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TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED (Page 2)

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TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED. 
CHAPTER -7
all came out from visheshs house. 
Vishal : swayam aapke farm house ki keys hai mere pass so sab Wahi chalte hai. 
Rey : but taani! !
Vishal : rahul tu ek kam kar girls and baaki sab ko lekar farm house ke liye nikal. Mein rey aur swayam taani ko dhondh kar lekar aate hai. 
Sharon : nahi hum ghar kaise ja sakte hai Jab tak taani nahi mil jaati. 
Swayam : sharon woh theek keh raha hai. Is waqt waise bhi taani ko lekar muje bahut tension ho rahi hai. 
Pata nahi woh Kis haal mein hogi khud sambhal payegi bhi ya nahi. 
Aise mein itne saare logo ka Itni raat ko ghumna is not right. 
Vishal : aur girls ki safety is important. 
You guys go hum pakka taani ko lekar aate hai. 
Swayam : tab tak ritika shanaya tum log ek kam karo na Un sab logo ko call karo whom you think taani must be with. 
Vishal rey (together):uski koi zarurat nahi. 
Rey : right now woh akele rehna chahegi. 
Vishal : woh kisi ke pass nahi jaane wali. 
Rahul : chalo let's leave. 
Tum log jao taani ko dhondhe. 

With taani. (Her dress is the same she wears in sagai in the show do check the pic)
Taani was hurt angry too many emotions were going on in her. ..
She was driving the car too speed. At 150. .  Her car got crashed with a big tree in front. 
Taanis head bent down once. 
She stood up. 
Taani to herself. 
Stop it just stop it. Kyu kar rahi hu mein ye sab.  Bas muje khud ko sambhalna hoga. Yes I have to.  Warna bhai aur baaki sab. Tauji khud ko blame karenge in sab ke liye ...
Bas wipes her tears. 
She comes down from the car. And goes to a nearer pco. 
She dials a number. 

With gang
As decided all went only Reyam and vishal are left. 
Swayams phone rangs
Swayam : hello. 
Taani : bhai mein taani bol rahi hu. 
Swayam : taani tum tum theek ho na kaha ho tum 
Taani : ha bhai mein theek hu meri gaadi band pad gayi Hai aap vishal ko phone do mein samjhati hu usse ki mein kaha hu pls pick me from here. 
Swayam : Haa ok one min
Vishal ye le taani se baat kar.
Taani tells him where she is then the trio went to pick taani. 

With taani. 
There was a garden in front so she went there. 
Taani sat there on grass with her legs folded partially by which her head was touching her chin. 
Taani was in deep thought. 
Soon trio came there. They first pepper to see taani. Taani was blank there was no expression on her face. 
Swayam heded forward. 
Swayam : taani tumhari car ka accident kaise hua. 
 Tum theek  toh ho. (it was hidden tone of asking her situation mentally too regarding vishesh matter)
 
Taani : bhai. mein theek hu woh bas break kharab tha toh gaadi ki thokar ho gayi. 
Isliye toh meine aap logo ko bulaya. 
Then she saw rey. Her eyes automatically searched for ground. She lowered her eyes. 
Swayam : taani jo hua woh. 
He was interrupted. 
Taani : bhai ghar chalte hai na i am very tired. 
Swayam understood that she don't want to talk about it. 
Swayam : okk chalo gadi mein baitho. 
Now rey was driving the car. Taani was seating just at her back side. Swayam was next to taani and vishal was seating at another frontier seat. 
Rey could clearly get a view of taani through the mirror. 

There was complete silence in the car. Rey was looking taani. Swayam was also looking at her through side eye (you know)
Taani pov
Plz don't look at me. Mein kuch nahi kehna chahti.  Meri galti kya hai krishanaji kyu har baar mere saath aisa hota hai mein jitna aage badhne ki koshish karti hu dungi raftar se peche girti hu. Kyu jab mein thoda confident feel karti hu mere pairo tale zameen sarak jaati hai kyu? ...why me always. 

