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TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED

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Posted: 23 December 2014 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Hello guys. .. well since I was new on itf so I did updated my story but it was really complicated for me only to give correct links at correct time hope this attempt of mine is a success one. ...
Thnx to all of you all helped me alot ..
Special thanks to Iman di jinko meine sabse zyada pareshan kiya hai and kar rahi huWink
So now I am going to put all the chapters of my story in this thread. ...
To avoid confusion because I myself is too much confused. ..

Hope it works this time. .

TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED

CHAPTER 1 -     Pg 1 
Chapter 2 -        pg 1 
Chapter 3           pg 1 
Chapter 4.          pg 1
Chapter 5.          pg 1 
Chapter 6.           pg 1 
Chapter 7.           pg 2 
Chapter 8 (a)      pg 2
Chapter 8 (b)     pg 2 
Chapter 9           pg 2 
Chapter 10.        pg 2
Chapter 11.        pg 3 
Chapter 12.        pg 5
Chapter 13.        pg 7
Chapter 14        pg 12 



Edited by Taani-Taarey - 15 April 2016 at 1:34pm

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Posted: 23 December 2014 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED 
CHAPTER 1
I am here with an taarey ss. . Kyuki abhi we all were talking ki taani waapas aa jaye so i just got this idea and I am writing it i don't know kaisa hai.

So guys the story is just the same as it is now on the show.  Swaron are together. Rey is with kria. and the team is working hard for their academy along with rey. .
But with taani now taani and vishesh are married. One month is over of their marriage (guys i know marriage padh kar story padhne ka Mann nahi karega but there is happy wala taarey ending. ) The team could not attend their marriage because they had dance mania at that time.  Now it is been 45 days after the dance mania and d3 team is graduated. Taani has completed her graduation as well and is doing mba in private or from home.  And she is handling business also with vishesh and his father. ..
Kria has left rey.  As in the show.  

Note:
Guy's in this vishesh is in total negative character.

The story goes as-:
D3 team is at swayams house. 
Swayam : ok guys mein toh kal nikal raha hu. 
Nil : kaha ?
Swayam : taani se milne woh bahut naaraz hai. ( it is a suprise to taani)
Nil : oh
Sharon : swayam mein bhi tumhare saath chalungi. 
Swayam : par sharon tum waha kya karogi. 
Sharon : what do you mean mein kya karungi. Muje bhi taani se milna hai. 
Simmi : ha aakhir ab taani iski nanand ( sister in law)  jo hai
Swaron blushed. 
Simmi : actually muje bhi taani se milna hai. It's so long I have not seen her. 
Swayam : ha waise bhi woh naraaz toh hum sab se hai. 
Rey : toh kyu na kal sab usse milne chale. 
Everybody gave a what the look
Rey : what! !! Stop glaring me guys. 
I know mera aur taani ka past hai lekin now things are different and atleast ab hum good friends toh hai hi. 
Swayam was happy hearing all this. 
Vicky : lekin guys ab hum taani se milne uske sasural jayenge na
Hearing sasural rey felt bad he had moved on with kria lekin in his heart he still have special place for taani which no one can take...
Simmi : obviously duffer! !
Vicky : ha toh kya hum itne saare logo ka uske sasural jaana theek hoga. Matlab itne saare logo beena information beena invitation acha nahi lagta yaar . aur fir swayam tune hi toh kaha tha na ki taani ki family thodi traditional type hai you never know woh kaise react karenge.  We  never know. 
Simmi : he is right! !!
Swayam : guys tum log Sach mein ye sab soch rahe ho.  Agar taani ko pata chalega na toh woh Sach mein tum logo se zindagi bhar baat nahi karegi. 
Ha Uski family traditional hai but that doesn't mean ki woh friendship nahi samjte aur vishesh toh waisa nahi hai right. And over all mein toh hu na. 
Sharon : exactly.  Lekin swayam agar aisa tha toh tumne pehle kyu nahi invite kiya Hume, 
Swayam : because muje laga tum log nahi jana chahoge as ab hamari college khatm ho gayi Hai aur pata nahi  kaun kab tak saath rahe isliye tum log ek dusre se alag nahi hona chahte. 
Rey : chill dude hum jaante hai. Woh bas aise hi tuje pareshan kar rahi hai. 
Swayam : very bad sharon. 
Sharon : sorry. 
Vicky : okk toh done fir kal hum sab ja rahe hai Taani se milne jodhpur. 
Gang shouted and greeted. 
Swayam : done. 

Sharon : guy's toh i think hum sab ko abhi apne apne ghar jaana chahiye as last minute is furious. 
Gang : yeah
Chal swayam bye kal subah milte hai. 
Swayam : ha subah 7 baje my place. 
Gang : Okkk. 
Everybody moved out swayam stopped rey
Swayam : rey
Rey : ha
Swayam you are sure you will handle na
Rey : yes swayam and waise bhi mein aisa kuch nahi karunga jo taani ko trouble kare. 
Swayam : i trust you. 
Rey : Kk chal meet you tmmrw

At night reys house. 
Rey was sitting with his laptop and watching taani and his pics.
Rey : after a long time i am gonna meet you taani I am so excited. 
Wanna see your wonderful smile again..
Thinking all this only rey slept. 

In taani and vishesh (taavish) house. 
Taani was preparing dinner for everyone.  Soon all of them were on dinning table. Taani was serving everybody 
Vd- vishesh dad
Vm- vishesh mom. 

Vd: taani bete khana bahut acha bana hai. 
Vm: ha lekin tu.tumhe pata hai na ki vishesh ko paneer nahi pasand phir kyu banaya
Taani : ma ab kab tak vishesh aise zeedi rahenge.  dheere dheere unhe seekhna chahiye. 
Vd: bilkul sahi keh rahi hai ye.
Vo tumhare ladle ko sudharna chahiye. 
.
Vishesh heard all this while he was coming down from the stairs. 
He didn't liked it. 
Vishesh came and sat near taani. 
Taani was about to serve him but was interrupted. 
Vishesh:taani ye kya kar rahi ho tumhe pata hai na ki muje ye nahi pasand. Mein ye nahi khaunga. 
Taani : aap ek baar taste toh kijiye plz. 
Vishesh:no way
Taani : please. 
Vishesh:(shouted) taani don't make me angry .meine kaha mein ye nahi khaunga matlab nahi khaunga. 
Taani : muje nahi pata tha ki padhaku logo ko Ghussa bhi aata hai. (She teased)
And she giggle everybody laughed at this on the table. 
Vishesh took the plate and threw it on the floor. 
Everybody was like what the he'll? ??????
 Taani was scared and shocked to. 
Vd : vishesh ye kya batamizi hai. 
Vishesh : plz papa atleast khane mein toh aap log apni choice muj par nahi thop sakte. 
Before things get complicated. Taani handled the situation. 
Taani : papa let me be meri galti hai muje in he force nahi karna chahiye tha. 
Vishesh I am really very sorry. 
Vishesh : taani muje bahut bhuk lagi hai. I am hungry
Taani : aap batao aap kya khaoge . mein abhi banati hu. 
Vishesh : ha get me some pasta yaa
(He had no shame at all)
Taani : okk bas 5 min and she goes in kitchen. 
Vd : sharam tak nahi hai isse us bechari bachi ko ek nivala tak nahi khane diya. 
Apni akad mein. 
Vishesh : aapko toh hamesha Mein hi galat lagta hu. 
Taani mera khana room mein Le aana. 
And he went in his room
Vd and vm gave a disgusting look but didn't said anything as it was taavish personal matter. 
Vd and vm finished their dinner.
Vd : taani bete tum khana zarur kha lena. 
Taani : ji papa (in heavy voice because she was crying in kitchen)
Vd felt bad and said: aisa lagta hai ye shadi karwa ke Humne is bachi ki zindagi kharab kar di. 
Vd and vm left to their room. 
 
