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The Black Anarkali | Nov 9/16 Quick Note p26 | an AbhiGya SS by mina (Page 22)

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DIII!!! After coming out of my Condaness I edited my post!!!! Approve

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Posted: 21 January 2016 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
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Okay moving on from being so Anacondaish! First of all sorry for the late comment!!! Didn't know you updated this till I read a PM you sent almost a month ago! Ouch

Di I am glad that you updated this!!!! You know how much your anacondas love ANADATE right!!!! Big smile The whole thing was so so good! All the convos! I specially liked Ragav being nice to Tannu! Abhi could be such an idiot at times! (Or here all the time!) I liked the convos with the others at the table! Pragya relaxing and enjoying! It was all really well written! But the way you wrote about desert!!! Eeeppp!!! I so want desert now!!!


"It was topped with strawberry whipped cream dusted with cardamom powder, along with a bright green sprig of mint as garnish. She took a bite and closed her eyes as the rich flavours melted on her tongue. The lush chocolate flooded her senses, followed by a slight kick from the tart hint of strawberry and the earthy note of cardamom. She felt a smile starting to stretch her cheeks, just from the joy of tasting the delicious confection."

Seriously diii!!!! Silly

Of course you know na! Waiting for more!!! Soon!!!! 

Lots of Ana loveee!!Heart


LOL, I should have waited for the rest of your comment, I know LOL

Sorry to torment you with dessert?? But thank you for pulling out that quote. I'm reading it now and I'm like who writes like that??? This girl is so cliched??? But wait no!!! It's supposed to be that way. So I'm proud of myself too...hah I'm being crazy sorry Clown

Yes Raghav being nice to Tanu was important to me. He's our sophisticated man of the world after all. Really happy you enjoyed the whole chapter. And hopefully I can make Abhi not always an idiot...!! He's not so bad after all na LOL

Hug to my diyu!!

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Posted: 21 January 2016 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
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ji thank you! full conda comment full english comment!! love love love!

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Posted: 22 January 2016 at 2:52am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by NasreenAyesha

thankfully u updated 3rd part.
really it is so nice and funny with ragav convo.
i could get to visualise the jealous of abhi easily.
minu, minu pls write more and soon.


Yay ayeshu glad you liked! It makes me so happy and proud when you say reading it made you visualize the scene easily. Thank you so much. Will try to write more, but don't know how soon, few other things on my mind right now Embarrassed

Your mind bhi na always flooded with ideas.
And my mind is fed with this current track.
Haha thank u minu Embarrassed

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Posted: 22 January 2016 at 4:16am | IP Logged
I shouldn't have read this SS for two reasons...

One - you know who. But I replaced him in my mind with the man with a sexy voice Wink

Two - Will have to give you your own time to put up Part Four! LOL

Very very well written. Every minute detail has been taken care off. Liked the idea of Alia and Pragya bonding!

Loved jealous Abhi Tongue...And I loved how past disclosures portrayed Pragya to be totally bindaas! Big smile


Edited by SaaraDON - 22 January 2016 at 4:22am

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Posted: 07 February 2016 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Oh Em Gee!!! This was amazingBig smile. I loved how u made all their reactions.
That part of how they reached the peakThumbs Up There could be no worse way for Raghav to have said that line.

I only had one complain... Y did you have to HEAT up that last line so much... have me sitting here likeSillyShockedDead

Anyways I really enjoyed this a lot and please give me a PM as to when u will be updating. It will be much appreciated

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Posted: 07 February 2016 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by JacobB

Oh Em Gee!!! This was amazingBig smile. I loved how u made all their reactions.
That part of how they reached the peakThumbs Up There could be no worse way for Raghav to have said that line.

I only had one complain... Y did you have to HEAT up that last line so much... have me sitting here likeSillyShockedDead

Anyways I really enjoyed this a lot and please give me a PM as to when u will be updating. It will be much appreciated


Thank you so much Jacob!! Go glad you liked the story. I keep thinking I need to edit that peak line, it's awkwardly said - but you picked up on it perfectly so maybe it doesn't need changing at all LOL

The last line...well yes, precisely for that reason. To set the mood for the next chapter.

Not sure when I will be updating. I am very sorry but in general I don't send PMs - I'm not organized for it. Ouch

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment!

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Posted: 07 February 2016 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SaaraDON

I shouldn't have read this SS for two reasons...

One - you know who. But I replaced him in my mind with the man with a sexy voice Wink

Two - Will have to give you your own time to put up Part Four! LOL

Very very well written. Every minute detail has been taken care off. Liked the idea of Alia and Pragya bonding!

Loved jealous Abhi Tongue...And I loved how past disclosures portrayed Pragya to be totally bindaas! Big smile


I still can't believe Bhai read this story Shocked Shocked Shocked

Thank you so much Bhai, really glad you enjoyed despite the wrong model for Pragya's friend LOL

And yay, Aalu-Prags bonding & Prags' adventurous past are two parts of the story that are important to me, very happy to know it resonated with you also.

Part four...dunno! In process still Embarrassed

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