Their house came. 
Swayam : taani ghar aa gaya. (As she was lost so he said)
Taani : ha. 
They get down of car. 
They went inside the house. 
All looked at taani to speak she was quite. 
Sharon : taani tum theek ho na
Taani : ha I am okk. 
Then shanays phone rang. 
She received call it was vishesh. 
Shanaya : guys vishesh ka phone hai usse taani se baat karni hai. Speaker pe dal ne bol raha hai dalu? 
Swayam : usse toh mein baat karta hu. (Angry)
Taani : ek minute dal phone speaker pe looking at shanaya. 
Shanaya did as she said. 
All were like why the he'll is she listening him. 
Vishesh : don't you dare cut my call. Muje pata hai abhi tum sab ke dimag mein plan chal raha hoga ki muje sabak kaise seekhaya jaye. But wait,  kuch karne ka sochna bhi mat warna mein jo karunga na woh tumhe kahi ka nahi chodega taani. 
Rey : teri himat kaise hui phone karne ki. Vishesh : apne aashiq ko samjha do limit mein rahe. 
Swayam : zubaan sambhal ke baat kar warna tuje mein zinda nahi chodunga. 
Vishal : i am proud ki mein hamesha tujse nafrat karta tha. Tuj jaisa ladka taani ke pyaar ke layak hi nahi. 
Vishesh : koi bhi step lene se pehle consequences ke baare mein soch lena. Aur rahi baat taani ki toh uske jaisi character less ladki koi nahi hai.  Pehle rey se pyaar kiya phir mujse shadi ki don't worry bahut jald ise new bf bhi mil jayega. 
Swayam : how dare you teri aukaat yaad dilake rahunga mein tuje ukhad le jo ukhad sakta hai. And he cuts the phone. 
After all this taani was totally shattered. 
She ran out from the place to upstairs in her Reyam followed her to stop her but couldn't. 
She ran upstairs crying and reached the room and closed the door. 
Reyam are outside and taani is inside the room. 
Swayam : taani plz darwaza kholo. 
Rey : taani yaar plz listen. 
Taani(shouted from inside) : leave me alone. 
Vishal : guys let her cry out.  Warna woh ghut ghut kar Mar jayegi yaar. Uske saath jo hua hai bahut bada hai woh. 
Swayam : par woh khud ko. 
Rey : woh sahi bol raha hai Swayam.  Let her be alone kal subah usse baat karte hai. 
Swayam : ok f9. 
All went downstairs and we're sitting in the hall

With taani. 
She was shattered.  She just sat on her knees in shock. 
Taani : kaise vishesh kaise gir sakte ho aap itna.  I thought marring you was best kyuki mein aapko Bachpan se janti hu par nahi I don't. . I hate you i hate my self.  She stood up and looked herself in mirror. She took their engagement ring and threw on the mirror then the mangalsutra she snatched it from her neck. . She tried to remove sindhoor but it wasn't removed perfectly.  She was feeling disgust. .. She took the vass placed near her bed and threw it on her image in mirror. 
Then she messed the whole room. She broke everything not a single piece was left to be broken. ...
She cried alot. 

With gang
Sounds were coming from taanis room. Swayam and rey wanted to go but the gang stopped them. 

Soon sounds stopped coming. All fall asleep except rey. .

Taani too fall asleep while crying. 

It was 6 am rey thought to go and talk to taani. 
 
He went to taanis room. 
Rey : taani pls open the door. 
Rey said thrice then taani heard it the third time and then opened the door. 

She went back after opening it. 

Rey looked at the condition of the room. He has never seen taani in this condition. However she was angry but she never did all this ever before. 

Rey  then moves forward and hold taani through shoulder and  rotate her towards himself. He saw taani and was shocked. 
Taani was totally red of crying. Her eyes had so much pain and her face said she had lots of feeling inside. ..to say. ..

Rey : taani ye kya haal bana liya hai tumne apna. 
Taani was quite. 
Rey : plz look at me. Plz  galat woh ghatiya insaan hai usne tumhare saath galat kiya hai tum khud ko kyu sazaa de rahi ho. 
Plz apne liye na sahi mere liye hum sabke liye khud ko aur takleef mat do aur chot mat pahuchao plz. .. 
Taani still didn't looked in his eyes. 
Rey holded her wrist to make her speak something. 
Rey : tumhara haat itna garam kyu hai.
He touched her forehead .
Taani tumhe to fever hai. 
Before he could say anything she fainted in his arms. ..
Rey shouted. 
Rey : taani. 
By this voice of his all woke up in hall. Swayam rushed towards her room. 

