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Teri Ummeed Tera Intezaar Karte hai (11), link new story pg 135 (Page 68)

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Avi... thanks for the PM. Maan i love his character. He such an awesome person. He took care of everyone. I was overwhelmed when i read about maan's thought with megha. I have always loved all the characteristics in your story. Not just Maaneet! You are the first one that made me like and love other characters in your stories. Like Dev- Tara, Megha- Kabir, Adi-Pinky. Chand-Poonam. Oh i almost forgot Daadi and Daarji... I guess there are other too. Finally maaneet are married wow! thanks for the pm again. Happy new year Avi :)

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
thaks for pm love this ff and last part amazing.can't believe it ends here.

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
you are amazing writer I love your stories plz keep writing.

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
beautiful end of a beautiful story ...



Edited by annbell - 09 January 2015 at 11:05pm

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 12:22am | IP Logged
Fabulous update!  Finally they became one.  nice romantic end to this lovely story.  The whole story was filled with love, passion, and romance.  very well written story full every emotion.

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 12:25am | IP Logged
awesome, romantic and passionate  BCC  Update
beautifully written..
Please ek aisi hi mere liye bhi likh do na..
mujhse itna bhi nahin hoga..

so the war between Mumbaikar and dilliwala goes on...
so now youa re gong to be a reader from now...That's good but  do this only for a short period..
and want to see you back as writer..

Now the comment about the VM...

you know jaise hi VM shuru hua main to darr gayi,,,Ki Geet ko kya hua..
Maan ko darwaza band bhi nahin karne diya aur shuru ho gayi ...
ang laga le re...
main to samjhi ki Maan ussi khule darwaaze se bahar bhaag jaayega ye soch kar ki ye Geet hi hai ya ko aurROFL
Yaar Geet kam se kam darwaza to band karne deti..
Maan ko ek saans to lene deti..wo kaun sa kahin bhaga ja raha hai
ab to tumhara kaidi hai baandh kar rakhna hamesha ke liye aponi julfon me..
Khyaal rakhna Maan ka..

Thanks Avi for this story..

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 12:32am | IP Logged
wow what a SR !!!!Wink BCC delhiwala and apni sherni mumbaiker...kashmir n kanyakumari wala gana yaad aa gayaTongueTongue
i m very sad that this story is coming to an end...but as they say...all good things must come to an endConfused

i will miss this story.journey was beautiful.

do let me know if u r writing any new story...or any writer writes some story as good as URS

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 12:43am | IP Logged
A lovely end to a lovely story. At last they are one and together in all sense. They had to overcome many hurdles but if you truly love someone then it's worth it and it makes your appreciate that person more and Maan and Geet definitely will and do appreciate each other more.Tongue
Sad to see their story end and even sadder to hear that this will be your last contribution as a writerCry.  IF has today lost a fantastic writer and it will not be the same without one of your stories. All that is left to be said is thank you for the lovely stories you have given us.ClapClap

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