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Arshi FF : My First Love...~THREAD 4~Chapter 58~Pg57~17/3 (Page 37)

smat IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4100

Posted: 20 February 2015 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Sorry to hear that your stories are being  copied 
Don't let these people win by discontinuing the stories.
Name and shame that person 
Thanks for the note
Looking forward to reading your stories in the  future 

mahrusweety IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8278

Posted: 21 February 2015 at 4:12am | IP Logged
sad to hear
that ur stories are being copied
start a blog
i think thats the only option
sunitikapoor IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10126

Posted: 21 February 2015 at 7:30am | IP Logged
It is really sad to hear that someone is copied your hard work...whatever you will decide we will be with you.  you can start the blog with the invites
Nickysweet IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 February 2015 at 6:53am | IP Logged
no anju u should continue your story..i don't know who is the writer who has similar story but fav writer doesn't mean she should copy it anyways i just wanted u to continue your story
would love to read your story
whether i got time or not but will surely tried to read your updates
Nickysweet IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 February 2015 at 7:04am | IP Logged
hi anju..kaise hain tu
read if stories after so long
i was like what the after reading my name hereShocked
yeh sab kya hain aur meenu ko bhi add karli tune heheLOL
i m totally overwhelmed to know u love u so so much..muah
sorry main tere pehle ke update padh nahi payi due to marriage
but from now i will try to follow it regularly
love u meri jaan
update was superb
loved the new twist by your akila diBig smile

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yoga123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 February 2015 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
It is so sad to hear...may be you can open a blog and restrict the access...
Payaash Goldie

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Posted: 25 February 2015 at 8:11am | IP Logged

Chapter 57

Credit goes to starry.phoenix Hug

We short the first episode where I met  the rest of the cast . We all became quite close on the first day itself . 

I drove back home at 7:50 pm . I reached that place in 5 minutes . I stood there staring at this house . How can I stay with a guy unmarried ! It is so cheap ! And both our families accepted it so easily ! How is it even possible ! 

I took my bags inside and opened the door . I collapsed on the sofa . Am I abnormal ? Because I'm the only one thinking that this is wrong . Rest all are okay with it ! How is this even possible ? 

My phone ringed . 

Khushi : Hello .. 

Mahira : Where are you staying ? I landed in Mumbai . 

I narrated her the whole story to Mahira .. 

Mahira : How are you now ? 

I didn't know what I have to say ! I was alright at my workplace but here the idea of staying with a man unmarried is haunting me . And that too ASR !! Not so good .. But who is there to listen to me ? 

Mahira : Tell me where you are .. I'll come there ..


Mahira came to this house . She spoke with me and said she will talk to him . I told her he won't listen but she said she's not going to let this happen to me . 

I asked her to relax while I had a bathe . We both started preparing dinner for three of us . 

And her wait was over . He came home . 

Arnav : This is my personal life so it's better for you to stay away . I'll book a room for you in hotel don't worry . 

Mahira : If it was your life Mr. Raizada I wouldn't even care but this is related to my sister Khushi . So I'm speaking for her because she is confused now . Please stop making her life a living hell . 

Arnav : I'm just doing what's good for her . Good for us

He said glaring at me . 

Mahira : Please respect Khushi's feelings . Why no one really cares for her feelings ? She doesn't want to be with you ? It's her life . Can't she have an equal say in this matter ? 

Arnav : I already answered this before Mahira . 

Mahira : Do you even love Khushi ? If you really do .. Why don't you respect her ? 

Arnav : ENOUGH !! 

He yelled on top of his voice . 

Arnav : I'm bearing all this just because you are Khushi's friend ! Or else .

Khushi : You're being rude Arnav . 

I came in between them . He clutched my arms tightly . 

Arnav : Better control your friends . No one ever talks to me like this . Got it ?

Tears rolled down my cheeks and his eyes were spitting fire . 

Mahira : Your sick Arnav !! Just leave her !! 

He didn't leave me nor he broke our eye lock . 


I went to my set . It's so fun to act with such a wonderful cast . We were actually getting closer . 

Akhil : Let's hangout ! This Sunday . It'll be fun . 

Khushi : I'll ask my mother and tell you ..  

Pratyusha : Uff .. Come on Khushi .. We all are coming na .. 


I drove home .. His home .., 

I entered home and sat on the sofa . Thinking about him .. Thinking about me .. Thinking about us ... 

The door bell rang and I opened the door .. 

BOY : Ma'am you are Khushi Gupta ? 

Khushi : Ji ,, 

He handled me a envelope , made me sign on a paper and left . I opened it and saw a membership card . It has my name , membership number , some code and my picture . 

Khushi : Membership card ? 

I inverted the envelope and there was another card with a few papers . I flipped it over . 

Khushi : Arnav's card ? Who filled all the forms ?? 

I saw our cards again . 

Khushi : Of course he would do that . 

He entered without even knocking the door . He saw me with those cards . He walked up to me and took his card from me . 

I gave him a questioning glance . 
Arnav : I'm not in a mood to argue with you now .. Just let it be . 

