Teri Ummeed Tera Intezaar Karte hai (11), link new story pg 135 - Page 47

Awesome update. Lovely end to a lovely story. Please don't say goodbye. lts writers like you who have forced silent readers like me to start commenting on stories. You write when you get the time.
Feeling bad that tthe story has come to an end. Will miss BCC and his Mumbaikar sherni.

Awesome superb romantic story loved it and enjoyed it superb ending

1. Indiegirl says:
   January 9, 2015 at 1:37 pm

   You cannot say Goodbye to us, I was going to ask you when are you starting a new ff...please no goodbyes..love your writing and this cannot be the last part, epilogue please...although must say the last part was awesome, perfect song selection and emotions portrayed beautifully..
   Thnx and waiting for new ff and epilogue

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hi thanks 4 da pm...y goodbye...u must continue writing! such talent shld nt b wasted! pls write something new! Rocking fab update! beautifully written! Awesome song! terrific pics! Maaneet married! its their most awaited SR! Maan admires his gorgeous wife! he teases her! n Geet understands! they become one! her dreams are fulfilled! thanks 4 a spectacular FF! will miss this story! please post epilogue! ⭐️ 👏 😊

Fantabulous update..but feeling sad that it ended..Maaneet bonded forever and enjoying the marital bliss..Well narrated story..Loved it..But pls don't stop writing completely as every other person is not a story teller..Only few blessed ones can do so..Will miss this one for sure..👏

beautiful ending...or lets say beautiful start to their future !! atlast delhiwale...mumbaiwale ek hogaye hai !! wonderful piece of work...you are a fabulous writer avi...love your writing alot...will be waiting for a new story from you...ab keliye waiting for the epilogue...

Fabulous update... 👏 👏

Nice part. Can't beleive that it has come to an end.

beautifl..
an amazing story..aftr a long wait n bearing a lots of pain..Maan n Geet bcm one..4evr..
Maan got hiz wsh..hiz Geet..uski umeed uska intezaar khtm hua..n it filld hiz lyf wid luv n blessings..he waz longing 4..
V were xpcting sm mor parts..
thnx Avi 4 such a fab luv story of MAANEET..
V r luking 4wrd 2 d nxt story of urs..

Beautiful story
I loved it from t first word
Just a beautifully written story
Love it
Thanks again