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Arshi FF : My First Love...~THREAD 4~Chapter 58~Pg57~17/3 (Page 12)

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Amazing update dear
Happy New year dear
Wish 2015 bring many hhappiness in years life
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Chapter 53

Credit goes to starry.phoenix Hug

He took the thali and prayed God , not with devotion for sure .

He passed the thali to Amma and bua ji . He came back next to me - all the while looking at me . 

We both couldn't concentrate on the ritual . We both stood there still - all confused our minds messed up . All because of me . I know . 

But he loved Swathi so much ! I've seen it with my very own eyes . The way they took pictures together , the way Swathi used to flaunt that she has a perfect long relationship that no one ever did and that too with the hottest guy of school . Everything was perfect for them but I messed it all . 

Swathi suits his standards . She is rich enough to be Mrs.Raizada . I'm not rich . I'm a middle class girl . And my dreams shall never be so high . 

We stole glances at each other . 

I think God understood my uneasiness . The ritual ended . 

We all sat down on the steps . It is said that our body and soul will get rejuvenated and refreshed if we spend most of our time in a pleasant atmosphere like in the temples . I totally agree with that . But today I feel like contradicting it . 

My anxiety is increasing but not decreasing . Seeing Arnav like this is increasing my nervousness . 

Bhabhi took  everyone other than Aunty , Arnav and me somewhere . 

Anjali : We will be back . 

I wanted to know where they were going . But I didn't ask . Amma says that we shouldn't ask anyone About their work even before they do it . 

Now it is more uncomfortable as well as scary . I'm with Aunty - who is all upset with me and Arnav - who now seems to be the typical silent ASR . 

Arnav was stealing glances at me , Aunty was looking at the other side and I was looking everywhere . I want to talk to Aunty alone . But he is here . How should I even talk to her ? I first have to know why is she even upset with me ? Then the rest of the questions depends on her reaction . 

Arnav got up suddenly . Aunty and I looked at him . He went away from there as if he read my mind . 
Khushi : Aaa ... Aunt-tty ... Umm Aunty ... Can I please talk to you ? 

She turned towards me .

I got down by a step and sat beside her and placed my hands on hers . 

Khushi : Aunty please tell me , why are you so upset with me ?

Aunty : I'm not upset with you . I didn't want you to go away from Chottey because I started to see a sea change in him . He never used to mingle with us , never used to talk to us . But now I don't know what you did , he stepped forward to be a part of this family again . He started to smile . He was actually happy after years . I'm always grateful for that . You don't know by how much . But I was insecure and scared that this happiness will go away from him ... Again .

Khushi : Aunty but ... 

Aunty : Let me finish child . 

She said . I nodded and lowered my gaze . 

Aunty : Khushi why don't you understand that you both are meant to be . You love each other . what is your problem ? 

Khushi : Aunty love is a very big word . It is not just liking for someone . There are many more aspects that we look forward to . And from him ... He is kind off obsessed . I want love from him not his obsession . I wanted his care but not his over possessiveness . I wanted his affection but not his forceful dominating attitude . I want some space from him Aunty . He hurts people just to gain my love . I feel he needs time to get tamed . He is not changing for good Aunty . If he had , Arman ji would have never been hospitalised . 

Aunty : What are you even saying ? 

Khushi : Yes Aunty . Just because I started working under Arman ji , he hired some people to get him hospitalised . 

Aunty : I never knew this . 

Khushi : You hardly know anything about him Aunty ! 

I started to cry . She made me lay down on her laps . She was consoling me . I looked at Arnav who stood still staring at the ground with his hands in his pocket . Those horrible images of that night when Arnav almost forced me flashed before my eyes . I closed my eyes trying not to remember that night . 

Aunty : You shouldn't cry beta . You are going to do something very big now . You shouldn't get weak at this stage . 

Khushi : I didn't want to go Aunty . I didn't but I wanted to escape from him . I wanted to run away from his scary side . I ... 

Words got struck in my throat . 

Aunty : No beta . Now you have only one goal . You have to make us all proud for having you as a part of our family . You have to prove yourself to the the society as well as my son and show them that you cannot be influenced . 

I got up and looked into her eyes . 

Khushi : You are not against me ? 

Aunty : Why would I ? After all my daughter is taking such a huge step to  success .

I smiled and hugged her . We broke our hug . I cleared my face . She looked at her son . 

Aunty : I don't have to worry . My Chottey knows how to make things right .

She smiled at her own statement . I too looked at him . He smiled back to his mother and turned to me ... And smirked . 

My back straightened .  How did he even smirk now ? I could see some glitter and spark in his eyes . That spark when we have when we win or do something big . Really big . This is fishy . I frowned . He came and sat on the step just before mine . He kept looking at me with his smirk . That's awkward ! A-W-K-W-A-R-D !!!! 

I saw my family coming back with his . My mother and bua ji had broad smiles on their faces . 

His family too had the same charm everyone had on their faces except for me . What the hell is going on over here ? 

Bua ji : Everything is going to be back in place ! Everything is fixed back to place . 

Anjali : Haan Aunty ji . It's all destined . 

She smiled at her brother as if she is so proud of him . And he smiled back as  if he is accepting Her complement . 

I made a face witnessing all this . 
Khushi : What happened ? 

Anjali : What happened ? Nothing happened right ? Shyam ji .. 

Shyam : Nothing at all

Shyam bhai looked at his wife lovingly . Something is out of place . Something is not right . 

I kept thinking . I looked at Arnav, he did it too . He smirked . I rolled my eyes and looked at the other side . 

After a long time when it was pitch dark My family escorted from the temple .While driving   the car , I could see my mother's bright face after many days . Bua ji was sitting behind us . She was happy too ! But why so suddenly ? They weren't so happy before Anjali Bhabhi took them somewhere . 

Khushi : What happened Amma ? You are so happy ! Won't you share it with your daughter ? 

Amma : You will get to know . Sabar ka Phal meetha Hota hai ! 

Now ... I'm sure . 100% sure ..  No 200, 500 % that there is something which both the families are doing without my knowledge . 

After going home . I got changed and called up my friends Usha and Mahira on a conversational call ... 

Khushi : I'm not understanding girls ... What do you think ? Am I right in any way or is it that I'm over thinking . 

Mahira : Hmm .. Don't know Yaar may be a yes or no .. May be you should let it be . 

Usha : But Yaar , I think Arnav is seriously upto something he is not that kind of guy who will give up so easily . He is surely upto something ..

Khushi & Mahira : But what ? 

We both questioned together . 

Usha : I'm not ASR to know all that ! But you can always bribe Aman . You know what I mean ? 




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Wish you a Happy New Year !!! 

So here again we start a new year with new goals , new ambitions and new hopes .
It is all very important to welcome this year , 2015 with great joy and happiness
 [ which we already did LOL] Now all we need to do is ... 

Implement all our goals in a proper chronological manner ... 

Don't wait for the circumstances to favour your new beginning but begin your new life to make your circumstances favour you ... 

Hope we all get what we desire for every day ...

Edited by Payaash - 04 January 2015 at 1:31am

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 1:33am | IP Logged
Nice part
Glad that khushi and arnav's mom talked
What did they do behind khushhi's back??

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nice update

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intriguing update,

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loved it!

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