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jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 December 2014 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
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Fragrant candles Part 1

I'm dedicating this TS to  RIMO9013 who wanted me to dream about seeing a film with Vivian-DEEPIKA Jodi and pen down the story of that film.I dreamt of watching a Deepika movie.But the hero was not Vivian in my dream.In the 2ND HALF I guess the hero was Imraan KHAN.I don't remember who the hero was in the 1st half of the story.But anyways I made Vivian the hero in my TS.This story is not exactly the same of what I saw in the dream.I modified my dream which was vague.
Thanks a lot Sydell 4 this surprise banner.
Mahi dropped Pari to her school.Pari was very upset.
P:Mumma,can I tell you something?
P:Mumma,the ink fell on my ID card.What will I do?

M:What?Now only you are telling this?Why didn't you tell me before?
P:I was scared.
M:Oh!Show me the ID card.
Pari took the ID card from her bag.
M:My God!It's really spoiled.
Suddenly they heard a man's voice.
P:Ranvi Sir!
Mahi looked at him.
P:Mumma...this is Ranvi Sir.
R:Hi...I'm Ranvijay.Pari's P.T Sir.
M:Good Morning Sir.Pari has told me about you.
R:Good Morning.I heard your conversation.Don't worry about the ID card.You can apply for a new one.Not a big deal.

M:Thank you very much Sir.
Mahi caressed Pari.
M:Pari,don't worry.We will get a new ID card.
P:Are you sure Mumma?I am really worried.
M:Haa beta.No need to worry.
Mahi kissed her and bid 'good-bye'.Mahi walked towards the office room to apply for a new ID card..
Unknowingly Ranvi's eyes got fixed on her.

From that day onwards Ranvi noticed Mahi.
He felt cute seeing Mahi hugging Pari
and sending her inside.He went to her.
R:I always hear Pari talk about her mother.But not about her father.Her father...?
Mahi's face became dull.
M:I am a single mother.

Ranvi was shocked.Mahi walked off.
After that whenever his eyes fell on Mahi he was reminded of Mahi being a single mother.

During the P.T class Pari fell down and hurt her leg.She cried bitterly.Ranvi took her to the hospital and got her leg bandaged.Then he called Mahi.
Then he rang up Mahi.
R:I am Ranvijay.Pari got hurt.
Mahi was shattered:Pari...
R:Now she is ok.So don't worry.
M:Where is Pari now?
R:City hospital.

Mahi rushed to the city hospital.She was upset seeing bandage on Pari's leg.But Pari was smiling.'s just a small wound.Still you are worried?Though when nurse aunty took injection I had pain,I have no pain now.
Mahi hugged her emotionally.
Mahi saw Ranvi.
M:Thanks a lot Ranvi Sir.
R:Call me just Ranvi and no need to thank me.I did my duty as a teacher.

Mahi smiled.

Mahi bought oinments and antibiotics for Pari from the Pharmacy.She aw Ranvi near her.
R:Sorry if I hurt you.Pari's he alive or...?
Mahi felt upset.
M:You want to know if I am a widow or a divorcee or an unmarried mother.Right?
Ranvi was embarrassed.
M:If you want to know about Pari's father you need to know my family parents and my sweet sister..

Mahi became emotional.

Edited by jasminerahul - 06 January 2015 at 4:21am

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prachi_vrushan IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8754

Posted: 22 December 2014 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
this is interesting
I really want to know
so update soon
n Thanx for d pm
Cold-Fire IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10197

Posted: 23 December 2014 at 12:32am | IP Logged
nice part continue...
zubeada IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 December 2014 at 1:04am | IP Logged
awesome story
do continue plz...
shruthi14 Goldie

Joined: 09 March 2014
Posts: 1661

Posted: 23 December 2014 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Really interesting !!  Even  i am wondering how will it look if they both are couples !! Cont soon excites whatsup with mahis family !! 
meerab... IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 02 July 2012
Posts: 17191

Posted: 23 December 2014 at 2:10am | IP Logged
Wowww...jasmine dear what a imagination
I really liked your concept of this imaginary couple...
Mahi a single mother ...ranvi falling for mahi and pari bringing them closer...
Waiting to know why pari is a single update fast and don't forget to pm me dear
-DZ- IF-Achieverz

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Posted: 23 December 2014 at 2:12am | IP Logged
congo on new story
-DZ- IF-Achieverz

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Posted: 23 December 2014 at 2:14am | IP Logged
loved your dream 

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