Taani took the pasta to their room. 
Taani : vishesh aapka dinner ready hai

Vishesh : thanks and plz next time mere liye woh sab food mat banana

Taani nodded. 

Vishesh : tum khaoge. 
Taani : nahi thanks. 
Vishesh : okk guys he Sat and started eating. 
Taani : vishesh mein neeche table clean karke aati hu. 
Vishesh : okk
Taani  went down and cleaned everything. She looked at her plate but didn't ate anything.  Her stomach was full with drama only. 

She went to the room
Vishesh the slept leaving TV on and also left the room in a messy condition 
Taani cleaned their room changed her clothes and was standing near the window.

Taani pov
He krishanaji ye ho kya gaya hai vishesh ko aaj jo bhi kiya unhonne meri samaj se bahar hai. Shadi se pehle sab theek tha.  Aur ab jaise unhe meri fikar hi nahi. 
Bas mujme galti nikalne ka moka dhundhete hai woh. Unhe fark tak nahi padta mein theek hu ya nahi. .
Oho ye mein kya soch rahi hu. Office se aaye honge thak gaye honge shayd isliye. .par mein bhi toh office attend karke aa rahi hu. ..
Forget it Taani just forget it
Hey krishanaji ye jo bhi hai isse solve karne mein meri madad karna. ...

Precap 
Vishesh ka yeh behaviour uski insecurity hai ya it's something different.  Will be coming up. 

Note
I know mein apni first story ko update nahi kar pa rahi hu aur ye lekin I can't help it. 
Do tell me kaisa laga 
I have tried my best to write it properly lekin fir bhi mistake ho sakti hai so sorry. ...  Taani abhi bahut soft hai but later she will be dhamaka. .. so wait. .?

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Posted: 23 December 2014 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED
CHAPTER 2
 It's next morning. 
At swayams place. 
Sharon : swayam what the he'll tum kal se packing kar rahe ho aur tumhara ab tak nahi hua.  You are behaving like girls now. 
Rey arrives there. 
Rey : really swayam tera ab tak packing nahi hua. 
Swayam : are guys meri packing kal hi ho gayi thi lekin muje raat ko papa ne bataya ki as mein taani ke sasural first time ja raha hu so kuch cheeze ritually Le jaani hoti hai wohi pack kar raha hu like gifts for everybody etc. 
Sharey : okk
Soon all the boys arrive. 
Boys : hey guys what's up. 
Shareyam give them a smile. 
Swayam : are guys yeh Simmi kaha hai. 
All turned to nil. 
Nil : are she is on the way she must be reaching soon. 
Vicky : wah tuje toh apni gf ke baare mein sab pata hai. 
Nil : ha of course, 
They give hi Fi to each other. 
Simmi comes. 
Simmi : hey guys i am sorry i am late. But woh meri gadi kharab ho gayi thi isliye. 
Gang : it's ok. 
Swayam : acha hum gadi kiski Le rahe hai. 
Sharon : matlab abhi tak ye fix nahi hua. Rey : are sharon it's done swayam ek gadi teri aur ek meri. 
Swayam : ok done. 
Nil : but how we will go in 2 car separately. 
Vicky : are i have a idea waise bhi tere liye is trip mein aane ka main motive toh Simmi ke saath time spend karna hai na toh tu aur Simmi ek gaadi mein with swayams extra luggage aur hum sab dusri gadi mein. 
Simmi blushed on this nil excitedly said yes. 
Gang : wohhh. .
Swayam : ok guys now let's leave. 
Rey : yaa. 
All settled in 2 cars and leaved for jodhpur. 

In jodhpur
Taavish house
Taani was preparing breakfast for all. 
And all other family members were in their bedroom. 
Taani : ma papa vishesh. Aa jayiye nashta ready hai. 
Vishesh shouted for taani. 
Vishesh : taani! !!
Taani : aayi. 
Ha kuch kam tha aapne bulaya. 
Vishesh : of course kuch kam hoga tabhi toh chila raha hu subah subah
Taani didn't like the way of talking but she ignored. 
Vishesh :Meri black shirt dhondhe ke do
Taani : yahi toh hai vishesh aapko bhi na kabhi kuch nahi milta. 
Vishesh : ha toh jab se Tim aayi ho muje apna room tumhare saath share jo karna pad raha hai. 
Taani was really hurt hearing APNA ROOM. 
Taani : taiyaar ho ke aajayiye nashtaa taiyaar hai. 
Vishesh : ha okk tum jao. 
In dinning place
Taani : papa woh meine kal raat ko gupta and company ki file padhi I don't think ki unke company ke shares mein interest dikhana chahiye.  It's better we work hard for garewal group of companies. 
Vishesh : taani tum pagal ho gayi ho kya?  Garewal group of companies ke saath hamare rivals kam karte hai how can we trust them
Vd : lekin vishesh gupta company par iske pehle do Ford karne ke case hai how can we trust them. 
Taani : exactly. 
Vishesh : but dad koi ek bar galat kare toh zaruri nahi ki hamesha karenge. 
Vd : aur kya guarantee hai ki woh aisa dubara nahi karenge. 
Vishesh : and what about garewals are indirectly our rivals. 
Taani : vishesh abhi last month hi media mein ye news thi ki Un Dono companies mein problems chal rahi hai. So its our golden chance agar hum garewals ko best presentation de toh woh hamare taraf divert ho h
Jayenge and then this would be great profit to our company. 
Vd : she is correct. 
Vishesh : fine mein hi sabse zyada galat hu na she is always correct na just do what you guys think. 
And he stood up and left. 
A tear escaped from taanis eyes but she hide it. 

