knew what to expect..never thought this will come this fast..poor thing didn't know what hit her...I feltbad for astha as she didn't have a choice.waiting for the day when he realizes the pain he has given her..eventhough I expected her to fight a little more...u know what I liked the most she didn't beg...eventhough it was his plan to make her beg through seduction...he completely forgot about that .now he didn't know what hit him...Wow...mahi

U r a superb writer..

Thanks so much for the double dose..

Waiting for the next  dear.

Originally posted by: Fimiramak

Awesome, fabulous double update! ⭐️ Thank you so much Mira! 😃

But I really don't know what to feel right now... Ofcourse you won't know you are steam rolled by evil Mahi! 😈😆😆 

First I feel bad for Shlok. A young boy losing her mother.. It must be devastating for him.  

So in a way I can understand his hatred. Such a emotional flashback. Yep he is broken inside and now wants to break the whole world, specially his enemies every personal thing, even his daughter, and in his mind he is directly poisoning the blood of Avdhoot through his own flesh and blood, that is his daughter...

But is right thing to take a revenge on Astha? She is unaware of her dad's crimes. Yep she is now but won't remain unaware for long! 

And their union ☺️ -> I didn't see that to come. It was very sensuous and hot scene, very well written too. Thanks Mira! 😳😉

But I wonder did it break Astha's spirit? I hope she will not be his "puppet" from now on. Nope, he still didn't won, she didn't begged! 😉 Even if he'll break her for a short time, she is a phoenix, she'll rise from her ashes, so in that case you can say she is unbreakable! 

And will Shlok ever be able to feel something else than hatred, like regret or sorrow? Will he ever be able to feel love, sympathy? Yes when the burning fire in his heart will cool down, or when he'll unload all of his poison on his enemies, then and only then he'll be cleansed enough to feel something for her. But still now, he is unaware that the feeling of love had started taking root inside his heart.

And the final question; what will Shlok do next? For that you'll have to read the next update sweetheart! 😉

 

Thanks for pm. My devilish pleasure dear! 😈😉

Continue soon!🤗 Will do buddy! 😉