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TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED (Page 5)

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
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Sorry guys i am busy these days. . 
I will try to update soon. .
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Hey dr. I just read ur story it is awesome. I read alll d chapters in just 1 go. All the chapters are superb. I liked it. Eagerly waiting for the next update. Please update soon n plz pm me when ever you update the next part. 

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TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED
CHAPTER - 12
taarey bid each other a good night and soon all were slept. ..
Next morning
In hall
Taani : sharon i guess girls mein sirf Simmi ka luggage bacha hai. 
Sharon : ha but boys mein toh kisi ka luggage nahi aaya hai. 
Boys accept Reyam came from the back and said. .
Boys : here we are totally ready. 
They came with their luggage of course. 
Reyam came from the outside as they were preparing there to leave. 
Swayam : ok f9 sab ready hai so let's leave. 
Taani : bhai mein bas ek min mein aayi mera bag upar reh gaya. 
Swayam : ok f9. 
Rey : tab tak hum sab apna luggage set karte hai. 
Swayam : ya
Taani went upstairs to take her bag. 
She took her bag and then moved towards her bed where she had kept her krishanajis idol. 
Taani : hey krishanaji! Yeah decision mere liye bahut bada hai. Mein apni zindagi mein pehle hi bahut galat decisions le chuki hu aur khud ko aur dusro ko bahut hurt kiya hai meine. .I really want ki plz mera yeah decision galat mat proof ho. 
Swayam : taani! Kaha ho. 
Taani : aa rahi hu bhai
Taani took the krishanajis idol and kept it in her bag and moves out of her room. 
In garden area all were standing .
Taanis new gang came. 
Gang : are Taani tu hame bina mile ja rahi hai not fair. 
Taani : pagal ho kya tum logo ko bina mile kaise jaa sakti hu. 
Vishal : are swayam bhaiya aap logo ko hum pura jodhpur kaha ghuma sake aur fir kitni saari yaha ki achi cheeze hai jo aapne taste bhi nahi ki so yeah hai woh sab.
Vicky took bag from vishal
Vicky : aur ye bag piche rahega. .
Simmi snatched bag from vicky
Simmi : taaki tum sab kuch pehle hi saaf kar lo. 
Nahi ye bag beech wali seat par rahega. 
Vicky : toh tum log hamari liye kuch nahi bachaoge. 
Like this all accept taashareyam started fighting 
Reyam tried to stop them but couldn't. 
Taani shouted : guyyys quiiite Quite all of you! !!
All looked at taani like how could she shout like this she never  does so. 
Taani : guys ladna band kariye yeah bag sabse aage wali seat pe rahega jab khana hoga tab khulega. 
Swayam : ha. 
All nodded. .
Rs : so all set guys. 
Taayam : ya 
Taani and swayam bent down and touched rs feet and took blessings. ..
Rs : taani bete give yourself a new start. . Tum apne chalenge se lado lekin khud ko pressurise mat karna. ..
And swayam this time I am warning you take proper care of my princess ...
Rey you take care ki is swayam ke andar ka possessive bhai meri princess ki khushiyon ke aage na aaye. .
And sharon last but not the least tum diva sharon banke in sab ko line pe le aana khas karke swayam ka kyuki tumhe woh mana nahi bolega. ..
Swayam : kya papa aap bhi. .
Gang giggled and at the same time raised hands for chemistry. 
When rs saw it
RS : are tum logo ne haath upar kyu kar rakhe hai. 
Vicky : wohhh !ha woh mein puchne wala tha hamare liye bhi aapke koi suggestions jaise rey sharon swayam sabko mile. 
Rs : bilkul hai aap log hamesha mere bacho ke saath rehna and apni masti zaari rakhna ...
For taani and Swaron touched rs feet and all were ready to leave.
Now the car arrangement is as rey is driving then swayam is on driving seat. . Beside rey is taani next is sharon then Simmi on the back seat beside Simmi is nil then vicky and on  on in front of them are amar and rinni. ..
All were driving usually. .
Vicky : hey rey radio on kar na bor ho raha hai plz
Rey : sure. 
Rey tunned radio onn. 
It played the song MITWA
As soon as the song started taarey glanced each other. 
The song started for taarey it took them to their own world. 
All  the best memories came to them. 