Then taani and Vd went to office .The day went like this only.  Vishesh taunting taani. .and taani trying to handle situation. 

Here with the team they too had a journey all day. .
 In gang car. 
Swayam : rey yaar radio channel change kar na it's irritating me
Rey : sure
Rey changed the channel and on the next came song
TUJKO JO PAYA
sharon : rey let it play i like it

The song took rey to his world of his and taani. He was lost in it. 

Rey remember the moment after goa trip at taayams house. 
Her beautiful face angelic smile everything came in front of him. 
Reys pov
Taani you were just amazing. I miss you tumhari woh innocent hasi meri har problem khatm kar deti thi. 
Shut up Rey what are you saying now she is married and tune swayam ko promise kiya hai ki tu taani ko trouble nahi karega. 
Ha meine swayam ko promise kiya hai and I will fulfill it. 
Pata nahi taani kaisi hogi. 
He was brought back to present by sharon. 
Sharon : rey   Rey
Rey : ha aa. 
Sharon : kaha khol gaye. 
Rey : kuch nahi sharon. 
Sharon : you are ok
Rey : of course. 
Swayam noticed reys uncomfortable situation but couldn't get it. 

It's now night at taavish house. 

Everybody is on the dinner table. 
Suddenly door bell rings. 
Taani : mein Dekhti hu. .
Vd : ha pata nahi is waqt kon aaya hai.

Taani went and open the door.  
Taani : bhai! !!!What a pleasant surprise. 
Suddenly gang shouts and comes in front of taani. 
Gang : suprise! !!
Taani : omg! !!!
Taani was wearing a red saari which made rey remember their lovable moments. 
Vd : taani bete kon hai? 
Taani : papa bhai hai aur mere saare friends hai (excitedly)
Vishesh : wow. .hey guys what's up. 
Vm : taani bete pehle sabko andar toh aane do fir baith ke baat karna. 
Taani : ji ma
Sharon taani and Simmi hugged each other. 
While shaked hands with all the boys. 
As taani shaked hands with rey they tried to be normal but from inside taarey were not normal. 
And vishesh eyes got widen with this. 

All came inside and seated in the hall. 
Vishesh greted swayam and gang very nicely like nothing has happened all day. 
Taani was shocked. 
 Swayam greted Vd and vm. 
Swayam : khama ghani
Vd vm: ghani khama beta. 

All were in hall. 
Vd : ab tum bache baith ke baat karo hum chalte hai. Taani bete aap khana kha lena aur woh garewals ki file kal dekh lena ab
Hearing garewal vishesh face was down

Taani : nahi papa mein abhi woh file complete kar lungi. Ho jayega. 
Gang was like wow taani manages both house and office. 
Rey was happy 
Swayam : pehle tum khana kha lo hum fir baat karenge. 
Taani : bhai aap sab bhi chalo na we will have delights together at least. 
Vicky : taani  don't make lekin mein tumhe dinner mein bhi join karunga I am feeling hungry. 
Everybody laughed. 
Taani : of course ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai atleast koi toh hai muje company dene wala. 
Sharon : vicky kyu vishesh bhi toh hoga na. 
Taavish look at each other. 
Vishesh lied
Vishesh : i wish lekin aaj meine office mein hi dinner kar liya so i can't accompany my sweet wife. 
Rey was jealous by this. 
Soon all were on dinning table and vishesh behaved very well. 

Note
Guys firstly thanks alot meine response expect kiya tha but itna awesome nahi. 
I am very happy you guys liked it and sorry for woh business chat wala part but it is because ab taani is a very smart business woman too. .. 
Do comment ki kaisa laga .waiting for your response. 
Sorry aur pics nahi mili...

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TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED. 
CHAPTER- 3 

At night. 
All were sitting on the dinning table and chatting . 
Vishesh : taani mein sone ja raha hu yaar i am tired now. 
Taani : ha ji actually guys hum sab ko jaake abhi sona chahiye kal subah baat karte hai it's very late. 
Swayam : ya she is right. 
Vishesh : are Taani tum sab ka sone ka arrangement dekh lo I feeling sleepy bye gn guys. 
Taani : ha par vishesh
Before taani could complete vishesh left. She felt like being ignored but then she hide it because she can't show this in front of her bhai. .
Swayam : chalo guts ab sab utho. .
Taani : guys aap sab upar wale rooms mein Chale jo ek room mein do logo ko adjust karna padega
Vicky : of course, no problem. .
Taani showed everyone their rooms. 
Of course rey and swayam are in same room and their room is next to taavish room and other side it's sharon and Simmi room. .
Taani : chalo bhai rey . (Rey looked at taani like so excitedly it was visible)
Reyam : ha 
Taani : gud nite kal subah milte hai. 
Swayam : yaa gud nite. 
Rey : gud nite. 
Taani went to taavish room again the room was a mess she cleared it all and then slept. ..

Next morning. 
8:00 am
Taani was in kitchen. Gang is still sleeping. 
While taavish family members are awake. 
Suddenly rey wakes up and hears. 
Vishesh : taani! Kaha ho tum. 
Taani : kya hua vishesh I am in kitchen. 
Vishesh : just come here muje meri file aur tie dhondh ke do. 
Taani : aayi vishesh bas do min. .
Rey was like he'll upset he knows that it's normal between couples lekin it's about his taani so how anything could be normal. .
Rey pov
Wow seems like taani toh apne husband ke ghar mein zyada hi ache se set ho gayi Hai.  The way everyone is calling her. 
But mein kyu bad feel kar raha hu.  I knew it's gonna happen and fir taani is happy toh why I am feeling bas. .is she really happy? Uski aankho mein woh Khushi woh shine nahi dikhti muje. 
Are mein bhi kuch bhi she has changed so in cheezo mein bhi toh difference aayega na . 
He came out of his thoughts by hearing. 
Taani : ma papa nashtaa taiyaar hai. 
She went upstairs to help vishesh. 
Vishesh : finally tumhe time mil gaya meri help karne ka. 
Taani : sorry wo mein kitchen mein busy thi. 
Vishesh : agar tum se sab manage nahi hota toh chod do na. Ab raat ko tum meri file pe kam kar rahi thi and now woh mil nahi rahi. .
Taani : ek minute abhi deti hu. 
She gave him the file and says
Vishesh woh is file se related saari information meine presentation ke liye note kar li hai. .
Vishesh : ha toh raat ko ek baar muje dikha dena then we will finalise. .
Taani : theek hai aap niche aa jao nashta ready hai
Rey was not liking it at all vishesh ka taani .baat karne ka dhang uska taani pe trust na karna. Every thing. ..He was just hating it. ..