Rey tried to wake up taani but she didn't responded.  He holded her in his arms in bridal style. 
Rey : swayam guys gadi nikalo taani behosh ho gayi Hai. ...
 
Soon all settled and took taani in car.
In the car vishal was driving. .
Rey was sitting with taani at back seat and swayam in front. ..
Swayam : rey kya hua isse.
Rey : pata nahi isse bahut tezz bukhar hai. Mein usse baat kar raha tha ki utni der mein year faint ho gayi. ...

Rey was rubbing taanis hands to provide her some heat. .
Swayam looked at her foot which was bleeding with blood. ...
They tried to wake her up but she didn't responded. 

They reached the hospital. Doctor immediately admitted taani. ..

Reyam and vishal were standing outside. 
Swayam : isliye mein kal se isse baat karna chahta tha i knew ki woh khud ko nuksaan pahuchaegi. ..
Vishal : ek baar taani theek ho jaye uske baad mein us vishesh ko Zinda gaad dunga. ...
 Doctor came out. .
Rey : doctor taani kaisi hai. 
Doctor: she is critical kafi khoon behind chuka hai pair se sure patient bahut weak bhi hai. .. hum abhi unhe glucose ki bottle chadha rahe hai. 
Aap log plz baaki formalities ko pura kar dijye. ..

Precap :
Taani decides to make vishesh pay for his deeds. And then all gang in Mumbai. 

NOTE
Sorry for late update
guys i know ki now all are waiting for taarey reunion lekin uske pehle kriyansh ko bhi toh end karna padega na... In show kria ne rey ko uske faiydee ke liye choda hai. But I have a twist in this story. ...

I know ki iss part ko padhne ke baad you will feel ki vishesh ko bina matlab drag kar rahi hu but trust me this will prove the best taani will give him the best answer for his deeds. 

Plz tell me ki kaisa laga in more than one word comment.. mein khud is part ko lekar 100% sure nahi hu. ... 
I hope it was upto your expectations. ..
 
Thanks a lot for your support. .. In the story...plz. do leave your views. .. 
Thank you
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TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED
CHAPTER - 8
All were told by the doctor that taani is very critical. .. 
Swayam : yeh sab meri galti hai muje use akele nahi rehne dena chahiye tha
 sharon : common swayam isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai. Kisi ne in longer dreams socha bhi nahi tha ki aisa bhi kuch hoga sab kuch itna jaldi aur itna weird taarike se hua ki koi sambhal nahi paya and also taani ko sambhalna possible nahi tha... She needed space and thats what we gave her. ...
Gang : exactly. 
Rey : swayam ye time khud ko kosne ka nahi hai. Iss waqt tuje khud ko sambhalna hoga because right now taani ko sambhalna zyada important hai. 
Swayam : ha mein khud ko sambhalunga .. i promise taani mein tumhe akele nahi chodunga. 
Rey : swayam koi taani ko akela nahi chodega,  hum sab uske saath hai. .
Swayam went to complete the formalities. ...

After 3 hours. 
Doctor went for a check up in taanis ward. 
Doctor: patient ko hosh aa gaya hai. Aap log unse mil sakte hai. . Par ek ek kar ke. ...
Swayam : thank you doctor thank you. ..
Doctor went away from there. 
Rey : swayam plz if you don't mind toh kya mein taani se pehle milne jau. 
Swayam : rey!  Dekh i am sorry par mein taani se milne tuje nahi jaane de sakta. .
Woh already apne relationship ki complications ke wajah se upset hai aur abhi tera usse baat karna use tere saath apna past dilaigi jo uske liye acha nahi hai we all know that...
Rey : swayam but try to understand. .
Sharon : swayam jaane do rey ko i am sure it will prove the best. Is waqt taani ko himmat ki zarurat hai aur abhi sirf rey usse sambhal sakta hai. Sometimes past ka samna himmat badhata hai Trust him. ..
Swayam : ok Rey I trust you. ..
Rey : thanx. 
Then rey went in taanis ward. 
Taani was sitting inside on the bed with the help of bedpost. ..
Rey : hey hi. 
Taani : hi. 
Rey : so how are you feeling now. 
Taani : good (she gave a majburi wala smile you know )
Rey : so? 
Taani : so? 
Rey : so
Taani : rey plz cut it down. 
Rey : exactly taani cut it down. 
Taani : what do you mean rey? ?
Rey : taani you very well know ki what I mean. 
Taani : leave me alone. 
Rey : ya taaki tum apni halat aur bigado
Taani : plz rey stop it. (She shouted)
Swayam wanted to go inside but was stopped by sharon. 
Here in taanis ward. 
Rey : you stop it taani. He shouted too. 
Taani was quite.( After all rey ke samne woh kuch nahi bol payegi after whatever happen)

