#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) - Page 11

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by hajr


Great update 
Poor Astha. 
Glad that Shlok stop b4 something happens 

Thanks dear for sharing your views! πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Subhashini_chow


The quote is very apt to update πŸ˜Š
Both Pics are good but I like the beauty and beast one most πŸ˜›
Mahi wonderful Update ..Super shocked 
enjoyed the update Thourougly πŸ˜‰
Astha is have so much cruel πŸ˜‘ incnnocent ANIMALS AND inncocent Ppl suffered coz of her cheap thrills 
Now she regretting what she done but wrong time Baby πŸ˜• 
Shlok I still not agree with his action... B*****D...
U have no right to abuse a girl physically if u suffered a lot in past
that be who is not related to U r pain 😑 
anyway he relized  her pain ..regreting some instinct ...
did he retain his Mercy on Astha in next Updates too? 
or still believe in hurting her to gain his revenge? πŸ˜•

Thanks dear! πŸ˜‰ Told you would shock you! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

They are perfect for each other both sadists a couple truly made in hell! πŸ˜ˆ

Yep Shlok was not right in his actions but atleast he left her! πŸ˜‰

And by hurting her do you mean rape, no he won't do that but he won't be merciful too!

He will tone down a bit now as he has started having flashbbacks! πŸ˜‰
Posted: 9 years ago
OMG what would happen now please update soon i am dying to read more πŸ˜” i am feeling very bad for astha poor soul do noy deserve that 😭 and i am more curious now what is hidden in shlok's dark past Edited by Sumayya_Ejaz - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Mahir, that was a brilliant update on X'mas day. Merry Xmas to you. 
Aastha is such a complex person and selfish at the core. She realized her truth and tried to save Shlok so that she could save herself. Wah ...wah... She showed her cruel streak when she admitted her deepest secret that she tortured animals for fun. An imperfect girl who lies, cheats to get her way.

The almost rape was described perfectly. My guess is that Avdhoot was part of the gang that raped / killed his tai and he is now taking revenge on all those perpetrators. By kidnapping and raping Aastha, he will avenge his tai.

That is why Avdhoot is pale on seeing the note and the email. πŸ˜‰
Edited by nim_var - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by avni4


Me first...unres
...first of all merry Christmas...⭐️ 
Coming to the update...my standing ovation to uπŸ‘
Unless we through the same pain until then we wont bother about others pain...same is depicted excellently by u...
The dark story with dark secrets...looking forward to ur updates...love u

And a merry christmas to you too dear! πŸ˜ƒ

Thank you so much avni for giving such lovely comments and appreciation! πŸ€—

Will try to update soon πŸ˜‰ and luv u too swetheart! πŸ˜‰
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Sumayya_Ejaz


OMG what would happen now please update soon i am dying to read more πŸ˜” i am feeling very bad for astha poor soul do noy deserve that 😭 and i am more curious now what is hidden in shlok's dark past

Thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ will try to update soon! πŸ˜‰

And Astha is not poor dear πŸ˜‰ she is a borderline psychotic πŸ˜† these two devils Astha and Shlok deserve each other! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Mahi Forgot to tell u 
Merry Christmas β€οΈ
and this song is dedicated to like U sweet devil πŸ˜ƒ


Edited by Subhashini_chow - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Subhashini_chow


Hey Mahi Forgot to tell u 
Merry Christmas β€οΈ
and this song is dedicated to like U sweet devil πŸ˜ƒ



And a Merry Christmas to you too sweatheart! πŸ€—

And i loved both songs the devil within and fear the feverπŸ˜› , love those type of songs πŸ˜‰, thanks dear a great christmas gift from you! πŸ€—

That song the devil within reminded me of Dance With The Devil, that too is a dark song just like that πŸ˜›, i made an Ashlok Vm on that, posted in the forum, hmmm! πŸ€” i think in october! πŸ˜‰

Edited by mahirmukhtar - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by mahirmukhtar




Thanks dear πŸ˜ƒwill try to update soon!πŸ˜‰

And Astha is not poor dear πŸ˜‰she is a borderline psychotic πŸ˜†these two devils Astha and Shlok deserve each other!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Really now i am more excited to learn how they two get together in future πŸ˜‰
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by mahirmukhtar



And a Merry Christmas to you too sweatheart! πŸ€—

And i loved both songs the devil within and fear the feverπŸ˜› , love those type of songs πŸ˜‰, thanks dear a great christmas gift from you! πŸ€—

That song the devil within reminded me of Dance With The Devil, that too is a dark song just like that πŸ˜›, i made an Ashlok Vm on that, posted in the forum, hmmm! πŸ€” i think in october! πŸ˜‰

I like that VM Dance with Devil ..I watched so many times ..i know thats Vm is Urs πŸ˜ƒ..Shlok has really  grey shaded person in that  

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