I got up rashly and headed to the kitchen . My Amma called me but I didn't answer her call , why should I ? She leaves me here with a guy all alone and she thinks it is right ? How can she change so suddenly ? I tried to contact jiji but she's not answering my call . She's busy . I messaged jiju too but he didn't see it yet . I know after they see it they will talk to my family but I don't know when they will get free . They are very busy as they spent a lot of time with this . 

He entered the room all changed into his night dress . 

Arnav : Why aren't you answering Aunty's call ? 

I didn't reply back . I don't want to . He caught my arm and turned me to face him . 

Arnav : What did she do that you are punishing her ? I did all this . If you have any guts get it cleared with me . Stop doing this to our family . 

Khushi : My family Mr. Raizada . Not yours . 

I saw his rage building up in his eyes . 

Khushi : It would be better if you stop interfering in my life . Got it ? 

He caught my other arm and pulled me closer . 

Arnav : I'm not in a good mood and don't make me break my promise ! Just keep quiet . 

He said gritting his teeth . He left me and got out of the kitchen . I don't know what I'm here for ? Why should he even stay with me ? Or why should we stay together ? 

There are a pool of questions brimming in my head . But there's no answer for those millions of questions . 

I answered Amma's call . She was apologising for her mistake . 

Amma : Believe me Khushi ... Everything is going to be fine .

Khushi : Good night Amma . 

I said showing off my arrogance . 

I ate my dinner and got to bed . I don't know what he will eat as I didn't cook anything for him . But I kept the fruit basket on the dining table so that he can eat something . 


I went to the clubhouse with my membership card early in the morning . I fulfilled a few formalities and got a sports card . I can play any game or join in the gym with this card . I went to the gym and saw a few trainers there . I was surprised to see Arnav there exercising . There was a trainer helping him . He saw me and ran out of the gym . I went to the badminton court and played the game with the coach . After thirty minutes I got back to home . Had a relaxing bathe and changed into a long skirt . I prayed to God .  I had my breakfast and rushed to my set . 

The crew welcomed me with broad smiles and I wished them back . I got into my green room and changed into the protagonist's outfit . I walked out of the room not before styling my hair and applying a bit of makeup . 

I gave my shot and relaxed on the sofa . Pratyusha sat beside me after her shot and we both started to talk about some girly gossips . She is by the way my co-actor who is playing the role of the protagonist's sister .  We then went through our scripts and tried hard to memorise our conversations . 

The other cast also came and gave their shot . And it was our turn now [Me and Pratyusha ] .

After that we shifted to the other set where I had to shoot with Akhil . We both actually are becoming good friends . I thought he would show attitude to me as he is already successful in this field but no ! He is so down to earth and jovial person . He's overall a funny guy . With tons of jokes stored in his memory . 

We have to complete a set of episodes in 5 days . And this needs a lot of effort , strength, brain and energy . It's getting quite hectic for me but people around me are trying there level best to make me stress free . All thanks to Rakesh Uncle . 


I had to work for 17 long hours which is very tiring . I got into the house and saw Arnav working on his laptop . He saw me . I closed the door and headed to my room . I threw all my bags and had a relaxing bathe and continued with my beauty regime . I went to the kitchen . 

I started cutting apples and saw him entering the kitchen . He opened the fridge and placed a tray with a bowl of salad  , sandwich and a juice in front of me . 

I really wanted to eat all of those but I didn't . My eyes were urging me to look at those tempting food but my brain constantly reminds me that it is Arnav who bought all those for me just to impress me . My heart argues that he is actually taking care of me and it is my decency to accept his kindness . 

Arnav : Stop struggling so much . Just eat this I won't mind . 

And what about him ? 

Arnav : I already had my dinner . I bought this for you . But Sheetal made this juice . 

I looked at him with a questioning glare . 

Arnav : Aman and Sheetal are here to help me out with the business and she made this juice and asked me to give it to you . She told me tis your favourite . 

A small smile stretched my lips . I looked down . But what will I do with these apples which I already chopped . 

Arnav : I will eat these apples . 

I took a plate and placed those Apple pieces on it . I kept the rest of the apples in the fridge and took my tray . We both entered the dining hall . I sat on a chair and he sat exactly opposite . I had my dinner and so did he . 

I entered my room and collapsed on my bed . I seriously don't want to live with him . I don't know why my fa,ily turned out to be so shameless . I'm praying that my sister just gets free and gets to know what they planned for me here in Mumbai . 

She's the only one who can actually save me in the entire world . Because Arnav really respects her and he very well knows that he can't argue with her . She can easily win over him . But the possibilities are neutral . Because Arnav is equally intelligent as her and he can make all the tables turn . 

I drifted to sleep . And all my questions are left unanswered  .

Edited by Payaash - 25 February 2015 at 8:13am

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Payaash Goldie

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Posted: 25 February 2015 at 8:20am | IP Logged


I will end this story soon ... A few more chapters and I will decide if I have to continue writing or quit writing completely Big smile

Let me be clear .. I may leave this forum completely ... Cuz I'm very busy and I hardly get some time for myself .. So I will miss being here ... And you amazing people .. 

Let's see what God has stored in for me .. 

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