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//Return Me My Breaths// *Part 3* 27/5

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Part1: Pg 1 *Below*
Part2: Pg 1 *Below*


Edited by kirtiarora111 - 27 May 2015 at 4:55am

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Part-1


"Be with me", he held her wrist.
"Let me go.", she wiped her tears.
"Just be with me", he leaned onto her hand almost weeping.
"Bye Randhir", her voice choked and her tears denied to stop.
"Sanyukta, just ONE LAST CHANCE, please", he clasped her in his arms tightly making it difficult for her to breathe.
Or may be this was the only place she felt like breathing in.
She reluctantly made him loosen his grip around her and stepped back.
She held her travel bag and marched out of that suffocating mansion, leaving behind memories to live, to cry, to laugh, to die...

Someone was left behind flabbergasted.
His body was breathing, but he couldn't breathe.
His heart was beating, but he couldn't perceive.

Yet he died... Into the oblivion...
For his respiratory system had left him forever..
For he had to bear the repercussions of what he had sown..

That hapless day, acknowledged the mourning of two souls.
No one knew who was at fault.
The one who trusted her love,
Or the one who was dying for her trust.

"I wish I could change it all, I wish...", she sobbed covering her shrieks in the walls of the soft cotton bolls of her cushion.



Edited by kirtiarora111 - 24 December 2014 at 12:41pm

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The first part of the story seems quite intriguing and heart-piercing.
What has conspired between SanDhir that both are remorseful??? I'm really curious to know the past..
The first part is penned down beautifully and flawlessly.
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter...
Do update it soonish...Big smile

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P.S.- Mind PMing me the next time you update it??

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Posted: 23 December 2014 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Heyy !!! 
seems really interesting ! 
that was a really fine prologue.. written well   

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -foreverhers-

The first part of the story seems quite intriguing and heart-piercing.
What has conspired between SanDhir that both are remorseful??? I'm really curious to know the past..
The first part is penned down beautifully and flawlessly.
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter...
Do update it soonish...Big smile

Regards
Keya

P.S.- Mind PMing me the next time you update it??

Thanks a lot for your kind appreciating words.Smile
I'm glad something written by me managed to gain your attention.

Well, I can't promise about PM but If not PM, I'll surely scrap you. 

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Originally posted by ChasingLiberty

Heyy !!! 
seems really interesting ! 
that was a really fine prologue.. written well   


Thanks a ton for your kind words.Smile
Really means a lot..!!

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Part-2


"Randhir.. Randhir... Kaha ho tum?? Randhir..", he felt someone calling out his name in the sweetest tone of her chirpy voice..
"Sanyu, tum aa gayi.. Mujhe pata tha you'll forgive me.. Tum mujhe chhor k nahi ja sakti.. I missed you so much.. Kaha chali gayi thi tum??", he broke down in her embrace hugging her with all his might.

She comforted his back lovingly through the fabric of his shirt, her hands caressing his messy hair.

He hid his teary face in the crook of her neck and placed a moist kiss there which lasted for a minute or so.
She shuddered under the shower of his love. He still had the same hypnotizing effect on her..

"I missed you sooo much... I love you Sanyu.. Don't even think of leaving me ever. I'll die..", he broke the hug and planted kisses all over her face cupping her cheeks with utmost affection. He kissed her twinkling eyes, her cute pointed nose, her feathery cheeks, and her soft chirping rose petal lips, he kissed her with such devotion which can never be explained in words.

"Sanyukta, tum bolo na kuch, tum mujhe chhor ke nahi jaogi na dobara.. Bolti kyon nahi tum.. Sanyu, tum meri baat sun rhi ho na.. Sanyu, jawab do..", he broke into another trail of fresh tears travelling down his already red orbs.

He tried to grab her all in his arms and never let her go but what he felt was just A LAYER OF THIN AIR..
"Sanyu , tum kaha gayi Sanyu", he tried to feel her around him like an insane being, but what he found was his SHALLOW INSIDE.

"SANNNYYYUUU... AAA...", he screamed with all he had, his hands wide open waiting to feel her fragrant breaths, his knees bent ready to bow down in front of her pretty smile, the pure crystalline drops of his orbs dwelling to seek forgiveness...

He was just a poor broken soul who seemed to have everything, yet was dying a death worse than what a starving person does out of human cruelty..




Edited by kirtiarora111 - 24 December 2014 at 1:09pm

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Awesome!!
What happened between them?? Interesting
Update ASAP

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