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The Black Anarkali | in progress | an AbhiGya SS by mina (Page 8)

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 5:20pm | IP Logged
Raghav </3 </3 </3 </3 </3 </3 </3
MInaaa fantabulous, stupendous, just amazing update yaarDay Dreaming Hehe
Loved the over protective Ragav yaar. Don't be mad but i love Ragav more in ur story then AbhiLOL
Just loved the way he was trying to make Abhi jealous. And OMG Tanu part. ahahhh, here is a boy not flattered by her so called beautyLOL. Loved the way he ignored her presence and indirectly insulted her.

"Oh, I'm Raghav. We dated in college but Pragya over here didn't think I was husband material." He returned to his seat and gave Pragya a flirtatious wink, angling his head so that Abhi could see it too.LOLROFL
Ek teer se do nishan, flirting as well as making Abhi his target. However I do wish that Pragya had taken the option to make Raghav her hubyyLOL


"Excuse me?" Abhi snapped. He sat down without bothering to draw out Tanu's chair, and the model gave an annoyed huff as she seated herself.

What a move Raghav, pahle hi sentence main you draw Abhi attention toward Pragya, that he forgot his so called supermodel Girls friend TanuLOL.
But I would have loved to see Tanu fallen down on the floor by Abhi, as Abhi pulling the chair for her lost in Raghav and Pragya talk.


"Sorry, that came out wrong," Raghav said, flashing Abhi a quick smile.
I don't think he would have minded much Raghav about ur word. Bekar main hi sorry bol diya tumnse.

"Hanh, jaise aap apne dog tags har roz pehen te hain, (Yes, as you wear your dog tags every day)"

Did u mean by his necklace here or the rink he wore on his both thumb??????Confused
Yaar I should have just shared my thought with you and let you have my idea instead of me writing a jealous OSConfused. I am sure you have pulled out amazingly making it more spice and mirch masla. ufff bekar hi main maine wo os likha...
Well anyway, I hope you will update soon-ish. My soon-ish meaning in 2 days, not urs oneLOL
Will be waiting to read more
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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 1:04am | IP Logged
I loved each and every bit of it,,,,
mInD bLoWiNg !!

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
just love this story!

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Hi Mina! I can't believe I still haven't commented on this yet. Too busy with the (real-life) fambam I guess. Loved the update - especially how much Raghav looks out for Pragya. I also liked the bit where you talk about the difference between pre-marriage and post-marriage Pragya - I love that she had the self-awareness to realise that. 

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plz update soon

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 10:33am | IP Logged
loved your story
update!!!
have been waiting for it:(

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
Update sooon 
Loved both parts.. N so eager for the coming parts :)

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This is really good! I love the rapid pace of the story and Raghav seems like a wonderful foil for our dear Pragya, great to see her dish some sass back!

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