Note
Next part of this chapter will be uploaded at night. .. plz thoda wait kar lo guys. .

For itf members
Guys i have seen your likes and comments on chapter 1&4 of my story till now today I have uploaded from 5 to 8 so do leave your views on all the chapter. ..
Also want to know that everybody is able to find chapter 2&3 also na if you have read it plz mention it and like those posts too thank you

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CHAPTER - 8 b
Rey : you stop it taani. He shouted too. 
Rey realised what he is doing. 
Rey : i am sorry. 
Taani sambhalo khud ko. .
Taani : plz rey just let it be.
Muje baat nahi karni. .
Rey : karni padegi taani. 
Taani ..
Rey went and sat next to taani.  He holded her hand. He was looking straight in her eyes. Taani too was looking in his eyes. 
To rey pain was clearly visible in taanis eyes. .
Rey : taani mat karo khud ko punish. . Tum kahi par bhi galat nahi ho. .
Tum ne more than your 100% diya hai is relation ko sambhalne ke liye. Sirf 9 days dekha hai meine tumhe aur vishesh ko ek saath aur phir bhi pure vishwas ke saath keh sakta hu ki tum sahi thi aur ho. 
Mein kya koi Andha bhi keh dega ye...
Tumhare  aur uske beech mein shuru se problem thi but tumne kabhi bhi kisi ko bhanak tak nahi lagne di,  koi bhi agar tumhari jagah hota toh ye nahi kar sakta. 
Taani : kya farak padta hai Rey sab khatm ho chuka. ..
Everything is over .
Rey : nothing is over taani. .. mein janta hu tum hurt isliye nahi ho ki tumhara aur vishesh ka relation tut gaya balki isliye kyuki tumhe taklif hui hai ki vishesh khud is relation ko accept nahi karna chahta tha aur blame tumhe kar raha tha. ..
Taani lowered her eyes and said
Taani : aisa kuch nahi hai
Rey : really toh ye meri aankhon mein dekh ke bolo. ..
Taani looked in his eyes and then she started crying out. .. She hugged him. 
And started speaking and letting her heart out. ..
Taani : ha Rey ha mein vishesh ko ek baar maaf kar bhi du ki unhonne jo bhi kiya apne pyaar ke liye kiya lekin unka abhi bhi har cheez ke liye muje blame karna bahut takleef deta hai muje. .. mein har baar unke taunts chup chap sunti rahi. . Apni galtiyo ko chupane ke liye woh muje blame karte rahe . Rey jab meine unse shadi ki thi muje laga tha mein unhe janti hu bachpan ke dost hai woh mere but shadi ke baad jaise kisi alag hi vishesh ke saath reh rahi thi mein. Unka abhi bhi muje character less kehna kaise gir sakte hai wo itna. ..
She was crying too much she could not bear that the person whom she trusted who she believed as her childhood friend has betrayed her like this he has just breaken her. 

Reys eyes was also wet looming at taanis condition..
He finally calmed her. 

