#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) - Page 17 | Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir

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This content was originally posted by: coolhi1988
congratulations 4 2nd thread...

Thanks dear! 😃

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This content was originally posted by: deepavasudev
A poem by DV..

I was all alone.
complete spoilt brat.
when and how this thing
happend to me
beauty was a beast..
the beauty internal and external
the fake and the real
i pretended and made beleve many
that i was a
innocent but all were ignorant
that i was the sinner and the beast..
the beast when it unleashed its power
of supermacy , dominance, aggressivness and
MAIN SADISM of
enjoying the suffering of other i dint know..
they suffered ,,but i enjoyed and lauhged ..
it gave me pleasure..
loads of it..

NOW somebody was doing the same with me..
i was feeling pity for him
i said i will ease ur pain ..
coz i know that u are a sadist and deep down under

u are hurt ..
u are hurt.. so much that..
ur feelings becmae numb .. the feelings.. comes out as lust and passionate or aggressive passionte
in love making..

i was not a stone.. i became stone. .

i will try to ease ur pain baby ..
bring it on...
i will become one of u..

might be we both together find answers for our
OTHER SIDE..

WHICH ONLY US KNOW.. NONE ELSE..

BEST OF LUCK ,

LVOE ASTHA..

Thanks Deeps! 😉 I understood the poem completely! 😉

Thank you for writing it for Astha! 😉

It's true she is not an ordinary girl they are not the darkness and the light, infact they both are dark, darkness attracts darkness, pain attracts pain, they are the one and the same Astha and Shlok, one beast and the other not a beauty but a sadist too...

Once they'll understand each other they'll know that they are the same and then they'll make peace with each other...

Thanks again Deeps 😉 for showing what Astha feels, people can't see the other side where they live, that's beyond the veil, beyond their imagination...

These lyrics suit them both Astha and Shlok: 😉

We made a cut without precision
And we stiched it up the best two children could
But we were ruled by indecision
And we pushed and pulled more than two people should

When you want me I am here
When you change your mind again and disappear
When it's settled and all is clear
Oh, you change your mind again and want me near

So do me damage or do me right
We could be the ones who see the other side
So do me damage or do me right
We could be the only lovers left alive

We made a pact and sad forever
Then we blurred the lines so much, we lost our way
We were broken and stuck together (stuck together)
Then we tried to find the reasons we should stay

When you want me I am here
Then you change your mind again and disappear

So do me damage or do me right
We could be the ones who see the other side
So do me damage or do me right
We could be the only lovers left alive

When it's settled and all is clear
When you want me I am near
When you say that you're mine I come running everytime

So do me damage or do me right (do me right)
We could be the ones who see the other side (other side)
So do me damage or do me right (do me right)
We could be the only lovers left alive
(So do me damage, do me right)
We could be the only lovers left alive
We could be the only lovers left alive

Edited by mahirmukhtar - 9 years ago

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This content was originally posted by: vj3072
mahi it is getting interesting day by day...I felt bad for Shlok 😭 so much pain..thks for pm

Thanks VJ for sharing your views! 😉 And you are welcome buddy! 🤗

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This content was originally posted by: Efinah36
Wow i'm speechless and in shock
What a twist loved it Awesome Update
Aastha how cruel didn't expect this. Now She pays for her torture and cold behave
Poor shlok
but aastha is innocent in her fathers case. Hope shlok realize his mistake
Aastha and shlok the psycho pair 😆
Update soon dear

Thanks dear 😉 i told you there's a dark and twisted love and they both are flawed beyond imagination! 😈

They both are innocent sinners, beast and the not so innocent beauty, they pay for each other's mistakes, because you see what goes around always comes around... 😉

And yep Ashlok are truly a couple made in hell! 😆

And will update soon dear! 😉

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This content was originally posted by: whitelily
awesome update 👏

Thanks dear! 😃

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This content was originally posted by: DEVU.NAIR
congrats for the new thread mahi🤗

a lot to catch up,will comment soon😉

Thank you so much Devu 🤗

You take your time buddy, no worries! 😉

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This content was originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
I am so happy that he didn't rape her and that he stopped when she told him to save himself and do not give her and him the pain of this cruel act
Loved that aastha despite of being afraid and so on cupped his face in her hands and pleaded him to stop himself from doing something he would regret one day
From something that would break his soul
Continue soon pls

Thanks dear for sharing your views! 😉 I told you that he won't be able to rape her, once Astha and Shlok understand each other they'll be at peace then, both are one and the same, a truly hellish couple, they both will heal each other...

And ofcourse will update soon dear! 😉

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This content was originally posted by: .Biggi.

You are welcome dear 🤗

    Update!!! (Thank god..right emoji this time) 😉😆
But i see your Aastha is not like our sweet and innocent Aastha!

   TO ALL!!!!

Thanks biggi! 🤗 Very cute emoji's especially the dancing santa! 😉

And yep you are right she isn't innocent infact they both are not innocent at all, they both are dark characters! 😉

And Merry Christmas to you too dear! 😃

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This content was originally posted by: deepavasudev
Biggi..

Superb..

it is really matching her FF...
till last chapter..

From the current chap Astha dominates..

chk for some pic reversal..

Yep Deeps it's really matching the FF. 😉

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This content was originally posted by: srilotus

Mahi, masala fiction...darkest ever read👏
hats off👏👏

Thank you so much my Nirma Rani! 🤗

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