Now swayam waked up. 
Swayam : good morning dude. 
Rey : gud morning. 
Swayam : huh achi neend ho gayi I was really very tired. 
Rey : exactly. 
Swayam : mein fresh n up hota hu fir neeche chalte hai. 
Rey : yaa. 
After some time both come out of their room. 
Now Reyam were witnessing everything from stares. .
Some servant was calling taani. 
Taani : ji kaka 
Yeh sabji ka dubba bandh du. 
Taani : nahi aap Ruko mein aati hu. 
Taani went in kitchen. 
From kitchen taani was speaking. 
Taani : maa woh kal ki pooja ki samagri ki list dekh lo na meine table pe rakhi hai. 
Vm : hmm
Swayam went in kitchen along with rey. 
Taani : gud morning aap Dono itna jaldi jag gaye. 
Swayam : ha lekin tum kitne baje uthi. 
Taani : 6:30
Rey : aur soyi kitne baje? 
Taani : ha 2:00
Swayam : oww.  Swayam hugged taani. 
It's so wonderful to see ki tum itne kam waqt mein itne ache se set ho gayi ho. Muje pata tha tum jaldi set ho jaogi but itna jaldi aur woh bhi itne hectic routine mein. Ye nahi socha tha. 
Rey wanted to escape as woh sur nahi sun sakta ye sab. ..
Rey : mein jata hu aur sabko jagata hu warna ye log pura din sote rahenge.
Taayam nodded. 
Taani : nahi bhai aisa nahi pehle pehle Dar laga tha lekin it was my responsibility and by hook or by crook yeh sab muje karna hi hai. Aur ab toh in sab ki muje aadat pad gayi Hai. 
Swayam : tum bahut mature wali baat karne lagi ho
Taani : bhai! !and giggles. .

Soon all are on the dinning table including Gang. 
Vd : taani bete aaj tum office mat aao tumhare friends ke saath time spend karna. 
Taani : thanks papa mein kehne hi wali thi. 
Vd : taani meine recent document file de thi uska kya hua. .
Taani : ha woh meine saari information presentation mein involve kar li hai raat ko mein aur vishesh aapko finalise karke de denge. .
Vd : abhi file kiske pass hai. 
Vishesh : mere pass
Vd : toh kuch check karne ki zarurat nahi muje de do waise bhi taani ka kam perfect hota hai
Reyam had a proudy look on their face. .
Vishesh didn't liked it but he didn't created a scene. 
Taani had noticed vishesh. 
Vd : aur taani bete I am sorry lekin tumhe shaam ki presentation mein aana padega. 
Taani : ji papa pakka
Acha bhai mein kya keh rahi thi abhi aap log ready ho jao fir  hum log shopping chalte hai.  Fir sham ko office jaungi tab aap log movie dekhne chale jana. ...
Vicky : ye suddenly shopping kyu? 
Taani : aap log apne saath traditional clothes toh laye honge nahi toh Wahi lena hai aapko...
Vicky : traditional clothes kyu? 
Taani : because kal se navratri hai and I don't want ki you guys miss yaha ki navratri. ..
Sharon : really. .
Swayam : yeah ok cool. 
Vm : taani bete toh fir Tum pooja ka saman Le aana .muje ngo jana hai. 
Taani : okk. ..
Soon everybody left as per their plan
In market
With taani and gang. ..
Vicky : yaar ye char ladkiyan hai and fir bhi ye log kitna time k
Le rahe hai. .
Amar : exactly
Swayam : they are girls and we can't do anything.
Rey calls swayam
Nil : aaj toh ye rey bhi ladkiyon ki tarah dress choose karne mein mess kar raha hai. ..
Swayam : ha right. .
Kya hua rey bol. ..
Rey : are batana isme se kon sa lu. ..Red blue or black
Swayam : rey yaar kya teenagers type behave kar raha hai. ..
Swayam gets a call and moves from there. 
Rey : koi meri help nahi kar raha hai kaise hai sab. ..
Taani comes out from a counter next to rey. ..
Rey : taani can u plz help me. .
Taani : ha boliye. 
Rey : batao na mein in teeno dresses mein se kaunsi lu. 
Taani giggled and then asked. .
Taani : aapko itna confusion kyu hai. .
Rey : are red is your favourite colour aur tum Le chuki ho mein Lunga toh matching matching jo hum chahte nahi aur black mere pass hai lekin it's not so good. .( now rey recognised what he just said about favourite colour of taani and all)
Taani was like what the he'll inhe ab tak mera favourite colour yaad hai. ..
Rey : i am sorry mera aisa koi intention nahi tha. .
An awkward silence occurred. 
But was broken by sharon voice. 
Taani : black Le lijye aapko suit karta hai. .

Soon shopping was over all left for movie and taani for office. She gave an awesome presentation .but somewhere in her mind she was thinking that rey still remember about her choice which vishesh doesn't even know
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Do tell me kaisa laga if you think there is something I should work on no please tell me. . Do leave your comments. ...

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CHAPTER - 4
taanis presentation was over and it went very good. . She came back to home. 

At home 
taani just entered and gang was sitting in the hall. .
Taani : so guys kaisi thi movie. 
Boys : awesome
Simmi: rubbish sirf fight tha aur kuch nahi. 
Vicky: yeah tum logo ko toh woh stupid romantic movies pasand hoti hai na. 
Sharon : stupid nahi atleast in fight movie se toh  achi hi hoti hai. 
Now before they indulge into a fight Reyam stopped them. 
Swayam : guys chill movie khatm ho gayi now we can't do anything. 
Rey : woh abhi office se aayi hai toh uski bhi kuch sun lo. .
Swayam : taani! Tumhari presentation thi na kaisi rahi. 
Taani : bhai achi thi and there are 95% chances ki deal hame milegi but let's see. .Waise bhi woh toh vishesh and papa raat ko ghar aayenge tabhi pata chalega. 
Gang : wohhh! (Shouts)
Taani :  acha chalo ab aap log thodi der rest kar lo thak gaye honge na.  
Bharat : ha yaar bahut. .
Taani : Hm aap logo ke room mein coffee bhejwati hu. .
Sharon : hey yahi ek saath coffee peete hai na. 
Taani : nahi sharon woh muje dinner banana hai actually aaj mom ko aane mein der ho jayegi so aur kal ki pooja ka bhi bahut kam bacha hai. 
Sharon : ha toh tum hame bata do pooja ki preparations hum kar denge. What's say guys. 
Rey : yaa. 
Taani : nahi iski koi zarurat nahi sab ho jayega. 
Swayam : karne do na taani waise bhi rest toh abhi khatm ho jayega and fir sab fir se khali. 
Simmi : taani ek deal karte hai hum toh pooja ki preparation mein help karenge aur Tum hame kal taiyaar hone mein help kar dena. .
Taani : Okkk as you guys say lekin abhi nahi pehle aap log fresh hoke thodi der rest kar lo uske baad. 
Swayam : ok f9. 
Gang went to their respective rooms. Coffee Was sent to their room. 
Taani prepared the dinner. 
Soon Vd vm and vishesh arrived 

