SS- AsMi: Its Destiny Part 2 updated

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I thought about Ashok and mihika as a pair and that what would happen if in mere future ashok's character is changed to positive... And this idea clicked me and i thought of sharing this with you guyzz... Hope you all like it...😊😊 Edited by 13MEGHA05 - 9 years ago

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Index:
Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - Page 3

Edited by 13MEGHA05 - 9 years ago
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Part 1

The entire bhalla and iyer family are discussing about ashok and mihika.

Ishu: Raman, muzhe lagta hai zaroor uss ashok ne mihika ko dhamkaya hai, varna humari mihika, paison ke liye, yeh sab, kabhi nahi kar sakti.. impossible..

Raman: yeh toh main bhi samaj raha hun, par pata kaise kare?

Romie: Bhai abhi jaake uss ashok ki haddiyan tod dete hai toh tote ki tarah rattega sab saach...

Ishu: nahi romie uss din raman ne yahi kiya tha pata hai na tumhe.. wo ashok kuch nahi bolega aur upar se mihika uski tarafdari karegi...  Kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai...

Toshiji: muzhe toh mihir ki bahot fikar ho rahi hai... kaise sambhala hai usko yeh hum hi jaante hai...

Mr. iyer: yeh toh accha hua ke mihir ko raman ke jagah Singapore bhej diya. Thoda kaam mein dhyaan dega toh iss sab se bahar aa jayega.

Everybody nodding to these words of appa.

Vandu: par ab kare kya?

After couple of minutes.

Ishu: idea!!!

She murmurs something and everybody nods...

Toshiji: oye Ishita yeh bada changa idea hai... Ab toh maza ayega... kyun samdhan?

Amma: haan.. ab main dikahti uss ashok ko...

Eveybody gives a wicked smile...

At ashok's house...

Ashok sitting on the couch...

Ashok (to himself): yaar yeh ladkiyan bhi na... duniya bhar ka attitude leke ghumti hai.. aur yeh mihika, jitna socha tha usse bhi jyaada akkal aur akkad hai... (gives his usual smile) par hai badi tez!!!

Suddenly the phone rings...

Ashok: Hello.. Ashok khanna here...

Amma: Aiyyo... ab tumhara ghar pe phone karega toh tum hi uthayega na...

Ashok (shocked): kya? Kaun hein?

Amma: Aiyyo murugan mein bol raha hai.. mihika ka peri amma...

Ashok: Kya? Pa..pa..pe..ri.. amma...

(to himself) Yeh kaunsi nayi amma hai...??? Anyways..

(he speaks to amma) Ek second rukiye...

He runs towards the bedroom where mihika is sitting on the floor with swollen eyes... seeing ashok she stands up erect and was almost ready to start the fight, when ashok gestures her to keep quiet and shows her the phone...

Ashok: lo.. kisi pari ya peri AMMA ka phone hai...

Mihika (her face lightens up): kya? Peri amma ka phone hai...

She snatches the phone from him...

Ashok: yeh toh aise khush hogayi jaise pata nahi kisi pradhan mantra ka phone ho.. hush!!!

He sits on the couch... mihika was too happy to notice him...

Mihika: hello peri amma.. (tears built in her eyes and her voice choked.)

Amma: mihika.. (she spoke with all the affection she had.) Mihika tumne shaadi kiya aur..

Mihika: Bass peri amma ab apne agar muzhe meri galti ka ehsaas karane ke liye phone kiya hai toh main apko pehle hi bol deti hun muzhe nahi lagta maine koi bhi galti ki...

Amma: aiyyo.. nahi mihika maine tumhe samjhaane ya daatne phone nahi kiya hai. Hum sab ne ab yeh baat maan li hai ki tumhari aur ashok ki shaadi ho gayi hai.. aur hum tumhare liye khush hai...

Mihika tightly shut her eyes but the tears didn't stop.

Amma: ab shaadi toh ho gayi... main chahti hun main apni beti aur damad ko ashirwaad dun. Issliye maine aur tumhare peri appa ne tum dono ke liye dinner organize kiya hai.. agar tum aa sako toh.. koi jabardasti nahi hai.. par...

Mihika: per..

Amma had already disconnected the phone.

Toshiji: yeh hui level 1..

Amma: Ab level 2 ki baari..

On the other side...

Mihika sits on the bed covering her face...

Ashok: kya hua? Dur se bata sakti ho.. maybe I can help you...

Mihika: tu toh khudki madat nahi karsakta aur chala meri madat karne..

Ashok: tumse ek baat puchu? Puchne ki kya baat hai puch hi leta hun.. tum mein kitne aur roop hai.. abhi ro rahi thi, use pehle udas thi ab kaalika ke jaise muzhpe apna raudra roop dikha rahi ho..

Mihika: that's none of your business...

Ashok: bhalai ka toh zamana hi nahi raha.. acchi khasi madat karraha tha.. pr.. let it be.. jaise tumhari marji...

Ashok starts leaving the room..

Mihika (to herself): agar ek baar amma ke paas gayi toh amma ko accha lagega.. maine pehle hi unhe bahot hurt kiya hai..

Mihika: A Ruk!!

Ashok: kaun? Main...

Mihika: jyaada nautanki mat kar! Aj sham ko hum dinner pe ja rahe hai...

Ashok: main janta tha.. jitni bhi akad dikha lo.. akhir ladki ladki hoti hai.. phir wo shagun ho ya tum...

Mihika: you dare not compare me with shagun... hum date pe nahi ja rahe hai. Hum peri amma ke ghar ja rahe hai dinner ke liye.. samajhe...

Ashok: oh.. ek pal ke liye tumhne muzhe khush kar diya tha.. but its okay aaj peri amma ke pas toh shayad kal hum date pe bhi jaye.. You never know!

Mihika: din mein sapne mat dekh, muh ke bal gir jayega...

Ashok: Mera sapna toh mere aankhon ke samne hai.. TUM!

Mihika smirks... .

Mihika: tayar ho jao humein jaana  hai..

Ashok leaves the room.

In bhalla house...

Toshiji: ab wo kamina humari mihika ko leke ata hi hoga... Ishita puttar sab ready hai na..

Ishu: everything is perfect.. aap sabko yaad hai na kya karna hai..

Everybody: YES!

At ashok's house,

Ashok was waiting downstairs...

Ashok: yeh ladkiyaan bahot time lagati hai yaar...

Mihika walked down from the stair case... She was wearing a pink saree and she was looking very pretty...

Mihika: chale.. (she said with an attitude.. and walked ahead)

Ashok (still staring at her): Yaar yeh toh meri jaan leke rahegi!!!😳😳


Hope you all liked it.. please leave behind your comments...😃

shravani_2311 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
thnks fr pm...
strt was suprb...
waitng fr nxt...
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Intrstng start
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
very very interesting!
ekdum real feel aa raha tha :D
So I'm eager to read further...PM pls?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok havent read it first lets me celebrate
First AshMi SS 😎 🥳 thanks for this 🤗
The_Imane thumbnail
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Great start
Loved it!!
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very interesting update
thanks for the pm
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Thanks a lot...😊