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Originally posted by: sathuraj
Chapter 20&21:
Mahi...u r truely a gifted writer sweety...u set the table on fire...Its tooo hot to handle my dear...Thank you so much sat! 😃Dear your words means a lot to me! 🤗I feel really sorry for astha...why she has to pay this much for her father's deed...Is giving pain is the best solution of pain...shlok would have seen the pain and cry from his aai and Taai...dont he feel bad and sad when he see the same pain and cry from astha...does he find peace and happiness when he see her like this... He's grown into a sadist with time, some people break down when they feel pain and some grow in to a sadist, hurting others, so that the burning pain that they feel inside can somewhat lessen. And on top of that he also see Avdhoot in Astha. When he'll understand her as an individual and will know that she is not her father, then he'll regret for what he had done!its really a very hot update and u have written it so well... Thanks sweetie! 😃u deserve a big hug for write such an dark romance dear... Thank you so much dear! 😃Thanks for the wonderful treat... My pleasure buddy! 🤗
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