At dinning table. 
Vd : taani bete mein kuch kehna chahta hu tumse. .
Tunhare dost aaye hai iska ye matlab nahi ki tum kam se Bach jaogi .
Taani : kya hua papa koi galti ho gayi kya mujse. .
All were tensed including taani. 
Vd : ha bilkul galti hui hai tumse. 
Kya zarurat thi presentation dene ki woh bhi aisi.. huh. .
Taani : i am sorry papa. 
She was looking down
Vd : sorry toh tumhe hona hi chahiye. Itni achi presentation di hai mera aur apna Dono ka kam badha diya tumne.
Deal final jo ho gayi ab kam toh badhega hi na toh tum kam se nahi bhag sakti.
Suddenly all realise what he said. 
Vicky : wohhh congratulations taani. 
Now taani realised what vd said
Taani : what really 
All hutted for taani and then congratulated her vishesh was the last to congratulate her. .
Taani was upset as her husband was not happy for her... but soon her mood was changed. .
Vd took out a golden krishanajis statue and said. 
Vd : taani bete tum apne krishanaji ko bahut manti ho na so this for you. 
Taani started crying in her happiness. Then swayam wiped her tears and she took the krishanaji statue and was really happy with it. 
Vishesh was not liking this he was upset. His father never appreciated him. ..like this. ..
Soon everybody finished their dinner. 
Vd and vm left to their room. 
Gang including taavish were sitting in the hall. 
Taani : so guys this is done meine hum sab ke liye kam ki list likh di hai. Accordingly we have to start. .
Gang : Okkk
Vishesh : taani plz yaar mein bahut thak gaya hu. Kal pooja ke liye jaldi bhi uthna hai. Tum manage kar lo na i am going to sleep. 
Taani : ji theek hai. 
Reyam found it weird but they indulged themselves to the work given by taani. 
Soon all started their work and after an hour all sat in the hall. 
Vicky : huh finally sab khatm. .
Taani : guys thank you so much aap logo ke bina ye kam itna fast impossible tha. 
Sharon : your most welcome. 
Suddenly door bell rang. 
Taani : is waqt kon aaya hoga. 
She went to open the door. 
The people at the Door shouted. .
SURPRISE...
TAANI : seriously tum log sab yaha what a pleasant surprise. 
All entered inside the house. There were two boys and two girls. .
They started introducing themselves. 
Boy 1- hi everyone I am vishal. 
Boy2-hi I am Rahul. 
Girl 1 ritika here. 
Girl 2- shanaya this side. 
The d3 stood up in their places.

TAANI : relax guys yeh log mere aur vishesh ke friends hai. 
Gang : Okkk. .!!!!!
Vishal:i am taanis best friend. 
Taani : yaa of course. 
Shanaya:oye tere pati Dev nahi dekhai de rahe. 
Taani : ha woh actually so gaye hai. He was tired  soo. 

(Okk guys vishal Rahul ritika and shanaya are taavish friends .since they were childhood friends so they have common group. Vishal is taanis best buddy.  He doesn't like vishesh because he believes that deserves a far better person. ) 
(From now for Rahul vishal shanaya and ritika -- new gang)

Rahul:theek hai toh mein jaake usee jaga ke lekar aata hu. 
Vishal:taani tab tak tu hame sab se milwa.
Taani : okk. 
Vishal : (looking at swayam) second aap swayam ho pakka.
Swayam : ha par tumne kaise pehchana mein toh tumhe nahi pehchan pa raha 
Vishal: are aap kaise pehchanoge.  Hum bahut chote the jab last time mile the tab mera chehra theek se banna nahi tha toh aapko yaad kaise hoga. 
Everybody laughed at this. 
Soon taani introduced everyone to each other. 
 Taani : tum log yaha achanak kaise. (At new gang)
Ritika: tune kya socha teri shadi ke baad pehli navratri aur hum aise hi jaane dete naaa. 
Taani : of course not mein bata nahi sakti ki right now mein kitni khush hu kal apne saare friends ke saath mein navratri khelungi. 
Gang was shocked to see as they never expected that taani had a group other than them and that to soo close. 

Vishesh also came down and was chatting with his friends. 
All mixed up soon as taavish are very friendly. 
Reyam didn't like that when vishesh had too sit with them .was sleepy but now he is chatting so friendly. .
Taayam gave a cup of coffee to all they chatted for some time then all left to sleep. 

Next morning. 
It was the time for pooja. 
All attended pooja. Taavish did the pooja and aarti as they were the newly married couple.
The day went as it goes. Taani managed all the work .Vishesh taunting taani at he office .He was trying to make her feel that she was no worth it for anything. 
Taani felt bad but didn't reacted to all this. 

It was now night 
All are getting ready to go at garba night. 
Vishesh : taani!  Kaha ho. 
Taani : aayi. .. 
Vishesh : ye mere kurte ka button tut gaya hai isse theek karo. 
Taavish were standing in total filmy style. Taani was tying visheshs button. 
Rey came out of his room and saw this. He was angry don't know why. 
It reminded him about his and taani lovely scene during charity event. ..
Taani : aauch. ..
She got hurt because of the pin. 
Vishesh : kya hua lag gayi tumse toh kuch bhi nahi hota.  You better join some classes to learn all this. ..
Taani was on the verge to cry she actually cried. 
Rey pov
Rediculous how could he do that. ..ek toh taani ko lagi hai aur upar se usko taunt kar raha hai discusting. ..
I just hate the way he behaves with taani. ..

He was brought back to the present by swayams voice from room. 
Swayam : rey tu ready ho gaya .
Rey : ha. 
Swayam : okk
Hearing Reyam voice taani wiped her tears got ready and moved out to the hall. 
Soon all were present at the hall. 
Everybody complement each other about the looks. 
Swaron complemented each other. 
Rey don't know why but felt like asking taani about his looks and without thinking he asked her. 
Rey : hey kaisa dikh raha hu mein. 
Taani wondered why he is asking her but she had to give a reply. 
Taani : as usual smart and handsome. 
They both gave each other a smile.  
Vishesh only saw them smiling together he didn't heard the conversation but still he was angry for this on taani. .
Finally all went to an awesome place where garba nights were supposed to organise. .
 
