Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


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Teri Ummeed Tera Intezaar Karte hai (11), link new story pg 135 (Page 73)

gorgeousqueen. IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 10 July 2011
Posts: 35320

Posted: 10 January 2015 at 12:25am | IP Logged
awesome, romantic and passionate  BCC  Update
beautifully written..
Please ek aisi hi mere liye bhi likh do na..
mujhse itna bhi nahin hoga..

so the war between Mumbaikar and dilliwala goes on...
so now youa re gong to be a reader from now...That's good but  do this only for a short period..
and want to see you back as writer..

Now the comment about the VM...

you know jaise hi VM shuru hua main to darr gayi,,,Ki Geet ko kya hua..
Maan ko darwaza band bhi nahin karne diya aur shuru ho gayi ...
ang laga le re...
main to samjhi ki Maan ussi khule darwaaze se bahar bhaag jaayega ye soch kar ki ye Geet hi hai ya ko aurROFL
Yaar Geet kam se kam darwaza to band karne deti..
Maan ko ek saans to lene deti..wo kaun sa kahin bhaga ja raha hai
ab to tumhara kaidi hai baandh kar rakhna hamesha ke liye aponi julfon me..
Khyaal rakhna Maan ka..

Thanks Avi for this story..

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SonalikaSingh Senior Member

Joined: 12 November 2011
Posts: 471

Posted: 10 January 2015 at 12:32am | IP Logged
wow what a SR !!!!Wink BCC delhiwala and apni sherni mumbaiker...kashmir n kanyakumari wala gana yaad aa gayaTongueTongue
i m very sad that this story is coming to an end...but as they say...all good things must come to an endConfused

i will miss this story.journey was beautiful.

do let me know if u r writing any new story...or any writer writes some story as good as URS

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Alpha01 Senior Member

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Posts: 659

Posted: 10 January 2015 at 12:43am | IP Logged
A lovely end to a lovely story. At last they are one and together in all sense. They had to overcome many hurdles but if you truly love someone then it's worth it and it makes your appreciate that person more and Maan and Geet definitely will and do appreciate each other more.Tongue
Sad to see their story end and even sadder to hear that this will be your last contribution as a writerCry.  IF has today lost a fantastic writer and it will not be the same without one of your stories. All that is left to be said is thank you for the lovely stories you have given us.ClapClap

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kavya.sravya Goldie

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Posts: 1858

Posted: 10 January 2015 at 1:32am | IP Logged
why no epilogue...Confused we want...we epilogue asp...!!

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tamanna1391 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 17 March 2011
Posts: 32863

Posted: 10 January 2015 at 2:33am | IP Logged
awsemm story marriage there togetherness waiting for an epilogue

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ReelyROSExx Goldie

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Posts: 1960

Posted: 10 January 2015 at 2:40am | IP Logged


Nice song selction
They become one at last .. with all their love
... really felt emotional when they bought up Mumbaiker n delhiwala ... took me back to the intial updates
Maan is such a nautanki ... will miss him
Pls dont end u r stories here Cry... take a long break ... but pls dont stop writing ... Love it ...pls dont

n pls add me in ur buddylist for Locket reposting

Love u for giving this story to us

Edited by DAZZLINDD - 10 January 2015 at 2:41am

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anjalisen85 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 13 December 2010
Posts: 3723

Posted: 10 January 2015 at 2:40am | IP Logged

maaneet marriedBig smile

maan treats megha as his sisterSmile

maan is teasing geetWink

maaneet become oneWink

maaneet moments r niceEmbarrassed

epilouge pleaseDay Dreaming

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Desigirls12 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 18724

Posted: 10 January 2015 at 2:48am | IP Logged

 Wat to speechless to see a beautiful emotional touchy very sensational update yar..thanku so much for giving tis beautiful poem..te way my maaneet ki wedding with everyone's blessings, te five elements and even te heaven too blessed them for their happy starting..wat else could my maaneet need..te way my maaneet ki whole family stood and blessed them, and te whole atmosphere beaming in happiness was lovely touchy..i felt gossebump wen my maan tied te mangalsutra making his  geet , as his..te way my maan adopting megha as his sister was lovely touchy..te way my maaneet ki restless came to end..te way geet ki nervous and shyness seeing my man standing  watching her, she was trying to control so much  not to rush to him was lovely..te way my maan to controlling himself not to jump on her, but seeing her trembling he teasing her and geet too not less she is mumbaiker, teasing him was lovely..te way my maan taking time to claim his geet ,worshopping her each and every part taking his time and geet too tasting him, both are drowning in they passion was lovely superb beautiful..te way my maan claiming his geet and making her his in all sense, atlast my maaneet became one, they complete each other was lovely beautiful passionate..i had tears seeing they heavenly union..yes wat else would a man and woman need , being in their arm's of dreams..yes dreams too cum true if it was my Maaneet..i love tis update so so so so much..i love tis feel so much yar

Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 January 2015 at 2:49am

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