#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) - Page 44

Mahi ...srry late..but seeing the ...truth is uncovering slowly. 

Awesome update mahi👏
So angie's dad is avdhoot's partner in crime😲
It was one heck of intense update☺️Loved it to the core
Plish update soon...

Originally posted by: raji_ashloksfan

whoa,its too intense ur brilliant I love the way U wrote I am still confused wat type of revenge it is😳

Edited by mahirmukhtar - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: raji_ashloksfan

thanks for pm dear😛

Originally posted by: akashavani

Mahi ...srry late.. No worries buddy! 😉 but seeing the ...truth is uncovering slowly. 

The  biggest  Truth is definitely. .."one man's truth is another man's lie ",...only difference  is ...unless ..."one man's lie is intentionally ...said ...to either harm others ... or cover up ..truth ...to save himself... ...will it hurt and create ...wars and suffering  ..allaround...unless redeems himself  ...anyway.

Thanks vani for understanding so well! 🤗

Like Avadhoot. ...who is now lying only to save himself. ...when his daughter is ...in harm ...well yes he is trying to ...save her ...in his own way ...but definitely  knows ...that his past crime has come back  ..only to bite his daughter  iss baar...by love or hate ...for her ...must see.. Yep he is guilty conscience wants to save his daughter but is afraid that the investigation will disclose his past sins! 

Well still waiting ...for Shlok and Astha's. ...hot senses to fire up...with desire and ...slowly  with love tooo...great going ... Ofcourse dear more nirma will come in future! 😳😉

Thank you so much vani really loved your views from the bottom of my heart and ofcourse your beautiful comments dear! 😃

Originally posted by: crazian

Awesome update mahi👏
So angie's dad is avdhoot's partner in crime😲
It was one heck of intense update☺️Loved it to the core
Plish update soon...

Mahi...Loved Ur poem ...Absolutely ... ...It was ..An Absolute Abandonment of ...Body ...and soul...the heart and mind ...swaying ...in A pool of Ecstacy...The little death...as french say...is bliss on earth.





Edited by akashavani - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mehare

sorry dear for late comment busy this time😛😛😛 but i must say u r such a brilliant writer & wonderful story amazingly written👏👏👏 loved it read all chapters in one go hatsoff to u dear& congrats for new thread & half century⭐️⭐️ keep writing this dark story enjoy it & waiting for new twist& shlok past what happened with him& why he become like this😉😉😉 

                             wish you a👍🏼

                                        😉😉😉   HAPPY NEW YEAR🤗🤗

                                                          😆😆      In Advance⭐️⭐️

Wonderful update Mahi Avdhoot crime in partner Angie's dad very interesting. Finally Shlok kill Astha's soul with his devil act n take her to a bedroom hope he saw her some mercy. Shlok NA-Anjali's son n he want Avdhoot know about his living being to play his next trick. Thanks for PM n waiting for next part dear.
Btw Happy New Year in advance 🤗.Edited by jhumjhum - 9 years ago

Buddy read last three updates..
Loved them a lot..fabulous writing..
So avdhoot doesn't care about his daughter? Pathetic father..poor kalindi she is suffering the most
He lied about anjali and sanjana, and here i thought the mystery was revealed! *facepalm*
Ramlal is in both sides but more in shlok side..
Shlok won't be an invisible player now, waiting for their confrontation..
I don't get why shlok give her pleasure and think that he is having his revenge? I forgot he's a Psycho!
Ah! So astha has special bedroom, what about other things did he gave her any food? Or clothes?
The intimate scene was so intense and erotic, loved it..
Sorry for so late reply buddy..
Do update soon.