Taani did awesome garba with the new gang as they had practice for long years. 
 Vishesh didn't played much. ... 
Taani played with vishal all the time. 
Gang was shocked to see that taani plays garba so well. ..
Even swayam was not able to believe he knew that traditional dance was something she liked.  But she did garba so well was unknown to him. 
Vicky : Yar guys yaad hai jab hame woh Gujrati event mila tha.  Tab Humne garba seekhna ke liye kitne papad bele the agar tab pata hota ki taani garba mein Itni achi hai toh usi se seekh lete. .
Nil : yaa dude. .
Hearing vicky and nil convo rey remind how at that time he was busy in impressing swayams dad for taani. 
Swayam noticed that rey was into a deep thinking so he brought him out. .
Swayam : rey! !
Rey : ha. .
Swayam chal let's go and play waise bhi ab khatm hi hone wala hai. 
Rey : okk

Rey pov
Pata nahi aaj ho kya raha hai.  Kyu muje mere aur taani ke bitaye lamho ki yaad aa rahi hai. .. Aisa lag raha hai jaisa mera dil use fir se chahta hai. .. Rey focus kya bol raha hai tu she is married now.  Tune promise kiya hai that you won't create a trouble to her remember. ...

Rey came out of his thoughts when suddenly the beats of the music and sound increased. ..
The last two beats taarey played together. Which was viewed by vishesh from a distance. 
He was he'll angry on taani and jealous of rey. ...

Precap :
Well the next part will contain drama lots of melo drama. ..Some confusion will occur. .

Note
Okk guys the new entries are total positive and the main reason of adding them is remember we always said that taani don't have a friend to share her problems with. ..so here they go the new gang is taanis very close friends and they under stand her very well. ...

Thanks a lot for your support. .. do leave your comments ki kaisa laga and plz i request all to leave comments. Because your comments encourage me alot to write and update as faster as possible. ..
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CHAPTER - 5
SOON the garba night was over. 
All started to move towards exit. 
Vishesh : mein aur vishal gadi lekar aate hai. 
Vicky had already bought the car. 
Swayam  : ok girls nil bharat amar tum log car mein jao hum aate hai. 
Taani : i will be waiting for vishesh. Bhai. Swayam : ok f9 as you wish. 
So rahul tum in logo ke saath nikal jao waise bhi vicky ko yaha ke pure raste nahi pata so it will be helpful. 
Rahul : ok f9. 
Vishal bought the car. 
Taani : vishesh kaha hai. 
Vishal : are woh usne bola ki koi office ka mil gaya hai so woh baat karke aa raha hai. 
Taani : Okkk. 
After some time vishesh didn't came. 
Reyam: ye vishesh kaha reh gaya hum log dekh kar aate hai. 
Taani and sharon tum Dono yahi Ruko. 
Sharon : ok. 
They left to find vishesh. 
Vishal : sharon aap log plz gadi mein baitho na waha meri ek friend hai mein usse milkaar aata hu. 
Sharon : ha jao mil lo apni gf se. 
Vishal : hii kash par aisa kuch nahi hai. 
Sharon : yeah. .
Vishal left sharon settled in the car. 
Sharon : taani come sit na. 
Taani : nahi sharon it's okk you be comfortable. 
Sharon : are par what the he'll taani ye gate lock ho gaya hai. 
Taani : ha woh actually iski gadi mein thoda problem hai but don't worry woh aake unlock karega toh everything will be sorted. 
Sharon : ok. 
Taani : mein dekh ke aati hu ye log kaha reh gaye. 
Saying so taani moved towards the opposite direction of the car. 
She was standing there. 
Suddenly two men came there and they started passing comments on taani and checking her out. 
Taani started walking towards the car. 
But suddenly one of them holded taanis wrist. 
Taani : chodo muje chodo. 
Sharon : hey chodo usse.
But the man twisted taanis wrist. 
Sharon started shouting. 
Sharon : rey swayam guys. 
Reyam and vishesh came from a distance they saw all this and shouted. 
Rey reached faster and separated taani and then punched the one who was holding her hand. 
The two men got scared and started  and started running. 
By now vishesh and swayam also arrived. 
Vishesh : (shouted ) taani kya zarurat thi yaha khade rehne ki can't you sit in the car. 
Taani : par mein. 
Vishesh : shut up just shut up. Har baat pe argument karna zaruri nahi hai samji tum. It's not ki har bar tum hi sahi ho. Understood. Kabhi kabar dusro ki bhi sun liya karo .others can also be right. 

Taani was feeling he'll. He insulted her started shouting at her in the centre of the road. She bowed down her head she didn't wanted to create a scene. 
By now vishal arrived. 
Reyam wanted to say vishesh that he is wrong but before they could say vishal  said
Vishal : are  vishesh tu uspe kyu badhak raha hai. Ismein uski kya galti hai. 
Vishesh realised that he shouted at taani in front of her friends and bhai.  He didn't wanted to spoil his image at all
So

Vishesh hugged taani. 
Vishesh : i am sorry sweet heart. I just couldn't tolerate ki koi tumhe harm pahuchaye. 
Taani was confused of his behaviour now sometimes he is soft and sometimes he is he'll rude. 
Reyam found it wrong but kept mum as they guesed it was to late to speak. 
Vishal : taani tu theek hai na. 
Taani : nodded
Vishal : chalo sab gadi mein baitho it's too late. 
All settled in the car and moved for home. Taanis eyes were red she wanted to cry but she couldn't. 
All the way everyone kept mum. 
Rey noticed taani. 
They reached home. 
All went in their respective rooms. 
Taani went to washroom and cried so that no body could see her. 

Days passes like this only. Gang went to play at night. And at day all managed their works.  Vishesh giving taani attitude. D3  gang went for movies shopping site seeing etc. 

