#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) - Page 42

This content was originally posted by: Subhashini_chow

Yes dear u r a   Evil Queen   😈 and U trapped us all in a spell with U r Dark FF 😈

yow mahi! i'm back 🤗
sorry for late comment again because my lovely sister got confined at hospital😊

first of all i loved your poem it's very painful poem😭 it was very wonderful

chapter 15:
avdooth gone mad😆 😆😆😆😆 he need to go on mental asylum 😆😆 poor kalindi she need to suffer to much😭😭

oh god poor shlok what had happen to his innocent colorful life it became dark as sin😭😆

so sajna was shlok's sister?? what a creepy past shlok had is her sister has been chopped by avdooth's gang??
i think avdooth and shlok has very deep relationship i hope you unfold it soon

oh astha truly moved wrong she woke up the lion😆😆😆 poor girl had been tortured again by shlokie the demon😆😆 but im waiting for astha's sweet urff demonic revenge😈😆

thanx for the PM daughter of a devil😈

This content was originally posted by: pirate.hunter12

yow mahi! i'm back 🤗 Welcome ram! 🤗
sorry for late comment again because my lovely sister got confined at hospital😊 Yeah rajit told me is she alright now? your sister! 

first of all i loved your poem it's very painful poem😭 it was very wonderful Thanks dear! 😉

chapter 15:
avdooth gone mad😆 he need to go on mental asylum 😆😆 poor kalindi she need to suffer to much😭😭 Yep she is the most innocent in all this matter! And don't worry will send Avdhoot in the third world! 😈😆

oh god poor shlok what had happen to his innocent colorful life it became dark as sin😭😆

so sajna was shlok's sister?? what a creepy past shlok had is her sister has been chopped by avdooth's gang?? Yep! 
i think avdooth and shlok has very deep relationship i hope you unfold it soon 

oh astha truly moved wrong she woke up the lion😆😆😆 poor girl had been tortured again by shlokie the demon😆😆 but im waiting for astha's sweet urff demonic revenge😈😆 Yeah wrote a really demonic revenge in chapter 16 by Shlok! 😈😆 Read it and you'll know! 😈😉

thanx for the PM daughter of a devil😈  All my pleasure sweetie 😈😉 

wonderful update👏👏
i loved ur way of writting

chapter 16:

what the hell is avdooth doing??? does he really love his daughter??i hate him to the core😡😡
because of he's lies many people are suffering😡😡 i hope shlok beat him until he became pulp😈

i heard someone wants to lick shlok's demonic sweat😈🤣 hmmm...astha having nirma thoughts in the middle of torture session🤣🤣i will not be surprise if astha will harass shlok🤣🤣maybe shlok would see his heaven when astha started her innocent act🤣🤣

oh astha finally asked shlok that what is her fault?? but our shlok is not going to spill the beans that easily after the author of the story loves to tease her innocent and impatient readers😆😆

wohoo shlok seducing astha again i got only lil overdose from that😆😈

thanx for the PM 🤗

This content was originally posted by: ANNMARY25

wonderful update👏👏
i loved ur way of writting

brilliant update,written superbly 👏

Mahi...i read both the chs...16 and 17th...loving the updates
will comment properly sometime later..not well...
HNY😃

Both the updates are nice. Thanks for the PM>

This content was originally posted by: pirate.hunter12

chapter 16:

what the hell is avdooth doing??? does he really love his daughter??i hate him to the core😡😡
because of he's lies many people are suffering😡😡 i hope shlok beat him until he became pulp😈 He hadn't only lied, he had done worse things than that!  And good advice ramit about beating him to pulp, will do that in some future chap! 😈😆

i heard someone wants to lick shlok's demonic sweat😈🤣 hmmm...astha having nirma thoughts in the middle of torture session🤣🤣i will not be surprise if astha will harass shlok🤣🤣maybe shlok would see his heaven when astha started her innocent act🤣🤣 Yep she can't herself, she has no control over her jumping harmones where the demon king Shlok is concerned! 😈🤣

oh astha finally asked shlok that what is her fault?? but our shlok is not going to spill the beans that easily after the author of the story loves to tease her innocent and impatient readers😆😆 

Yep she is not, 😈 secret! 😉😆 Had to trap innocent readers in her net! 😈😆 Otherwise they'll ran away! 🤣

wohoo shlok seducing astha again i got only lil overdose from that😆😈 You'll get more overdose dear in future! 😈😉

thanx for the PM 🤗 Welcome buddy! 😉