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Fragrant candles Vivian Deepika TS last Part pg7 Banner on Pg1 (Page 5)

Rksuperstar Goldie

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 5:46pm | IP Logged
Awesome update. I love it. Thanks for pm me. Merry Christmas and Happy New year. 

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
Wow a lovely TS! I read both parts together and I rather enjoyed it. Looks like you're a huge Vivian fan!
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 1:54am | IP Logged
thx a lot.give my thx 2 ur hus also.2 b frank I have not watched pyar ki ek kahani i'vent even seen madhubala properly.But I've seen kasam se.I don't visit pyar ki forum.i just got the pic from google.
Originally posted by RIMO9013

just awesome,what a lovely story telling,i lost in the story for some mins,and one more thing ur pic selection is too good,it seems that u r a true vd lover and peep in pkyek forum also i so want to see vivi this type of soft,sensitive character on screen,lovely concept dear,its a cute christmass gift for me and i read it with my hubby together,and he also love it very much,eagerly waiting for paris reaction on ranvi being her papa,i love vivi character name RANVI ,plz continue soon

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meerab... IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 2:10am | IP Logged
waiting for next update
yoga123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
Lovely part...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
Both the updates are nice...
Thanks for the PM.
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 1:40am | IP Logged
plz have a look on my friend Sydell's Arshi Os Rabne bana di Jodi.
Thanks a lot 4 supporting this TS.This is the last part.Plz don't just write nice ending.plz give a detailed comment.also write ur fav scene n character n y u like them.
Fragrant candles Part 3
Ranvi-Mahi got engaged.
They exchanged rings at the engagement party.They were very happy.

Pari was very happy:Hey...Mumma and Ranvi Sir...
Ranvi:Not Ranvi Sir...your papa...

Pari smiled cutely:Papa!

She kissed his cheek.
Ranvi,Mahi and her parents were very happy.
Music was played.

Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena
Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena (x2)

 Ranvi-Mahi started dancing passionately.Heart shaped balloons flew above them.

Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri

 They got intimate and romantic.

Main tenu samjhava ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawa ki
Na tere bina lagda jee(Humpty Sharma Ki Dulhania ).

Unexpectedly they saw a scary face.
Mahi's lips shivered:Chandrakanth!
Ranvi was shocked.
M:Why is he always coming on auspicious occasions?
Chandrakanth:I escaped from the jail specially to destroy your happiness.
He took a gun and pointed it at them .
The guests got scared and ran away.
Mahi's father Vishnu:I beg you.Please don't detroy my other daughter's happiness too.

Chandrakanth laughed loudly upsetting everyone.
Ranvi tried to snatch the gun from him.After a big struggle he took the gun from him and threw it on the floor.Chandrakanth pushed Ranvi and he hit his forehead on the flower vase and started bleeding.
Mahi screamed:Ranviii!
Chandrakanth attacked Mahi's father Vishnu.
Mahi couldn't bear it.
M:Please leave my dad.
Chandrakanth laughed loudly.Mahi took the gun from the floor
and pointed it at him.
She closed her eyes in fear.
A gun shot...
She opened her eyes slowly.She saw him dead on the floor.
She saw Policemen and guns in their hands.
Mahi's mother Radhika:Beta,you didn't shoot him.The Policemen I called came on time and shot that devil.

Mahi was relieved.

Somehow Ranvi got up and came towards Mahi.
R:Don't worry Mahi.That devil has gone forever.
They noticed Pari holding Mahi's saree pallu in fear.
Mahi held her closer.Ranvi held Pari in his arms.
R:Don't be scared Pari.We all are with you.

Days passed...
The wedding night of Ranvi-Mahi has reached.
Seeing Mahi as a bride Ranvi's eyes got stuck up to her's. are a beauty.

She blushed.

They wed each other

and lived happily with Pari.

The end.

Edited by jasminerahul - 28 December 2014 at 4:58am

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Sugar_Cinnamon Goldie

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 2:18am | IP Logged
I'm first, yayyy Dancing


The last part was really awesome,Clap
I love the pics also, great edits.

So, Mahi and Ranvi's sangeet toook place,
the scene between Ranvi and Pari was cute,Embarrassed

But, this chandrakant came here also,Angry
Mahi picked up the gun and was about to shoot him
Fortunately, the police came,and shot him.

And finally, we got a happy ending,

Mahi and Ranvi got married and 
Pari got a father, Mahi got happiness too.

My favourite scene was one Mahi related her story to Ranvi, it was very emotional.
My favourite Character was Ranvi as he supported Mahi in every step.

It was a cute story andd I really liked reading it.

Thanks for the PM dear, 
keep writing ur beautiful stories.

Edited by Jess2014 - 28 December 2014 at 5:09am

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