#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) - Page 23

I'm really sorry Mahi for this late reply just read last 2 part n teaser wow thrilling update dear. Shlok going dark in his revenge mood n Astha somehow understand all her fault. Teaser so Avdhoot get who doing this many more mystery to come out. Congratulation for your new thread n thanks for PM dear waiting for next update.

Awesome teaser
Update soon

Mahiii...Take a bow my dear..Hats off to you..Superb writing..👏
Simply out of the world.. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Aastha has turned numb towards his torture now..I loved the way you explained her feelings and mixed up memories of the past when she tortured other living beings too..😊

Now Aastha is feeling sympathetic towards her assailant and wants to influence him with her words.Wow I loved the twist honey..This story is getting interesting day by day..👍🏼

The teaser is intriguing ..Avdhoot remembers him but doesn't know the name..I am more eager to read PART 15 now😊
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This content was originally posted by: sathuraj

Chapter 6:

 

another amazing update dear...

 

Why shlok want to take revenge her...is there any past incident...

 

Astha getting nightmare and cant able to come out the incident...

 

So shlok has planned something big for astha...

 

OMG...he is already angry with her now the coffee incident added fuel to it...

 

Astha still worried abt shlok...and didnt came back to reality...

 

she even forgot watch the out of order notice...

 

Shlok followed her to the bathroom...

 

Guess he is going to acheive what he wants...

 

Thanks the wonderful treat...

 

will read the rest soon...

 

 

 

 

This content was originally posted by: mishtypiya

Nice teaser..

This content was originally posted by: Priya_ShrAvi

Why choco chip..why
Teasing with teaser 😡

And ur playing smart... not mentioning a word about ashlok in ur teaser.. han? 😳
Avdhooth... I think am gonna hate him like anything... 🤣

Can't wait to read... Starving for my dose my choco crunch 😔

This content was originally posted by: sathuraj

Chapter 7:

 

A hot update...

 

Shlok...my god...he approach towards astha was so aggroant...

 

Poor Astha...was helpless...

 

he was so satisfied after getting what he want..

 

Astha...what is going to happen to her now...

 

why he marked red cross against her Id card...

 

why he is so angry with her...

 

anyway will get to know them soon...

 

But my dear...u r a gifted writer...

 

so well written...

 

Thanks for the wonderful update...

This content was originally posted by: sathuraj

Chapter 8:

 

Amazing update dear...

 

Astha locked herself in the room for 2 days...not able to come out of the shock...

 

Poor girl... she cant share anything with her mom... not to wrosen the sutiation...

 

Shlok was in his den...after successful completing his plan...

 

everything was well planned and executed by shlok...

 

he acheived what he want...

 

he has his men around astha...

 

as soon as she agreed to come to bonfire...

 

he has started planning...and given the instruction to his men..

 

so well written dear...

 

thanks for the wonderful treat...

 

This content was originally posted by: sathuraj

Chapter 9:

 

Finally astha back to normal trying to forget that incident...

 

Shlok was happy that his plan is going to excuted soon...

 

His loyal men has completed the task given to them...

 

they have kidnapped astha...my god...

 

shlok men are more rude then him...they slapped her...

 

Shlok is taking revenge on astha or for her parents...

 

did astha's parents did anything wrong to shlok or to his family...

 

fabulous update dear...

 

Thanks for the wonderful treat...