Rey : shhh taani bas ab aur mat roo. 
Calm down. . Woh kya tumhe character less bolega uske character ki toh mein bajata hu. 
Taani : nahi rey aap aisa kuch nahi karoge. .in fact aap abhi bhai ko bhi rokoge. .plz
She took his hand and placed on her head
Taani : rey aapko meri ksam. ..
Rey : but taani
Taani : rey plz. .
Rey : fine lekin abhi toh tum soup piyo aur medicine lo. Swayam tumhe lekar bahut tense hai usse tumse milna hai. Mein chalta hu. .
Just take care of yourself. 
Taani nodded. 
Rey started walking towards the door. 
Taani stopped him. 
Taani : rey! 
Rey : ha taani. .
Taani : thanx aap sach mein bahut ache ho. Agar Aapki jagah koi aur insaan hota toh woh apni ex girlfriend ko is situation mein sirf char baate sunnane hi aata. ..you are really the best person I have ever met. 
Rey (playfully) : i know taani I am the best. 
Both exchanged a smile and rey moved out of the room. .
Then the nurse came in and kept taanis soup and medicine there .
After that Swayam went to meet taani. 
Swayam : hi Taani
Taani : hi bhai. .
Swayam : ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai. 
Taani : i am feeling much better bhai. 
Swayam : taani i am really sorry,  tum itna kuch tolerate kar rahi thi aur mein apni life mein itna busy tha ki tumhari aankhon mein chupi takleef ko samajne ki koshish hi nahi ki. .. tum hamesha mere saath thi jab bhi muje zarurat thi but mein i was never there for you. 

Taani : you are right bhai.   Aapne bahut saari galtiyan ki hai and you must be punished. .
Swayam : of course I should be. 
Taani : toh Aapki punishment yeh hai ki jab tak mein hospital mein hu aap hi muje breakfast lunch aur dinner karwaoge. Aur abhi muje soup pilaoge. 

Swayam smiled at this and started feeding her. 
Soon the gang entered and hooted looking at the awesome bro sis bond. 

Note
Part c will be uploaded at night. And do comment on all the parts guys then only i will upload. .

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TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED
CHAPTER - 9
Two days have passed on. .
Now taani Is better and she has been discharged. 
Third day morning. 
At taayam house where entire gang is also there. Except new gang. 

In morning
Taani was busy preparing breakfast in the kitchen and was also doing some other morning chores. .
Swayam : taani tum kya kar rahi hu. 
Taani : bhai mein nashta bana rahi hu. 
Swayam : woh muje bhi dikh raha hai. But mein ye puch raha hu ki tum ye kyu kar rahi ho itne servants hai woh kar lenge. Tumhe doctor ne rest karne ko kaha hai. Remember, 
Taani : bhai mera maan tha isliye kar rahi hu and mein bilkul theek hu i don't want to take rest at all. 
Swayam : par taani! . (Was interrupted by taani)
Taani : bhai plz mein theek hu.  Just let it be. 
Then taanis phone rang. 
On phone
Taani : yes. 
So tum car mat bhejwao mein khud aa jaungi office. 
Taani disconnected the call. 
Swayam : office? ?
Rey : kiska office? ??
Sharon : ya kaisa office aur tumhari health taani. 
Gang too had a what is happening look. .
Taani : relax guys. . Mein office ja rahi Hu kargil war par nahi jo aap log itna tension kar rahe ho. . Mein vishesh ke office ja rahi Hu. ..technically apne office. 
Reyam : what? (Almost shouted)
Taani : what?  Plz i can handle. 
Swayam : no taani no ways tum nahi ja rahi ho. 
Taani : par bhai i need to try to understand. 
Swayam : nahi taani tum khud ko bahut hurt kar chuki ho ro chuki ho ab aur nahi. ..
Taani : exactly bhai bahut ro chuki hu an bari rulane ki hai. 
Rey : matlab
Taani : nothing woh bus emotions mein aake muh se nikal gaya. 
Bhai mana woh company unki hai but mera bhi waha kuch hai bas wohi lene jaana hai. 
Swayam : theek hai mein tumhe force nahi karunga rukne ke liye but yaa plz take care of yourself.  And plz is baar directly bata dena.  Apne dard ko chupana mat. 
Taani : hmm. Chalo I will leave i will catch you guys soon. 

In taavish office
Taani entered into the office with full attitude. 
She was broken inside but was successfull in keeping attitude on face. 
May be it was possible as a result of what rey did to her in past,  at least it was what she believed. .
She tried her best not to loose control. But the bad world amongst whom she was. ...
As soon as taani walked in all started talking about her and vishesh relation and leena being visheshs girlfriend. .

Taani  avoided this and moved directly to her cabin. ..
Taani was busy with some work when she heard some voice outside. .

