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Teri Ummeed Tera Intezaar Karte hai (11), link new story pg 135 (Page 74)

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 2:50am | IP Logged



  U wont give epi...im so sad to miss my maaneet in tis  journey..thanku for giving a lovely beautiful ff which stay in my heart forever..te way my maaneet journey start with revenge and pain but end in heavenly union..the way my maaneet went thru so much due to destinty ki evil game but atlast my maaneet love broke its nose to poke in their life..i love tis ff so much yar..



Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 January 2015 at 2:50am

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 3:00am | IP Logged
lovely update
liked the way you have described the feeling of maaneet
loved the way you have described all the rituals of marriage
please do give us an epilogue as well

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 5:49am | IP Logged
atlast dey r together...

awesome ending...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story n fr d pm also...



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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 6:53am | IP Logged
Awesome ending...
Beautifully written...
Amazing story of maaneet ...
Dont stop writing...
We loved ur work ...

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rashmi...

awesome, romantic and passionate BCC Update
beautifully written..
Please ek aisi hi mere liye bhi likh do na..
mujhse itna bhi nahin hoga..

so the war between Mumbaikar and dilliwala goes on...
so now youa re gong to be a reader from now...That's good but do this only for a short period..
and want to see you back as writer..

Now the comment about the VM...

<font color="#ff0000">you know jaise hi VM shuru hua main to darr gayi,,,Ki Geet ko kya hua..</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Maan ko darwaza band bhi nahin karne diya aur shuru ho gayi ...</font>
<font color="#ff0000">ang laga le re...</font>
<font color="#ff0000">main to samjhi ki Maan ussi khule darwaaze se bahar bhaag jaayega ye soch kar ki ye Geet hi hai ya ko aurROFL</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Yaar Geet kam se kam darwaza to band karne deti..</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Maan ko ek saans to lene deti..wo kaun sa kahin bhaga ja raha hai</font>
<font color="#ff0000">ab to tumhara kaidi hai baandh kar rakhna hamesha ke liye aponi julfon me..</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Khyaal rakhna Maan ka..</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Thanks Avi for this story..</font>



VM ka itna socha tum ne?
LOL
mujhe j feel ho raha hai Priya se ab Big smile
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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Desigirls12


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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6"><font color="#ff0000">Wat to say..im speechless to see a beautiful emotional touchy very
sensational update yar..thanku so much for giving tis beautiful poem..te way my
maaneet ki wedding with everyone's blessings, te five elements and even te heaven
too blessed them for their happy starting..wat else could my maaneet need..te way
my maaneet ki whole family stood and blessed them, and te whole atmosphere
beaming in happiness was lovely touchy..i felt gossebump wen my maan tied te
mangalsutra making his geet , as his..te
way my maan adopting megha as his sister was lovely touchy..te way my maaneet
ki restless came to end..te way geet ki nervous and shyness seeing my man
standing watching her, she was trying to
control so much not to rush to him was lovely..te
way my maan to controlling himself not to jump on her, but seeing her trembling
he teasing her and geet too not less she is mumbaiker, teasing him was lovely..te
way my maan taking time to claim his geet ,worshopping her each and every part
taking his time and geet too tasting him, both are drowning in they passion was
lovely superb beautiful..te way my maan claiming his geet and making her his in
all sense, atlast my maaneet became one, they complete each other was lovely beautiful
passionate..i had tears seeing they heavenly union..yes wat else would a man
and woman need , being in their arm's of dreams..</font><font color="#0000ff">yes dreams too cum true if it was my
Maaneet</font><font color="#ff0000">..i love tis update so so so so much..i love tis feel so much yar</font>
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Nalini thanks so much .. ye dil khol le jo tum comments karti ho wo padhne ka bohut mazza aata hai

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Nice update loved the way you describe
maaneet feeling you write beautiful story
please write more I am missing this story

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 7:19am | IP Logged
last part
willl miss this surely

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