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~Akdha FF Humsafar~ Chapter-3 updated Page No.-20 09/02/2015 (Page 6)

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Hi Krina...Hug finally I got to know your name...Big smile

Awesome prologue...Tongue

Ruk exposure...Day Dreaming Ab to FFs mai hi padhana padega...Wink
How old is Salim BTW?

waiting for 1st chapter...update soon..Embarrassed

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interesting dear.. update the chapi soon & do pm...

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Hi, guys 
sorry for i can't personally thanks to all the members to incurage me posting nice view related to my stories. because i included in groupbie so groupbie members only post 20 updates in 24 hours. so it's my limitation. thank you so much to all...Smile

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i surly pm to all readers. ok and i update my first chap today. chapter is ready but i can't posting because above limitation.




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Amazing start... Pm me when u update..
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**~Chapter-1~**

Year 1583,

Thand ka mosam ke ek shuhansi shubha thi. Pura agra bhut khush tha. Or akhir khush kyo na ho unka vhaliyat sadhe 5 shal bad mehel jo wapash aya tha. (In serial 7 years I changed this thing because one surprise waiting for you) Or ishi khushi ke moke par shenshane ye elan kya tha ke vo bhut bada jahsn manyge valihat ke vapash lotne ke moke par. Sabhi alha audhe adro ko ye suchna de gye the jushn bhuthi shandar or bada hona chye. Sbhi jhshn ke tyareo me juthe hue the. Sbhi ke khushi ka koi thika na nhi the. Par in me she jo do logo ko subshe jyada khush hona chye wohi khush nhithe. Wo the Jodha or Jalal. Kyoke unka beta salim unse khfah tha. Wo undono se nafarat kar ne lagatha. Jo shaja use shensha ne de the wo use galat lag rhi the. In shade 5 salome bhout kuch badal gya tha. Par agur kuch nhi badala tha to wo thi Jodha or akbar ke mohhabat. Wo aje bhi bilkul nie jeshi thi. Undono ka sahath ake dushre ke liye belkul vhesha ka vheshi tha. Ake dushre keliye marne mitne keliye tyar the. Nfarat she suru hui ye dashtan kab mohhobat me badl gye or kab wo dono ek dushre ke suche humshfar ban gye une pata hi nhi cala.(I know you waiting for this Jalal and Jodha  Love for each other.) Big smileOr in subme ek or achi bat ye the ke shensha ke baki do beta Murad or Danial wo dono apni apni umar she jyada samjdar the. Wo dono keliye jodha unke ammijanse bhi bad kar the. (Guys I not changed this thing in my story because I cahnged this thing so I start my story after hassan and hussan death. And my story main focush is changed so murad is salima begums son. After Murad mother died salima begum takes his responshiblity as a mother and Danial is pash begum son)Smile. Aur wo dono ke liye jodha begum ke mukh se nikla hua har shubdda (words) pathar ke lakir banjate. Wo dono shirf jodha begum ko hi nhi balki shensha ka bhi har farman mante the. Wo apne abujjan ko khi na khi samj te the jo salim nhi sumaj parha tha. Wo dono salim ko apane bade bhi mante the. Un dono keliye salim kabhi bhi sotela bhi nhita. Wo dono kabhi bhi nhi chathe the ke koi bhi unke salim bhijan ka hak unshe chinle wo dono khudbhi nhi. Wo do no salim ko syashi mamlo me madad kar na chathe take salim bhi shensha or unke abujjan Akbar ke tarha ake acha shensha ban pye bhvishy me.

Jalal har roj ke tarha aje bhi shubhe shubhe hi talvar baji ka riyaj kar raha tha. Tabhi uske najar uske jodha begum par jate he. Jodha har roj ke tarha aje bhi Tulshi puja keliye anguri baag me aye hui he. Ye har roj ka niyam tha undono ke liye. Jabhi jodha tulshi puja karte tab wo talawar baji karte karte use dekhna. Har roj ushe jodha ke chere me ake nie camak dhikhi derhi thi par aaj use camak me khi kamishi lag rhithi. Ushe pata nhi tha ke esha kya hua he par use itna jarur malum tha ke ye bat salim se judi hui he.

