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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) - Page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
beautifully written 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 17:
 
What an amazing update dear...
 
Police commissioner is also supporting Adhvoot...
 
Why they have to break the law...
 
Angie...i guess she is going to play a major role in finding astha...
 
Ashlok...
 
Poor astha lost all the courage to fight back with shlok...
 
she does have strength...hope she recover herself...
 
so that she will fight back...
 
Shlok...does he get happiness by doing this to astha...
 
he took her to the special bedroom...
 
feeling really sorry for Ashlok...
 
Ramukaka...the man who play double game...
 
he is the trusted man for both shlok and adhvoot...
 
Adhvoot figured out the kidnapper to be anjali niranjan's son...
 
Shlok told ramalal to inform abt him to adhvoot...
 
he is keeping a checkmate to adhvoot...
 
Thanks for the wonderful treat dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: sireesha76

superb update

beautifully written 👏


Thanks dear! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: sathuraj

Chapter 17:

 
What an amazing update dear... Thank you so much sat! 😃
 
Police commissioner is also supporting Adhvoot...
 
Why they have to break the law... corruption all the way! 
 
Angie...i guess she is going to play a major role in finding astha...
 
Ashlok...
 
Poor astha lost all the courage to fight back with shlok...
 
she does have strength...hope she recover herself...
 
so that she will fight back...
 
Shlok...does he get happiness by doing this to astha... His revenge is his greatest satisfaction! 
 
he took her to the special bedroom...
 
feeling really sorry for Ashlok...
 
Ramukaka...the man who play double game...
 
he is the trusted man for both shlok and adhvoot...
 
Adhvoot figured out the kidnapper to be anjali niranjan's son...
 
Shlok told ramalal to inform abt him to adhvoot...
 
he is keeping a checkmate to adhvoot...
 
Thanks for the wonderful treat dear... My pleasure dear! 😉 And thanks sat for your lovely comments and for loving my writing! 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: SahriShrAvi

Mahi... sooper se ooper ka update.. 👏 Thank you so much dear! 😃

Awwieee!!!...my baby lost her innocence .. but i dont think so she is still Innocent and pure... hena Mahi.. 😃 Yep you guessed right maybe physically but not mentally! 😉

good to hear that he has arranged her a especial bedroom ahaan! Yep! 😳

loving each and every revealation and twist.. Thanks dear! 😉

Angie got dark circles ;O
is she really worried for Aastha???? Yep but guilty conscience more now, 😉 as she fears that Shlok had gotten information from her for a purpose, revenge on the coffee incident! She doesn't know the real reason...

Thanks for the PM You are welcome dear! 😉
Wonderful Update EBP.. Thanks sweetheart 🤗 

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Posted: 9 years ago
I hope(Wish) he is not Completly succeed in to take all innocence of her and broke her ...rather than like to she finds his truth and heal his heart from wounds he got 😭
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My words will bring to life the deepest part of ur untouched soul,

MY raw emotions will pull you in & force u to feel, 

MY raw passion will bring urs to the surface along with me, 

U Will not be able to ignore who u were meant to be.. 

As i force u to face ur inner fears & teach u abt the darkness of ur unexhibited needs,

I will invade ur habitat, I will explore u, I will take over u, 

I will completley control u, physically & mentally, 

I will make u fiend for me..

I will become ur new addiction, i will become ur motivation to create , 

I will effortlessly make ur legs weak & shake.. 

I will bring u to ur knees , i will teach u how to turn loose & let go.. 

Ur body will squimish & squirm ,cry out my name & ache for me, 

Ur hardend heart will break open for me...

The more u experience me the more u will learn & discover urself.. 

I will bring out the darkest parts of u, 

I will conquer & expose ur weakness, 

I will totally posses ur body like a spirit.. 

With ur eyes rolling back in ur brain, ur body movements are uncontained..

U have relinquished to me full control of ur physical use, 

I have ur body doin things u never thought it could do...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: sathuraj

My words will bring to life the deepest part of ur untouched soul,

MY raw emotions will pull you in & force u to feel, 

MY raw passion will bring urs to the surface along with me, 

U Will not be able to ignore who u were meant to be.. 

As i force u to face ur inner fears & teach u abt the darkness of ur unexhibited needs,

I will invade ur habitat, I will explore u, I will take over u, 

I will completley control u, physically & mentally, 

I will make u fiend for me..

I will become ur new addiction, i will become ur motivation to create , 

I will effortlessly make ur legs weak & shake.. 

I will bring u to ur knees , i will teach u how to turn loose & let go.. 

Ur body will squimish & squirm ,cry out my name & ache for me, 

Ur hardend heart will break open for me...

The more u experience me the more u will learn & discover urself.. 

I will bring out the darkest parts of u, 

I will conquer & expose ur weakness, 

I will totally posses ur body like a spirit.. 

With ur eyes rolling back in ur brain, ur body movements are uncontained..

U have relinquished to me full control of ur physical use, 

I have ur body doin things u never thought it could do...



Thank you so so much my dear sat! 🤗 
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Posted: 9 years ago
story Mahi!!

Dark and Hot  
  

I love it!!!
Edited by .Biggi. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: .Biggi.

story Mahi!!


Dark and Hot  
  

I love it!!!


Aww thank you so much sweetie! 🤗 And I loved your emoji's 😉