Now it is 5th day navratri night. 
All went to play garba
vishesh didn't played much with taani. He just watched. So taani played with the gang members. 
While playing the last beats with rey bangle broke on taanis hand and the piece of glass was in her skin. 
Rey was removing the glass from her hand while unknowingly they were covered by the new gang members. 
Taarey were standing quite close. 
Vishesh seen it and he was he'll angry. 
He wanted to slap rey but before he could reach taarey got separate ...
So he couldn't do anything
Except rey taani vishesh and vishal. 
All other decided to go home after eating an ice cream. 
So all travelled in one car and taavish rey and vishal travelled in one. 
They reached home early. 
Only these four were present in the house. 
Vishesh : taani muje bhook lagi hai kuch khane ko la do room mein. 
Taani : theek hai. 
Rey was like taani iski wife hai ya servant koi tameez hai bhi ya nahi. 
Vishal was watching TV as he was waiting for the members of new gang. 
Taani went in kitchen and started preparing something. 
Rey went in kitchen to drink water. 
While cutting onion,  her finger was cut by knife. 
She screamed little 
Rey holded her hand and gulped the blood coming out. 
Then he was applying haldi. 
Meanwhile vishesh came there and saw all this. He was now bursting of anger. 
Vishesh : taani kuch zyada hi chot lagne lagi hai aaj kal tumhe.  Purane ghav tajha ho rahe hai ya purana pyar. (Looking at rey )
Rey : vishesh zubaan sambhal ke. 
Vishesh : oh toh mere ghar pe apni biwi se muje kaise baat karna hai ye tum muje seekhaoge. 
Taani : vishesh aap galat samaj rahe ho. Wo mere haath se khoon nikal raha tha bas isliye inhone. 
Vishesh : (shouted )
Oh shut up taani.  Har baar ye tumhare aas pass hota hai tabhi kyu chot lagti hai tumhe.  Andha nahi hu mein i can see jab se ye aaya hai zyada hi chehek rahi ho Tum.  Iske saath dandiya khelna and all.
Taani : vishesh aap kya bole ja rahe ho? Aap mujpar shaq kaise kar sakte ho. 
Vishesh : kya hua Sach samne aa raha hai toh bura lag raha hai. 
Now taani just started crying. 
Rey wanted to slap vishesh.  For making taani cry and raising finger on her character. But vishal stopped him. 
Vishal : bas kar vishesh biwi hai ab woh teri tune shadi ki hai usse.  Tuje us par trust karna chahiye. Tu use aaj ya kal se nahi itne saalon se janta Hai. Hum sab ko pata hai ki woh kaisi hai. 
Ha uska past hai Rey ke saath. 
Hearing this rey was shocked that vishal knows about taarey. 
Vishal : lekin usne tuje puri sachai ke saath except kiya hai otherwise woh tuje uske aur rey ke baare mein kabhi nahi batati. 
Are Konsi ladki sachai bol ke apni image khud dav pe lagaegi. 
Vishesh : ye sab lecture dena acha lagta hai.  Jab tu apni biwi ko apne ex bf ke saath dekhega na tab baat karna. 
This was the limit she can't tolerate more. She ran upstairs to taavish room. 
Crying. ..
Vishal : you know what I pity you vishesh tuje Sach mein hire ki parakh nahi. ..
Rey : taani ne tumhe hamare relationship ke baare mein sab bataya tha.  Aur tumne tab sab kuch except kiya tha toh ab us par atleast trust kar na seekh lo.  .
Saying so rey left for his room. 

Now all others came. .
Vishal : agar thodi akal bachi ho toh baaki logo ke samne scene create karke apni izzat aur mat girana. ..
Vishal and vishesh behaved normal in front of all. . 
Swayam asked about taani so they said she was tired therefore she slept. 

Rey saw taani sitting and crying in her room.  He wanted to handle and pamper her. ..but didn't as he don't want to become a problem for her. .

Taani was hurt really hurt the more she is trying to understand vishesh the more he is ignoring and hurting her. ..

Precap :
Truth about vishesh will be revealed. ..

Note
Guys bola tha na there is lots of melo drama so there it was. ..
Guys next part will be more interesting lekin woh mein tabhi post karungi when I will get 25+ comments on this chapter. .
Guys jab meine first chapter post kiya tha toh i got a very good response. ..isliye I believe my expectations are correct. ..
Isliye plz comment and leave your views. .
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CHAPTER - 6
 That night just went. . Taani slept crying. Vishesh didn't even apologise to taani.  But he didn't told anyone about this. And so taani and rey also kept mum. .
2 days passed. . Taani did everything normally but she didn't talk to vishesh. This time it was the limit as he has hurt her self respect.  Taavish behaved well in front of everyone but originally they were not talking to each other. After all the drama there was the uncomfortable situation between taarey they met saw each other but didn't even spoke a single word to each other. . All this was noticed by vishal. ..

It's 8th day of navratri. .
At noon
All are at taavish house talking about evening. 
Rahul : taani mein kya bol raha tha kyu na apan sab aaj hum sab Gandhi nagar(some place at outer jodhpur) wale hall jaate hai na khelne. 
Swayam : kyu jaha hum roz ja rahe hai waha nahi ho rahe kya garba night. 
Rahul : nahi swayam ho toh rahe hai lekin aaj ashtami hai na so jaha mein bol raha hu waha ke garba is awesome. .ritika: yaa we will have more fun there. .
Swayam : okk
Rahul : taani bol na. 
Taani : ha ha of course I am ok with it. 
Vishal : lekin waha se hum raat ko ghar kaise aayenge rahul. You no know na late night us road pe travel karna is not safe. 
Rahul : i knew it ki tu ye puchega so i have a safe plan. . Waha par mere ek friend ka farm house jo hamesha khali hota hai so hum sab night stay Wahi kar lenge aur subah aa jayenge. . Don't worry its totally safe. 
Shanaya : awesome.  So its done hum log aaj Wahi jayenge. .
Sharon : so hum logo ko packing kar leni chahiye. 
Vicky : hum ek raat ke liye ja rahe hai usme packing ki kya zarurat hai. 
Sharon : hai but hum raat bhar Un heavy traditional dresses mein bhi toh nahi reh sakte. 
Nil : point. .sahi bol rahi hai. 
Sharon : i know sharon rai prakash is always correct. .
All gave a look to swayam and then sharon. 
Vishesh : mein nahi aa paunga guys i have a meeting late night so you guys go have fun. 
Rahul : taani ye Sach bol raha hai? 
Taani : agar woh keh rahe hai toh hogi meeting. 
Actually taani knew that there is no such meeting scheduled but she said yes as she thought vishesh is planning to stay away from her because of the differences between them. .
Vishal : chalo theek hai guys mein tum logo ko 7:00 baje pick karta hu so be ready everyone. 
Soon the new gang left. 
Taani was thinking how vishesh is sending her alone with rey . but then she ignored. 
Soon all got ready. Vishal arrived and all left for the place. 

