Awesome update MahiπAvdhoot is loosing his own game...Waiting to see what happens with aastha...Poor her she is trying to get out of the devil's trap...can't wait to read more mahi...awesome workπ
Originally posted by: srilotus
Awesome updates Mahi π Thanks my Nirma Rani! π
ch-17 n 18 fantastic...liked how Astha fought back in ch18
n the bet...wow...she asked how many kidnapped women ππ Yes she is very innocent and also got a good sense of humour! ππ
Mahi ,want to see Astha as tigress ...Shlok falling yr...too goodπ She is a tigress buddy! And you just wait dear, how she'll lead him a merry dance! ππAnd yep Shlok is falling! π³P.S: How r u feeling now dear!
OMG...what Astha planning????...hope she don't get caught. Shlok slowly falling for her beauty π
Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar
Thank you so much π€ Shruthi! Astha is really trapped in the devil's den but she is spirited, bold and confident and Shlok still don't know what he had brought down on himself. ππ
Awwsome mahi!!!! par mein tumse katti hoon yaar... Made us wait 4 long days yaar and a small update too... It was big dear! π But i think i am getting successful in getting my sweet sumi more addicted! ππ Will inject a bigger dose next time! ππ
Chalo maaf karthi hoon par ek condition hai, ek chpt full ashlok ke de de yaar.
Show wale tho nahi dethein tu tho de yaar plzzz... I did buddy chapter 18 is fully dedicated to only Ashlok. π³π And you do want to read more about suspense na. π
Awesome update dear and thanks for the pm... Thank you so much my dear sumi! π And my devilish pleasure buddy! ππ³
(uff hate typing on a phone very difficult ) Yeah me too hate typing on the phone, it's very difficult but thanks dear π that you are bearing this great difficulty in order to give such lovely comments!
(and a big hi to all the gals π sorry guys still on phone
and i know all if gals r mahi's fans and wont miss her ff so im wishing
u all girls a happy new year here and sorry a bit late. join u guys soon.)
Originally posted by: Fimiramak
Brilliant update π Thank you so much Mira! π€
I like how Shlok is slowly feeling something else than just a hatred. Maybe he doesn't even realize himself but he is started falling for Astha. Yep he is! πBut what happened to Astha? Was the fall another plot form Astha or did she really slip? In a way I hope it was a a plot but I am afraid of what happens when Shlok realizes it..his is short-tempered You'll see that in next update! πIf she really slip, I hope she is fine. Yep she will be, but a little bit bruised!By the way... I slipped too at my work. I have a huge bruise in my forehead. I look terrible and have a minor headache. You know; probably only I can almost knock myself unconscious stepping out of the ambulance π Ohh! are you all right now buddy! You really into my ff! πUpdate soon! Will do dear! π
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