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Teri Ummeed Tera Intezaar Karte hai (11), link new story pg 135 (Page 88)

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Posted: 15 January 2015 at 9:18am | IP Logged


  deep sigh emoticon      mujhe to laga Epi bhi milega...

    LOL  BCC with his chunnu-munnu...smiley  

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Posted: 15 January 2015 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by singh24




deep sigh emoticon <font size="3">mujhe to laga Epi bhi milega...</font>

<font size="3"> LOL BCC with his chunnu-munnu...</font>smiley


Arrey more than half the people I PM'd have not even read it...

chodo na bekaar hai meri mehnat

Babbie Big smile   kaisi ho?

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Superb

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 6:48am | IP Logged
1st thanks for the wonderful awsume story Avi im gonna miss  BCC MAAN AUR USKE MUMBAIKAR  BINDASS GEET so badly whnever i read this story mere face pe ek mitthe se smile aa jate hai i wish i future u write anothe rockinggg story i know u don't wanna writing another story this is not fair  but i  just hope for some hreadyapariwartna typy feeling aa jye Wink Wink  ...
love u dear for this wonderful story 

Teri Ummeed Tera Intezaar Karte hai journey always bring a big smile  on my face  

nd thanks for the PMs

PART---48
 omg omg what a sweet and naughty partyyy
GEET  celebrate maan's birthday  geet is teasing maan maan trying to be goody goody boy but it made oposite reaction
geet thinks herself ugly  here maan controlling his desires for promise her she asked why he did so then he gone nuts our  BCC  maan style of eating cake nd  compliments geet in his wayWink here come uncontrable bcc LAMO ...sach a lovely  birthday celebration...
part----49
sherni geet thought babaji maan dancing with all chote kapdo wali girls to make geet jealous nd how dare u dance with anyone else grrr here he is in love wid  her possessiveness with his BCCgiri but poor bcc plan backfired with duggu praising geet LAMO LAMO ... But I loved the possessive confession of maan being jjj (it's remind me GHSP ) ...finally they are getting married
geet waiting for her  maan to come and take her to.her dreamland loved daarjis role in geets life all so lovly ...
part---50 
what to say u make me sad last part  
PURE N DEVINE WEDDING i enjoyyy all  maaneet moments
they got married with rituals...FINALY SR AHME AHEM  HOT HOT SR to bodies become one soul ...
their umeed nd their intezaar comes  to end  by all means they complet their journey in beautiful way 
am going to miss this a lottt



Edited by brandgurti - 16 January 2015 at 6:49am

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
Awesome updates, read all in one go, last three part.
Happy ending  ClapStarClap
Sad that you are leaving writing.CryCry
 

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
sorry for being late Avi dear...oh what a wonderful end for this amazing story...just loved it...par avi is there any chance to get epiloge...atr it na sweety...
sach main avi i will miss this story...hope ke ek aur naye story mile humain ...suchi dear do write ...love to read your work...and wo locket kab update kar rahe ho...???waiting to read that...

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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 6:31am | IP Logged
Sorry I'm late
The last part was awesome and hawt Wink
What a beautiful description of the wedding and the end of our CC/BCC/majnu/JMJ/devil's intezaar
You tied up the relations so beautifully... Armaan-ridz, Megha and everyone else sooo nice
I loved the whole story it was awesome and you are a fab writer Avi
Laxmi's banner and Priya's vm have been great too
Thanks for sharing this story with me
I know you've decided to not write anymore stories for now but I do hope that you'll change your mind someday and then share some more beautiful stories like this and the locket
One request please give an epilogue please... I wanna read at least a part with your view of their life after marriage...
Thanks for the story and all the PMs
Lots of Heart

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