All reached the place and started playing garba. 
Here at taavish house. 
In taavish room. 
Vishesh was decorating the room with rose petals and candles. 
He called to someone and said, hey sweetheart waiting for you eagerly come fast. 
Scene shifts. 
At place where gang has gone. 
Taani : ek baar vishesh ko call karke keh deti hu ki khana kha le fridge se lekar. 
Taani tried calling vishesh but his phone was busy. 
Shanaya : taani chal na. Kya kar rahi hai
Taani : kuch nahi bas vishesh ko call kar rahi thi. 
Shanaya : common yaar ek din ke liye tera pati khud ko handle kar lega. 
Taani : ha par. 
Before she could complete shanaya dragged her to play. .
Scene shifts
At taavish room. 
A girl in shorts arrives. .
Vishesh : hi sweetie. 
Girl : huh badi jaldi yaad aa gayi tumhe meri. 
Vishesh : oh common tum ache se janti ho ki abhi situation kitni complicated hai dyna. 
Yes she is dyna visheshs girlfriend,  and assistant too. 
Dyna:tumhari biwi or uske woh saare dost Uff, I am toh tired doing this drama of your secretary in front of her. .
Vishesh : bas ab kuch hi Dino ki baat hai then everything will be fine. 
Dyna: muje bahut bhook lagi hai let's have dinner. 
Vishesh : sure. .
Place where gang was playing. 
Suddenly music stops and lights are off. Rahul : are yaar ye lights ko kya ho gaya. Itna maza aa raha tha. 
Amar : Haa yaal. .
Then an announcement is held. 
Ladies and gentlemen hum aap sab se haat jodkar maafi mangte hai technical fault ke chalte Hume ye garba night yahi khatm karni hogi. 
We are really sorry. 
Gang : are yaaar! !!!!!
Vishal : so guys ab kya kar na hai. .
Swayam : ab kya ghar chalte hai aur kya waise bhi zyada late nahi hua hai so we can travel. .
Rahul : are lekin iske chakkar mein night out cancel karne ki kya zarurat hai. 
Taani : are tuje overnight mastii hi karni hai na toh ghar pe sab raat ko karenge. 
Rahul : are par. 
Ritika : rahul samaj na Taani vishesh ko miss kar rahi hai. 
All hutted except rey and vishal. 
Taani bowed down her head and kept mum. ..
All settled in the car and left for home. 
On the other hand in taavish room Vishesh and dyna had finished their dinner and we're sitting very close to each other. 
Soon the gang reached home. 
Sharon : vishesh ki toh meeting thi na so yeh ghar ki lights onn kaise hai and ye gadi kiski hai. 
Swayam : let's see andar jaake dekhte hai. 
The whole house was dark lights were onn only in taavish room so all went there. 
When taani opened the door the scene in front of her made her numb. 
Dyna and vishesh were kissing each other. 
Swayam shouted from back. 
Swayam : vishesh! !!!!!
That's now vishesh and dyna stood up . got separated from each other. 
All were shocked. 
All gave a disgusting look to dyna. 
Rahul: batayega ye sab kya ho raha hai. 
Vishal : are ab kya isse puch raha hai. Iske pass koi safai nahi hai. 
Dyna : stop giving me that look guys,  are yaar mein toh tum logo ko janti bhi nahi so muje ghurna band karo. 
Swayam went straight and gave a tight slap to vishesh. 
Taani was numb. After this she came back to senses. 
Taani : vishesh I am still standing here for an answer. 
Swayam : ye kya answer dega.
Swayam started beating him and shouting. 
How dare you cheat my sister. 
Rey too joined swayam then vishal also joined. 
Dyna tried to stop them but couldn't so others boys went and stopped Reyam and vishal. 
Dyna : are. Maar daloge kya aap log inhe. 
Sharon : you stay out of this actually leave. 
Dyna : shut up i love him and I can't do that. 
Taani : vishesh I am still standing here for an answer give me an answer dammit. By she threw the phone she had in her hand. 
Dyna : mein batati hu. 
Taani mam aap jo dekh rahe ho sab Sach hai. Mein aur vishesh ek dusre se pyar karte hai and we will get marry soon. 
Sharon : aur ye kehte huye tumhe thodi si bhi sharm nahi aa rahi. 
Dyna : plz cut that crap. 
Taani : kab se chal raha hai ye sab. 
No body spoke anything. 
Taani went straight holded visheshs collar and shouted on top of her voice. 
Vishesh boliye kab se chal raha hai ye sab. 
Vishesh : hamari sagai ke baad se
Taani was shocked she leaved his collar and took two steps back. 
Swayam : toh bata deta meri behen ki zindagi kharab karne ki kya zarurat thi. And he slapped him again. 
Taani : toh isliye shadi ke 1st day se aapka hamare rishte mein koi interest nahi tha. Har pal muje taunt karna mujse saara din naraaz rehna ye sab isliye na. 
Rey : are agar aaj hum nahi aate toh yeh ghatia insaan dusri shadi bhi kar leta aur taani ki life he'll ban gayi hoti. 
Dyna : aisa kuch nahi hota. Vishesh ke mom dad ek mahine mein hamesha ke liye us jaane wale hai. Unke jaate hi vishesh taani mam ko divorce de dete taaki later hum kisi problem mein na fase. 
Sharon : what problem. 
Dyna : financial problems. 
Taani aur vishesh ko ek saath dekh kar uske dad saari property vishesh ke naam kar dete and then sab sorted. 
Taani : kyu kiya aapne yeh vishesh. 
Rey : you cheat khud tera affair hai us din tune taani ko kitna kuch suna diya. Sharm naam ki cheez hai bhi ya nahi. 
Rey was going to beat vishesh but swayam stopped. 
Rey : swayam tu nahi janta isne us din.
Taani : kyu kiya aapne yeh sab bolo vishesh speak up. 
Vishesh : ha kiya meine ye sab.  Yes I did this but mere pass koi option nahi tha. Hamari sagai ke baad muje dyna se pyaar hua and tab I realised I just had attraction towards you not love. 
Swayam : are toh tod deta sagai kyu spoil ki iski life. 
Taani : kaise todte yeh sagai,  inki reputation jo kharab ho jati. Wah vishesh wah kya plan hai amazing. Mein shuru se iss rishte ko sambhalne ki koshish karti rahi par tab sambhalta na Jab aap aisa hone dete. 
Aur mein bewakoofon ki tarah khud ko blame karti rahi ki mein iss rishte ko nahi nibha pa rahi hu apne past ke wajah se. She had tears in her eyes.  Apna self respect ignore karke Aapki har baat har taunt sab sunti rahi. .. aap toh divorce ka reason bhi muje banana chahte the isliye us din aapne mere character ko question kiya taaki aapka kam bhi ho jaye aur koi aap par ungli bhi na uthaye. . .. 
You know what aaj aap meri nazaroo se gir chuke ho. You are the most disgusting person I have ever seen in my life. Aap par trust karke meine apni zindagi ki sabse badi galati ki hai. .
She threw the vast present behind her on the floor and left the room running. 
Vishesh tried to follow her butt. Swayam stopped him. 
Swayam : bas bahut takleef de di tune use ab aur nahi ab jo baat hogi uncle aur papa ke samne unke aane ke baad hogi
Vishal ran for taani and rey too. 
Swayam : sab log apna luggage lekar bahar chalo is ghatiya insaan ke ghar par ek aur minute nahi rehna. 
Ritika went straight and slapped vishesh. 
Ritika : ye taani ke taraf se wo ye kabhi nahi kar payegi but I can do it. .
Rahul : aaj tune taani ke saath saath hum sab ki nazaroo mein gir chuka hai don't you dare talk to us. .
Shanaya : tuje teri gf mubarak. 
All took their luggage and came out of the house. 
Taani sat in the car and drove it in full speed rey saw this. While he could come and tell this to swayam. All this things happen in vishesh room. 
Rey : swayam woh taani Itni speed mein gadi lekar gayi Hai. Woh. 
Swayam : what? 
Vishal : yes. 

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