Teri Ummeed Tera Intezaar Karte hai (11), link new story pg 135 - Page 83

Posted: 8 years ago
11th part...

Maan...is so much mastikor..nd besharamm...lo uske purse may haath maar liya...
hahha...nd a new demand too...aww...
geet is so missin her mother nd loved how he was tryin to cheer her up


o terihe confessed😲
though am glad that he confessed his love, even if d timing  n situation,is wron
nd not in his favour...
 but I guess..it was only his way to prove her nd make her belive dat she is not alone..nd he is der for her
even she is rt n her place..
Though her words hurts him,
good dat he  didn't let the hurt to overshadow in his mind...
it was best ..part..emotional yet lovely in its own way...
Posted: 8 years ago
12th part...

Good dat geet heard wat Maan ..was tellin to dat devil..nd she knows..he is true to his heart..
nd she believed him...
love his passion for his work

HEHHEHEHEH he jus needed a word..nd lo shuru ho gayi uski flirting...
heheheh...kya kaha...mujhe maro lekin bacho ko nahi..lolπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
nd geet ka face was worth watching..nd loved der masti..dat cute moments😳😳😳😳😳😳

den came d dinner...haaye..he is so mesmerised seeing her in sari..lo again flirting..never
leaves a chance ha..waise geet was all droolin on maan...
aag toh dono taaraf barabar ki lagi hai...😳😳😳😳😳

lovly romantic...fun n flirt nd drool filled update..
Posted: 8 years ago
13th part...

Dis was such a romantic part..
loved der cute nok jok..his promise...
her submission...dose romance...dose passion

😳
not to forget dat dinner...seriously 5 star πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

wen i was readin dis part..i so hate dat pammin😑😑😑
for partin dis two souls...

loved dat song...though am not familiar wit all dis old song..bt know dis one
Abhi na ja...dat to coz i had heard dat song. in MadhubalaπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

lovly romantic dinner😳😳😳

Posted: 8 years ago
14th part...


EEERRR😑😑😑😑
dis Pammi...i hate hate...dat lady...

first usne maan ka khaan bara..nd den his mu hearing about engagment...he really realyy thought
dat she bertrayed him...


bechari ke 150 rs ke phool toh gaya...hi...nd maan ko ghar cofee say nehla b diya..


lovling dis past n present transition ...
oh so tara is match maker...nd Mallik..

lovly part...

Posted: 8 years ago
15th part...

Loved dose jelous..sher...poor armaan better b away from geet warna..gaya maan ke haatho...

geet nd her dreams😳😳😳
yeh toh totally smitten by maan ka charms..lol...
maan was so worried for her..
he should really confront her ..nd know dat she has forgottn ..der good memories...

lovly part..

Posted: 8 years ago
16th,,, part...


Oteri..dey again kissed..she submitted herself to himm..though her mind has forgotton him..n his 'love bt her body n heart..still knows his touch ...
dat kiss for maan was like..a  water...easing d fire dat is buring in his heart for a long...
dat was ☺️

he dis sasha,..kabab main haddi😑😑😑😑

bt den again wat followed was hehehehehh!!!!!

der d old Maan nd his prank and naugtiness..is back...i so loved dat old maan...
nd bechari geet kitne naam degi maan ko...
bt i so so loved dis part..😳😳😳😳

Posted: 8 years ago
17th & 18th part...

Hahhahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i thought yaha tho...hum tum wit a twist hoga...

heheheh full day na geet kuch kaam kiya...na hi maan...
nd wen he met in eveing ...dat was worth...
aww..he so cant take his hands of her..
nd love d way geet submit herself to him unknowingly as if she belongs to him


aww...geet ..be ...shyam lal ko band kar diya maan ke saath in his cabin'

bt maan is so smarty...window say khud gayaπŸ˜†

nd den wat followed dat was so cute..
geet ka bond wit dat children...

goodd now maan is determined to make her his,,,he knows his geet cant be likedis..
his geet is bubbly nd innocent ...cant wait to see...
how he gonna react wen he comes to know...
about geet ka indifferent behaviour is coz of her amnesia...

forget..wat he ll do ..wen he comes to know..who is behind all dis...
lovlypart..

Edited by Desire6 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
19th part...

So true..nd apt title...
likea Tornado...in a night usne..KF ka naksha hi badal diya..
so nice of himm

oh My my...dono J..one coz of girl..nd one coz of romeo...
so true...
ek bhooka sher...
nd dosri ghayal sherni...

cant wait to read d party...

amazing part..
Thanks for Pm...

waiitn
waitn
Edited by Desire6 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
part20...
Ghayal geet was so dangerous... nd poor maa was lk...unaware dat..
maine aisa kya kiya..ki..she is so so angry...
nd moreover...loved how he convinced her..dat she is all his...
unaware of d fact dat she is unkown to der past..nd y she is angry towards him...
finally geet maan gayi...
maan...nd his kiss...dat was...so ... 😳
lovly part
Posted: 8 years ago
Both jealous πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Loved d dance dat was passion filled..
Aww poor Adi... πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Kya blacmailing tha...

Bechara...bt den...adi...b...maan ko teased a lot
Nf nakul ka reaction on Maan ka behavior .🀣
Oh so maan is gonna bring geet homr...
Hopedat pammi... 😑

Loved dis passion nd love filled updt a lot...
πŸ˜† πŸ˜›

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