At taayam house
Swayam : Yar muje taani ko akele nahi jaane dena tha.  Pata nahi woh theek hogi ya nahi. 
Sharon : common swayam she is a mature girl, she could handle. 
Rey : no sharon muje bhi bahut bad feeling aa rahi hai pata nahi kyu? 
Vicky : guys let's go to taanis office. Waise bhi yaha ye Dono (Reyam ) shanti se rehne toh denge nahi. 
Reyam stood up immediately. 
Rey : ya chalo
Swayam : mein gaadi nikalta hu sab aao jaldi. .
They moved for office. 

At taavish office. 
Taani moved out of her cabin to see what's happening. 
( I forgot to tell earlier vikrant is taanis secretary)
Leena: vikrant tumse koi kam theek se nahi hota na. 
Vikrant:shut up yaar Jan bhuj kar nahi kiya aur coffee puri muj par giri hai so why are you shouting. Pagal ho kya
Leena:don't try to become over smart. Sab pata hai muje ye sab Jan bhuj kar karwaya ja raha hai muje hurt karne ke liye mein kisi aur ki mistakes ki punishment nahi handle karne wali hu. 
Vikrant: you know what go and consult a psychiatrist. ...
Both started fighting and the whole office was looking over it. 
Taani came and shouted 
Taani : shut up both of you.  You guys are not standing in a fish market better remember it. 
Get into my cabin now and everybody get back to work taani ordered. 
In taanis cabin
Vikrant: sorry (leena interrupted and said it's ok be careful next time)
Vikrant: excuse me I didn't apologise you i said it to mam. .
Taani : leena behave yourself, vikrant zyada hamesha tum coffee girati ho so better behave. 
Vishesh came from back and said
Vishesh : why should she behave. . Can't your secretary behave and may be she is right use janbhuj kar chot pahuchayi ja rahi ho kisi aur ka Ghussa nikalne ke liye. 
He taunted taani. 
By now Reyam and gang has also arrived. 
They were standing at the Door but taani didn't notice them
Leena moved towards vishesh stood beside him and said. .
Sir that's what I am saying ab aapke aur mam ke issues mein muje punish kiya jayega toh mein bolungi toh na. 

Taani was shocked she knew they were cheap but this was beyond limit how could they make a scene in front of entire office.  Therefore she was numb for sometime. 

Vishesh : waise kamal ke guts hai tumhare taani. Itna sab hone ke baad bhi tum muh uthakar is office mein aa gayi. .. kya hua divorce rukwane aayi ho ya compensation money ke liye.

Swayam : aaj ye nahi bachega nahi chodunga mein isse,
vicky nil were holding his hands to stop him from moving forward.
 Swayam : guys chodo muje

On going fight. 
Taani moved a bit forward and took a glass of water placed on the table and then made it empty on visheshs head. 

Vishesh : what the he'll

Taani : wake up Mr. Vishesh saigal. .. muh uthakar toh aayi hu aaj mein lekin tumhe muh ke bal girane ke liye. And compensation money toh chodo common use tak ke liye money nahi bachne wali tumhare pass. ... 
what do you think of yourself muje samaj nahi aata talent toh zero hai par attitude toh hero se bhi zyada marte ho tum. ..

Vishesh : taani itna aage mat bhadho ki baad mein regret karna pade. ...

Taani : regret toh tum karoge vishesh. 
Mein divorce rukwane nahi divorce jaldi karwane aayi hu . Tum muje nahi mein tumhe divorce de rahi hu. 
Aur ye divorce ab isliye nahi hoga kyuki according to you mein character less hu but isliye kyuki tumhare andar character naam ki cheez nahi hai.   

Vishesh : jab tak mein na chahu mein tumhe divorce nahi dunga. .

Taani : mat do... but then be ready to face me kyuki mein tumhe proper punishment zaroor dungi. ..
Leena : kar kya logi tum? 
Taani : employee ho so employee raho boss ke matters mein interrupt karne ki zarurat nahi.  Apni aukaat yaad rakho. .
Vishesh : taani! 
Taani : oh Ghussa aa raha hai i don't care.  Waise bata toh du ki mein kya karne wali hu. Shayad tum khud ko prepare kar lo. 

