#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) - Page 21 | Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-
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thanks for pm 👍🏼

Thanks dear 😃 And you are welcome buddy! 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: avni4
I want to celebrate new year...dont give me heart stroke update soon yaar...shock pe shock...😈 Update soon or i will chase u in ur dreams...

Going to update tommorrow avni! 😈 And a big earthquake coming your way! 😆

And you are welcome dear to chase me in my dreams but buds you'll be trapped in a devil's dream! 😈😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akashavani
Mahi...waiting for more ...loved it ...both...darkest secrets and teaser...can't write more ...my system working up...4th time to post it ...Tfs ...looking for Ur next update..

Thank you so much vani! 🤗 Am going to update tommorrow! 😉

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sathuraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 5:

Astha...did a mistake by pouring coffee on his face...

on top she started developing story and sheering crocodile tears...

my god...why she has to behave like this...

she is going to pay back for this act...

I wonder why shlok kept quiet...

Lucky the old woman save him on time...

otherwise the public would have created a lot of issue...

Is shlok reaction is silent before storm...

will get my answer in the following chapter ...

will read the rest soon dear...

Thanks for the beautiful treat...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Chapter 5:

Astha...did a mistake by pouring coffee on his face...

on top she started developing story and sheering crocodile tears...

my god...why she has to behave like this...

she is going to pay back for this act...

I wonder why shlok kept quiet...

Lucky the old woman save him on time...

otherwise the public would have created a lot of issue...

Is shlok reaction is silent before storm...

will get my answer in the following chapter ...

will read the rest soon dear...

Thanks for the beautiful treat...

Thank you so much sat! 🤗 I must say i love your detailed comments! 😉

Was really waiting for you! 😉

And you are welcome dear! 😉 Take your time no worries! 😉

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sathuraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 6:

another amazing update dear...

Why shlok want to take revenge her...is there any past incident...

Astha getting nightmare and cant able to come out the incident...

So shlok has planned something big for astha...

OMG...he is already angry with her now the coffee incident added fuel to it...

Astha still worried abt shlok...and didnt came back to reality...

she even forgot watch the out of order notice...

Shlok followed her to the bathroom...

Guess he is going to acheive what he wants...

Thanks the wonderful treat...

will read the rest soon...

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priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Why choco chip..why
Teasing with teaser 😡

And ur playing smart... not mentioning a word about ashlok in ur teaser.. han? 😳
Avdhooth... I think am gonna hate him like anything... 🤣

Can't wait to read... Starving for my dose my choco crunch 😔

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avni aaradhya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

Going to update tommorrow avni! 😈 And a big earthquake coming your way! 😆

And you are welcome dear to chase me in my dreams but buds you'll be trapped in a devil's dream! 😈😆

Hehehe this vampire willbe happy to get traped...😈😃

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sathuraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 7:

A hot update...

Shlok...my god...he approach towards astha was so aggroant...

Poor Astha...was helpless...

he was so satisfied after getting what he want..

Astha...what is going to happen to her now...

why he marked red cross against her Id card...

why he is so angry with her...

anyway will get to know them soon...

But my dear...u r a gifted writer...

so well written...

Thanks for the wonderful update...

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sathuraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 8:

Amazing update dear...

Astha locked herself in the room for 2 days...not able to come out of the shock...

Poor girl... she cant share anything with her mom... not to wrosen the sutiation...

Shlok was in his den...after successful completing his plan...

everything was well planned and executed by shlok...

he acheived what he want...

he has his men around astha...

as soon as she agreed to come to bonfire...

he has started planning...and given the instruction to his men..

so well written dear...

thanks for the wonderful treat...

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