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Fragrant candles Vivian Deepika TS last Part pg7 Banner on Pg1 (Page 3)

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Posted: 23 December 2014 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Loved it
Awesome part 
Continue soon

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Posted: 23 December 2014 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Congrats on new concept jasmine,


Interesting storyline,
So Mahi is a single mother and Ranvijay wants to know more about her.
Pari is too cute.

Continue soon and thanks for the PM.Smile


Edited by Jess2014 - 23 December 2014 at 10:38pm
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Good strt dude..
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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Vry cute story.
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thanks a lot 4 the comments

Edited by jasminerahul - 25 December 2014 at 3:51am

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Fragrant candles Part 2

Mahi:My sister Narmada fell in love with a nice man.Jishnu Jeeju.But his father was a dirty goon.He was against their love.But our family supported him them and got them married.
Narmada di became pregnant.Those were the days of happiness.

Flash back...
Jishnu caressed Narmada's belly.
J:I can't wait to see my baby.
Narmada blushed.

Narmada gave birth to a baby girl.All were very happy.

The baby's naming ceremony was going well.The baby girl was named Pari.Suddenly JIshnu's dad Chandrakanth appeared.
C:You guys went against me.Do you all think you all can live happily hurting me?No never.

All were tensed.
Jishnu:Dad...please...no...

Chandrakanth pointed the gun towards Narmada.All were scared.He fired the gun.But Jishnu stood before Narmada and got shot.All were shocked.
Narmada couldn't bear it:Nooo...

Chandrakanth roared:Nooo
Chandrakanth shot Narmada.She fell on Jishnu.They all screamed.

The police caught Chandrakanth and Jishnu-Namrata got hospitalized.
Seeing Jishnu-Namrata through the ventilator window glass Mahi wept.
Jishnu-Namrata breathed their last together.Mahi and her parents cried loudly.
Mahi held baby Pari close to her bosom.
As time passed Mahi became Pari' real mother and Pari became Mahi's own daughter.

Present...

Ranvi felt sad hearing Mahi's story.Mahi burst into tears.His heart pained seeing her flowing tears.
Unknowingly Ranvi wiped her tears and rested her head on his chest.He caressed her head.Both came back to their senses and moved away from each other.

Pari was on leave for a few days.Ranvi missed Pari and Mahi.Mahi missed Ranvi and always thought of their cute embrace.
After a few days Mai came to drop Pari to school.Ranvi and Mahi smiled at each other.Unknowingly they shared an eye lock.
M:Tomorrow is Pari's birthday.There is a party in the evening.Ranvi should come.
He smiled:Sure.All the teachers are invited?
M:No,only you.
R:Why only me?
Mahi stammered:Because...because...you are the only teacher who is closer to us.
Ranvi was surprised.Slowly she blushed.He smiled.

Pari's birthday party...

Mahi and Ranvi were happy to see each other.Ranvi and Pari were also happy to see each other.
Pari cut the cake holding Mahi's and her parents' hands.
 Mahi and Ranvi danced together and entertained Pari.

Poonam Ke Chand Ko
Ghoonghat Ke Neeche Chhupa Ke
Laayi Tere Liye
Duniya Se Nazarein Chura Ke

Peechhe Kuaa, Aage Mere Khaai
Tu Hi Bata Jaaun Main Kahaan
Mujhko Duaa Kiski Lagi Bhai
Aake Padhara Hoon Jo Yahaan
Ille Fikar, Aaja Idhar
Beat Pe Laga Le Tu Thumka

One Two Three Four Get On The Dance Floor
One Two Three Four Get On The Dance Floor
Booty Shake, Booty Shake
Dappan Koothu Hard Core
Shoulder Hichak Michak
Body Hichak Michak
Gimme, Gimme, Gimme
Gimme, Gimme, Gimme Some More...(Chennai Express).


Ranvi-Mahi enjoyed the party spending time together.






Slowly slowly Mahi and Ranvi came closer to each other.

One evening Ranvi lit fragrant red candles in darkness.Mahi felt nice about the fragrance.
He proposed to Mahi.
R:Mahi...Can you please let me be Pari's father?

Mahi was very happy and she nodded her head  'yes'.
M:You made our lives fragrant like these fragrant candles Ranvi.

He smiled.He came closer to her and held her hands together.She blushed.


Edited by jasminerahul - 25 December 2014 at 3:49am

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Lovely part Jasmine Clap
So Pari is Mahi's sister's daughter,
But Chandrakanth shot both Jishnu and Narmada
Mahi took care of Pari

Loved how Ranvi proposed to Mahi. Heart

Continue soon
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 5:44am | IP Logged
just awesome,what a lovely story telling,i lost in the story for some mins,and one more thing ur pic selection is too good,it seems that u r a true vd lover and peep in pkyek forum also i so want to see vivi this type of soft,sensitive character on screen,lovely concept dear,its a cute christmass gift for me and i read it with my hubby together,and he also love it very much,eagerly waiting for paris reaction on ranvi being her papa,i love vivi character name RANVI ,plz continue soon
thanks for pm me dear MERRY CHRISTMASS TO U AND UR FAMILY

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