#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) - Page 22

Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 9 Teaser...
 
Shows the love and affection Avdhoot and kalinda had for astha...
 
so astha was kidnapped...
 
oh no...
Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 9:
 
Finally astha back to normal trying to forget that incident...
 
Shlok was happy that his plan is going to excuted soon...
 
His loyal men has completed the task given to them...
 
they have kidnapped astha...my god...
 
shlok men are more rude then him...they slapped her...
 
Shlok is taking revenge on astha or for her parents...
 
did astha's parents did anything wrong to shlok or to his family...
 
fabulous update dear...
 
Thanks for the wonderful treat...
Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 10:
 
wow...what an update dear...
 
u have brought out the pain of her parents so well...
 
Angie...is such a stupid girl...
 
to fall in shlok trap so easily...and give him all the information of astha...
 
why shlok is so cruel like this...
 
will he ever fall in love...after such incident will astha fall in love with him...
 
Poor astha got strucked because of her parents...
 
what is he going to do with her,...
 
Poor girl found a skull next to her...its should be horrible for her...
 
Thanks for the wonderful treat...
Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 11 Teaser:

My god...U r teaser sounds terrifying...
 
what did he want to know from her...
 
astha is trying to be strong ...wow...
 
 
 
Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 11:

Awesome update dear...
 
Shlok is too rude in handling astha...
 
he is using his power on astha to get what he wants...
 
after that horrible handling he got what he wants...
 
Poor astha has to go thru so much...
 
Finally Kirlosher got the mail...
 
Kalindi fainted as soon as she saw the picture...
 
so how is anjali connected to kirlosher...
 
I am so curious to know what going to happen next...
 
Thanks for the superduper update...
 
Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 12:
 
super update dear...
 
Shlok having the worst nightmare of his life...that too astha is the one who bring it back...
 
does the nightmare relate to anjali and adhvoot...
 
Why he has to trouble astha for that...
 
Poor astha...inspite of her worst condition...
 
she worse abt her parents...
 
Hope shlok wont trouble her more...
 
Why and what adhvoot is trying to hide from the police...
 
Thanks for the wonderful treat ...


Posted: 9 years ago
Another deep dark and techy mind controlling. spine tingling bass throbbing teaser!Fantastic!
Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 13:
 
My god...u r a gifter writer dear...
 
I hate this shlok ...why he has to torture astha for the mistake her parents did...
 
inspite of her pleading so badly...still he continue to torture her...
 
who is this sanjana now...
 
what is shlok going to gain by doing this to astha...
 
while he get the happiness what he has lost...by doing this...
 
wont astha's scream and cry melt his heart...
 
Poor astha tried her best to defence herself from him...
 
he is too stronger than her...
 
why is adhvoot silent still...
 
why cant he open his mouth...when he know his daughter life is in danger...
 
thanks for the wonderful treat...
 
 
Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 14 Teaser:
 
Horrifying teaser...
 
so sanjana is shlok sister...
 
he has witness some monster troubling her...
 
is adhvoot the monster in sanjana's case...
 
 
Posted: 9 years ago
Oh..So he knows what he did...but doesnt know he is still alivešŸ˜²...Interesting!!!...Waiting

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