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Teri Ummeed Tera Intezaar Karte hai (11), link new story pg 135 (Page 70)

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dqno1

Originally posted by BDayGal-11Jan

what No Epi Shocked
you said bache bhi hongy :P


Maine choice diya tha

seedhe bacche ya ahem ahem..LOL

ahem ahem ke baad seedha bache dikha deti na LOL Embarrassed

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Great ending to a great story! The SR was very well written, totally keeping their characters intact.

Loved the story! Maan's BCC, the Mumbai-Delhi nok-jhoks, the romance, the drama, the action... The story had all aspects and was very beautifully written. You're an amazing writer!
Waiting eagerly for the next story...

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
awesme update
lovd it alot
gonna to miss it alot

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 7:37pm | IP Logged

wow what an update.very well written.i loved the way how everyone pitched in to make maneet wedding day memorable and the way u explained about sharing love and not keeping it to yourself.
maneet's milan was beautifully written.finally they are now joined in mind,body and soul.i am going to miss reading about our chalu maan,BCC and mumbiker sherni.
thx for comming up with this amazing story.loved reading it and i especially enjoyed the banter between chalu delhiwala and mumbai sherni.
appreciate sending me the pm and the pw dear.
take care.

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 7:56pm | IP Logged
such a lovely update avi. all these days wait got over for BCC and wifey. it was such a lovely and happy moment for the both souls who had gone through so much in their lifes and finding a beautiful life. Mumbaikar and delhi wale mein dono barabar nikale. kabhi ek aagay tho kabhi dusraLOL

this time i am not going to force u for another story. par ek request tho kar sakthi hoon. beech beech mein agar time and baaki sab cheezen saath degi tho small os hi sahi dedena. we will feel happy with that small osEmbarrassed


enjoy ur new phase as a readerLOLLOLagar kisine meri ek comment padi tho sach mein maarenge mujhe ki main tujhe support karne lagi hoon to be a reader for somedays.LOL


I am going to miss making vm's Cry.Main jyaada teri liye hi vm's banathi thi and i used to enjoy a lot, because tuhi mujhe different different dekar sochne par majboor karthi thi aur main nayi nayi seekh jathi thi.

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
Awesome update.  Love Maaneet moments and their jealousy.  Wow the wedding day is finally

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
Hww. So amazing part.. Avi.. U are an awesome writer in writing love scenes too.. finally Delhikar n mumbaikar became one.. n today too on SR Geet's BCC didn't leave his chalugiri... He is perfect chalu n knows very well when his Geet needs dose of his chalugiri.. Embarrassed Nice ending.. would love to see maneet's extended family... but as it's last part... will miss this story. n U r reposting locket.. ? Big smile

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
Lovely part ...the song selection was absolutely apt.please treat us with a few epilogues.The journey of this SS was beautiful,love your writing style,please don't stop .Waiting for your new ff.
Best of luck

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