Sabse pehle toh mein vishesh mein tumhe iss office se nikal rahi hu so obviously leena tum bhi .Understood na (taani looked at leena)

Jis ghar mein tum rehte ho waha ka dhake maar kar nikale jaoge, 

Hearing this vishesh got angry and he moved towards taani to slap her. 
Vishesh : taani (shouted ) how dare you

Vishesh was about to slap taani when taani stopped him and slapped him back

THAP
vishesh was on the floor..
Taani : sochna bhi mat vishesh.  Ab mein woh taani nahi hu jo tumhe bardash karti rahungi rishte ko bachane ke liye. .

Everybody present there was shocked seeing taani so angry. 

Taani : bhaad mein gaye tum and he'll with this relation. .
As the head of 51% shares of the company I have decided tum aur leena yaha is office mein nahi rahoge, atleast till I am here. 
Vishesh stood up. 
Vishesh : taani jata hi diya tumne ki tum is well established company ko handle karne ke liye kitni desperate ho. 
Are agar himmat hai toh up coming bridal show  apne balbute par host karke dikhao aur best enterprenure ka award jeet ke batao. ...
Kya hua Dar gayi. 
Taani : sooch rahi hu tum apni haar ke liye kitne desperate ho.  Anyways challenge excepted. ...

Vishesh : let's see agar mein jeeta toh divorce tab hoga jab mein chahu aur agar tum jeeti toh mein khud jaake dad ko sab bataunga. .. 
Taani : deal.  
Taani forwarded her hand and vishesh shooked hand professionally accepting the challenge. 

NOTE
 Sabse pehle toh extremely sorry is baar update dene mein bahut late ho gaya so sorry. ..
Pata nahi chapter kaisa hai may be thoda boring ho because no taarey moments. .. but trust me there are awesome taarey moments waiting ahead. . ..
Competition track socha Nahi tha suddenly came into my mind so added. .. toh eagerly for your response on this. ..
Plz tell me ki kaisa laga
PRECAP
d3 gang help taani in this competition. 

ANOTHER IMPORTANT NOTE
"Help me" 
Guys as you know ki mein apne saare chapters  directly yaha likhti hu and I have no copyright of it. 
So can someone tell me ki mein in chapters ki document kaise banau. .
Tell me if you know. ..
 
Thanks and enjoy

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CHAPTER - 10
Taani and vishesh shaked hands professionally. 
Then taani moved to her cabin. As soon as taani walked in all the gang came front to vishesh. .Vishesh was scared seeing everybody but he didn't showed that on his face. 
Swayam heded forward and holded visheshs collar. 
Swayam : taani ne ksam di hai ki tuje woh khud handle karegi aur mein ismein na padu isliye tuje kuch keh nahi raha warna tera toh mein woh haal karu ki teri saari garmi utar jaye. 
Vishesh : do whatever you want darta nahi hu mein tum logo se. .
Swayam was about to answer him but suddenly a sound came. .well it was a sound of bell for the peon. 
The sound was from taanis cabin. 
The peon entered taanis cabin. 
As he opened the door taani saw the entire gang there. ..
Peon entered. 
Peon : ji mam
Taani : mere liye ek strong coffee. .Actually 15 coffee leke aaeye. .aur bahar vikrant ko boliye sab ko lekar andar aa jaye. 
Peon : ji mam
Peon went outside and did as taani said. 
Vikrant and entire gang moved towards taanis cabin. 
Gang was bit scared because taani had requested them not to come but they did came. 
All entered taanis cabin. 
Taani : hello guys come inside na. 
Gang made themselves comfortable in chairs and couch available. 
Taani : vikrant do one thing check everyone's phone outside that nobody should carry any video footage of whatever happened outside now. And if everyone carry so just destroy them. 
Everybody was surprised to see taanis totally high profile businesswoman thinking. ...
Vikrant : sure mam! !
Vikrant left from there and then peon came with coffee. 
Taani (to peon ): muje do empty cartoons la dijeyega. 
Peon left. 
Swayam : taani! Ye cartoons kyu? 
Before taani could reply gang started. 
Vicky : taani kahi tum hum logo cartoons mein band karke toh nahi bhejne wali. .
Nil : yaar lekin taani meri toh abhi tak gf bhi nahi bani and meine toh kisi ladki se ache se flirt bhi nahi kiya. 
Vishal : exactly yaar mera toh abhi tak career bhi nahi bana. 
Neha : Babu going where kagu also going the same place. 
Swayam : guys ho gaya tum logo ka usse bolne toh do. ..
Taani : Thnx bhai. Aap log itne bhi bure nahi ho ki mein aisa karu. 
Bharat : toh tu kehna kya chahti Hai hum bure hai! !
Amar : Haa yaal
Bharat : banta bure hai toh hai darte nahi hai hum tere se. 
Taani : are guys aap log galat samaj rahe ho mera kehne ka woh matlab nahi tha mein toh bas. ..
Vicky and nil started laughing louder and soon everybody joined them. .
Amar : taani hum mazak kar lahe the. ..
All started laughing. 
Suddenly sharon saw rinni she was in some deep thinking. 
Sharon : rinni kya hua? 
Rinni : sharon i am thinking ki hum itne saare log do cartoons mein kaise aayenge. ...
This was the limit taani to started laughing. ...All laughed. .
Taani : Okkk guys aap log ab ghar jao muje thoda kam hai mein khatm karke Milti hu ...
Swayam : taani! Are you sure
Taani : of course bhai i am 100 % sure. . 
Swayam : ok f9. ..
All left from taanis cabin