Jalal (thought): esha kya hua he jodha begum jo app ish tarh se uddash dekh rhi he. Itna kamjor or uddash to hamne apko tabhi nhi dhekha tha jub salim medani juang me gye the. Tabhi aapne apne apko majbut kar ke sambhal liya tha. Kyou ke ye apke bete or mugal saltnat ke bhavisya ko lekar mamla tha. To phir aje aesha kya hogya jo aap pne apko chakar bhi sambal nhi parhi he. Jodha begum app jante hena app bhalehi subshe appne gumo ko chupa le par app humshe kuch nhi chupa shakte. To phir ashe nakamyab pryatn kyo kar te he. Hame ek bat ka to ehsshs he ke ye bat Salim se judi hui he par kya he wo hame pata nhi cal rha. Or hum ye bhi jante he ke app hame ye bat nhi batayege. Kyoki apko lgta he ke apke batane she khi hamare or salim ke bech pareshaniya badh na jye. Or hum apke bat ko jankar or jyada dukhi na hojye. Eshi liye app hamshe ye bat chupa rhi he. Par jodha begum hum apko ish tarh kamjor hota hua nhi dekh sakte. Hum apko ishe tarha kamjor nhi honedege. Abb bush bhut hua abb hame apne wo jodha wapish chye. Jo bena khouf khe kese ke bhi sine par talvar rakh sahke he. Jo ake shath kye dushmano par bahri pud sakte he. Jo kishi bhi mushkil parishiti ka samna kar sakte he. Hum use jodha ko wapsh jarur lakar rahege.

Jodha: he devi ma hum jante he ke hum shensha ko kal jo humare salim ke madhe jo bat hui wo nhi bata kar thik nhi kar rhe. Par hum nhi chathe ke shensha or jyada pareshan ho. Wo phle sehi salim ke mamle ko lekar itne pareshan he. Aur hum ne ye bat unhe batadi towo aur bhi jyada pareshan ho jyege. Aur salim or shensha ke bhich me preshniya aur bhi badh jayegi. Hum shensha ko or jyada pareshan hote hua nhi dekh shke devi ma.

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Salim: kyo aye he app yaha. Or abb or kya chye apko humshe. App dekhnhi rhi hum kuch der tanha rehna chte he.Angry

Jodha: salim bate hum to bush tum he dkhne aye the ke tume kishi bhi chige ke avsykata to nhi. Or shath me socha tumshe thode bate bhi hojyge.

Salim: hume apshe koi bat nhi karne. Ager hume koi bhi chige ke jarurat hoge to uska khyal rakhne keliye humare ammijan he. Hume mariam-uz-zamani ke madad ke koi avsykta nhi he.

Jodha (in tears eyes): esha mat kho salim hum tumhari maa he. Hum tumarre mukh she masha sune keliye tarash rhe he beta. Ake bar to hume masha khkar pukaro. Hum tumhare mhukh se masha sunne ke liye kuch bhi kar ne keliye tyar he salim. Bush ake bar hume mash kehkar pukaro. (she sit on the flore and holding her hands)Cry

Salim: nhi app humari maa nhi he. Humri ma shirf or shirf rukiya ammijan he. App humari maa hote to hume apne apshe itna dor na kardete. Agar app humshe mohhabat karte hote to hume ye sahja nahi ho ne dete. App humare liye shirf mariam-uz-zamani ke alva or kuch nhi he. Or agur app hume kuch dena cahte he to bus hum she dur rhi ye. Bush itna kar dejye. Apka bhut bada ehshan hoga hum par mariam-uz-zamani.

Jodha(In storng voice and stand): theke salim agar tumari yehi jidd he or tumarhi yhi mang he to hum tumare ish mang ko avsy he pura kare ge. Hum ye vachan de te he tumhe hum na to tumare pass ayege, nhi tumshe bat karge, nhi tum par kbhi bhi tumhari maa hone ka hak jatyge. Or nhi kabhibhi tumshe milne ke koshish karege. Aje ke bad hum kabhibhi tumshe nhi milge. Or nhi tumhare rashte me ayege. Jabtak tum nhi chte hum esha kuch bhi nhi karge jo tume humshe majburi me bat karni pade.Ye ake rajvanshi maa ka vachan he tumshe. Par ek bat yad rakhna salim tum khud calkar humare pass aaouge or hume maa kehkar pukaro ge. Tumhe bhut jaldhi tumare galtiyo ka or ish nashmjioka ehshash bhi hoga. Tum bhale hi ish waqk hamre prem ko najar andaj karo par tum jyada waqk tak dor nhi reh poge humshe. Abb dekhna yehe ke ake make mumta jit te he ke ek bete ki jidd. Hume apni mumta pe pura bhrosh he salim. (and jodha left salim room.)Clap

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So guys, how was the chapter? I am waiting for your views and suggestions.



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Wow cuty!!!amazing chappy..i just read first few lines and undrstand it..RES..let me read first..

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super cool chapter di.very nice update and thanks for the pm.update the next chappy soon di can't wait.

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