Posted: 21 December 2015 at 7:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by frenzyy
Prags and raghav friendship is something I adore here so much - so loved their light banter and the ease of their talking, silent reassurance, understanding gestures and communicating in a language which only a true friend can understand.. totally love the two!
True that, prags never realizes his jealousy is for her - she assumes it to be directed towards tanu - and aint she right in her conclusion? her hubby is "missing" for most of the nights and they haven't shared a single convo after the whole mms thing.. its not even like aalu-chashmish bonding where chashmish was persistent in her efforts to connect with the nanand.. she never did that with abhi - so although prags wanna abhi to be like a husband she is still somewhere trying to protect herself from another heartbreak and risks wearing her heart on the sleeve.. she is cautious, practical and doesn't wanna take chances knowing that this relationship comes with an expiry date.. But in spite of all this - she is captivated by him nonetheless - irrespective of what she is doing she always ends up checking on him from time to time -albeit silently to see what he is up to - hold his gaze forgetting the world around - even when the table is filled with other people - it is his thoughts, reactions, actions that have a direct impact on her and something she cares about.. she loves him no doubt, but still debating with her mind.. And your abhi broods more and talks less
and like chashmish says he has such a huge ego that we dont know what is running in his mind.. how will the poor girl understand him?
but looking at the way he said "haan, main" it would have sent a chill down her - totally excited for their dance, talk and with a jealous and possessive abhi you can simply expect everything!
Jus couldn't resist reading the both the chapters again before reading this update.. So take your time to update - shall wait eagerly.. Can never miss any of your stories!! Simply love them all - cant pick any favorites as its an extremely tough call but defo waiting for the next part of "hook up" as you said it would be up soon
Don't remember the number of times I have re-read your KB stories, your collabs with tia and yaariiyan.. speaking of yaariyan -Is it in the pipeline for update anytime soon? Simply captivated by all your stories, each one of them is soo soo awesome!! I take a bow!! Hats-off
Kudos to you!!
Aww frenzyy!! Where do I even start
It's a challenge for me to write Pragya and Raghav's friendship, because I've never really had a guy friend like that, so I can't draw from reality. It means a lot to hear that reading it gives you a good sense of the bond between them!
You know, I really have to thank you for opening my mind to something...I never really thought about how Prags hasn't been making an effort to connect with Abhi, in comparison to how she tried to keep a relationship with Aalu. I was thinking more that after all that happened, she was just keeping a protective distance (as you also described quite beautifully), and the problem was with him not seeing her for what she is. But how can Abhi reach her, if she's closed to begin with? The rest of the story will still be more about showing how Abhi finally does start to want to reach her, but I'll be thinking about this Pragya side of things and maybe I can work something in about that too
And yes, we have a very broody Abhi here...perhaps he's angry with me, that I chose to tell the whole story from Pragya's perspective, so that's why he hasn't been saying much?
But yes, he has some savage things to say to Pragya during their dance, and eventually he'll have some kind of fight with Raghav...so we'll hear from him, when it's time
Thank you so much for reading all my stories
If you say Hookup is your favourite, I will be right there with you
. Definitely hoping to update that this calendar year...but I am running out of days
As for Yaariyan, we wrote about half a chapter back in January, but neither Ish nor I have been inspired to finish it in all these months. So nothing coming on that soon, unfortunately, but maybe when she's back from break I'll check in with Ish and see if we can finish that part we started
Thank you beyond words for your support and encouragement, frenzyy