Taani gathered her personal things from that cabin.. and leaved that office. .
Vikrant also said that he would work with taani and not with vishesh so taani provided hin his resignation letter which was the last work of her as a member of visheshs company. ..

Taani reached home ...
Taani and all girls together made food and boys were doing their masti. ... 
Then all had their dinner. .
After the dinner all were sitting in hall and chit chatting when doorbell rang. 
Swayam : is waqt kon aaya hoga. 
Taani : bhai mein Dekhti hu. 
Taani went to open the door. 
As soon as door opened there was Rishi Shikhawat. 
Yes taanis tauji and swayams dad. 
Taani bent down touched his feet and took blessing. 
Taani : jai shri Krishna tauji! 
Rs : jai shri Krishna beta. .
Hearing his voice all came at the entrance. 
Swayam too bent and took blessing. 
Sharon went and touches taujis feet to take blessing. ..
Gang was surprised to see sharon behaving like a typical hone wali Indian bahu. ..
Gang to greeted rs! !!
Rs : ab yahi khade rehkar baat karoge ya muje andar bhi aane doge. 
Taani : ha chaliye tauji. .
All went inside and settled in. ..
Taani : tauji mein aapke liye adrak wali chai lati hu. 
And guys baaki sab ke liye coffee na. 
Reyam : (together ) : meri chai. ..
Taani : Okkk. 
Taani went inside ..
Here in hall
Rs : swayam taani kaisi hai beta? 
Swayam : theek hai papa actually woh jatane ki koshish kar rahi hai ki woh theek hai par woh hai nahi. 
Rs : muje lagta tha ki muje sahi insaan ki parakh hai par nahi mein galat tha meine apni bachi ka bhawishya aisa haatho mein de diya ko uski zindagi barbaad ho sakti thi. Agar sach ka pata nahi chalta toh woh saari zindagi ghut jaati. . .
Barbaad na sahi par uski zindagi kharab zaroor ki hai meine. ...
Swayam : nahi papa aap khud ko blame mat kijiye, ismein Aapki koi galti nahi hai. 
Kuch log Itni safai se Jhut bolte hai ki unhe parakhna mushkil ho jaata hai... ab hame hi dekh lijiye pichle 9 Dino se hum uske saath ek ghar mein the phir bhi hame kabhi koi shaq nahi hua agar ye hakikat samne nahi aayi hoti toh hame kabhi kuch pata nahi chalta!  
Sab se badi sazaa toh taani ko mili hai sachi hone ki. .. 
Rs : ha magar ab aur nahi meine uske liye ek faisla liya hai. ...

PRECAP :
RS DECISION FOR TAANI
TAANI AND RS CONVO
RS AND REY CONVO. ..
TAANIS FINAL DECISION. ...

NOTE:
Guy's I am back with an update. ..
Tell me kaisa laga. .
I know ye update chota tha but I was busy I will try to give next update longer one. ..
If I get response faster I will be updating the next part tonight itself
Also I want to say to all readers of my story plz buddy me so that I can pm you when I will update. ...
Give me your views
Thnx and enjoySmile


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