Their first meet . Taanis proposal reys rejection. .  Taani and reys article. Taani ka rona rey ka taani ke liye sabse ladna taani ki care rey ke liye taani bina kisi ki fikar kiye rey ka haath pakad kar use  medical room le jaana. .Taani ka rey ki dressing karna Dono ke beech woh proximity. Taani ka shivam ke saath false relationship. Taani ka rey ki dressing ke liye fikar karna rey ks mana karna sab kuch everything was running in their minds both taarey were thinking of that only. . 
Rey through the front mirror was looking at taani and hence both of them were looking straight into each other's eyes. ..
The music ended the song was over. 
Swayam shaked rey that's when rey came back to their senses. 
Rey : kyaa hua? 
Swayam : dhyan kaha hai tera vicky kab se bol raha hai ki radio channel change kar par tu hai ki pata nahi Kis dunia mein hai. 
Rey : kuch nahi bas driving pe dhyan tha. 
Sharon : rey safe driving is good but blank driving is foolish. 
Rey : ha ha so funny. .
While all this talk taani didn't even raised her head above. It was not unnoticed by all but nobody wanted her to force herself to be normal in front of them...
They wanted her to give herself some time so nobody asked her. .
After the matter was over rey and taani didn't dared to look at each other or to be convenient none had the guts. 
Now those memories were no more a past to them. ..may be aroused something or denied many things. .
Both were not able to face each other because of the old feelings getting awaked into their hearts or the new feelings they we're feeling for each other. ...
Lots of questions too much to understand but nothing too say. ...
They travelled for some time more. ..
Finally they took a stop to have their lunch. 
Swayam shaked taani a bit through her leg
Swayam : taani! Utho chalo khana khane jaana hai. 
Taani : bhai muje bahut neend aa rahi hai. .aap kha lo muje bhook nahi. .
Reyam we're a bit relieved that somewhere taanis innocence was coming back! !!
Swayam : muje  pata hai ki tum sleeping beauty ho lekin abhi chalo khana khane. 
Saying so he left with sharon for the dhabha. 
All except taarey left
Only taarey we're in the car. Because rey to was tired of driving so long. 
Rey came out of the car and said, let's go. 
He went straight but then found that taani is not with him. 
So again went back to the car. .
Rey : taani kya kar rahi ho chalo na sab wait kar rahe hai. 
Taani :  are yeah fas gaya mein kaise utaru. .
Looking at her dupatta that was stuck in the backseat .
Rey : Ruko mein try karta hu. ..
Taani was seating on the seat of the car and rey bent down at her side to take out her dupatta. ..
After a while rey was successfull in  taking her dupatta back. .
Rey was going to get straight and at the same time taani bent to check. ..
They we're so close to each other their faces where inches apart. ..
Both were caught in an eye lock ..
Both were trying to  read each others  eyes. .. 
Both can sense the confusion of new feelings in each others eyes. ..

Their eyelock was broken by vickys voice
Vicky : guys come fast. ..
That's when both came back to senses. ..
Now both we're in an awkward silence. ..
Rey was the first to break the silence. .
Rey : tumhara dupatta  fas gaya tha nikal diya meine ab chale. .
Taani : ha. 
Both headed towards the dhabha. ...




NOTE :
Guy's pehle toh extremely sorry for late update i know I am very late this time but was busy with my school and coaching. ...
Okk  coming to the update i really wish ki it was upto your expectations. ..i have really tried to give my best. ..
Do leave your views. ..
Next chapter criteria will be
25+likes and 3 pages of cmmnt. ..
Aap log itna pasand karte ho is story ko toh itna toh banta hai rightLOLLOLWink

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Posted: 24 January 2015 at 4:06am | IP Logged
One more thing guys mein na is story ka subject name change kar rahi hu. ...to avoid confusion
It will be 
TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED. 

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nice update

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awsm update..

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