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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127)

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Posted: 23 December 2014 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
           Ashlok Dark FF 
        My Ransacked Heart



Hi,

Ashlokians Big smile welcome to my second thread of Ashlok Dark FF My Ransacked Heart! Hug

When i first started writing the FF i was really afraid that maybe i will fail to please you or won't be able to continue at all. It's dark, twisted and ofcourse very disturbing even to me. 

I am the writer but even i've having nightmares after i started writing it! LOL But you see that's reality, world's bitterest, cruelest truth but a truth after all, no doubt on that...

Criminals are made not born, God never ever will make an evil soul and let a human give birth to it. It's our choices that makes us who we are... 

Some are made criminals when they have to survive, some are made when they fall in the evil call of money and power and some are forced by the world to turn into one... 

The world is a twisted and dark place what happens, when it does happen and why does it happen we have no reason to define it!

But beware what you have done in your past because your every cruel act will come back to haunt you, guilt will destroy you and your past will finally kill you...

And lastly i want to thank all my best buddies who encouraged me on every step of my way, gave me hope to write more and to take a risk of writing such a dark concept and ofcourse my well wishers who came for more and more to read my writing and to give such lovely and wonderful comments...

Enough of my blabbering...LOLLOL

Welcome i must say this is all for you dearies! Wink Enjoy your ride through a criminals dark mind, it twists and turns will surprise you and it's darkness will shock you to the core...Wink

P.S: People who want me to pm them please like the post! Big smile and ofcourse the pic too! Evil SmileROFLROFL

                 


Edited by mahirmukhtar - 16 January 2015 at 11:43pm

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                   Look into the abyss~and i will show you the                                 dark~vile~perverse secrets that are inside of us both~                                     
                                                            INDEX
                                       
                                                 First Thread 
                                Chapter 14: Teaser (scroll down)
                                Chapter 14: The Darkest Secret
                                Chapter 15: Teaser
                                Chapter 15: Author's Note
                                Chapter 15: Exiled Memories
                                Chapter 16: Twisted Lies
                                Chapter 17: The Little Death
                                Chapter 18: The Devil's Bargain
                                Chapter 19: Downfall Of Master Player
                                Chapter 20 & 21: Author's Note
                                Chapter 20: Burning Ice
                                Chapter 21: Burning Alive
                                Chapter 22: Mirror, Mirror
                                Chapter 23: The Joker
                                Chapter 24: Game Over
                                               Third Thread
                                              Fourth Thread












Edited by mahirmukhtar - 18 February 2015 at 8:00am

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           Ashlok Dark FF
       My Ransacked Heart



                   ...Teaser...


A girl shrieked somewhere in his consciousness, the boy opened his startled eyes and screamed in horror...

"No tai nooo", he screamed with pain...

She was lying their twisted, bruised, in her own pool of blood, her torn chunni (scarf) lying nearby, a broken look in her still open eyes...

And the monsters were laughing, her blood dripping from their mouths...

The boy fell on her still body, his hands got covered with her blood and he watched with horror as her blood started to spread upwards from his hands, covering his whole body like tentacles of an octopus, pouring in his nostrils, his mouth,his heart ,burning like lava, scorching his insides...

Nooo save her pleaseee, don't let her die, the boy screamed as his whole body caught fire...




Edited by mahirmukhtar - 21 January 2015 at 9:39pm

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Originally posted by potomac

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Thanks dear! Wink Just going to decorate! WinkLOL

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Originally posted by .SajnaVe.

Congrats on the New thread

Thanks dear! Big smile

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Omg ... That's Anjali or sanjana Cry Shlok is the boy ... It's his nightmare .. Interesting mahi.. Can't wait dear Smile

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