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Rise Of The Fallen - a DFL OS (Page 4)

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Posted: 20 January 2016 at 12:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bookworm-ALS--

If I must describe this in one word- Believable.
Yes, I can believe in this, I can see Rehan going through something like this. Very poignant, very sad and very well written.

PS. Avni was a standout. *clapping* Star

Thanks Shreya Embarrassed I was always intrigued by Rehan and I was curious to read more about his past LOL So I guess when Dishu proposed the idea of spin offs and OS I was excited to pen it down myself. Little was said about Avni, so I took the liberty of shaping up her character. A mother will always watch out for her children and I guess that is what I portrayed here as well.

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Posted: 20 January 2016 at 12:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by navk

omg
it was superb

Thank you Smile
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Posted: 20 January 2016 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by didlr

Never expected someone to write abt rehna...nor did i except this!!! Truly amazing...

Thanks for reading Tanshi Embarrassed
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Posted: 20 January 2016 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ILoveToRead.



 Amazing Clap Would love to read more Mandy dI :D 

Thanks Shreya Embarrassed
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Posted: 20 January 2016 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahi4ever

Superb Mandy n thanks for writing this amazing piece. U have done perfect justice to rehan n shown da past dat made him lik dat. Eagerly waiting for next update 

Thanks for reading Mahi and sorry u had to wait for a long time Ouch Will be updating this next.
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Posted: 20 January 2016 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .SmokeySilence.

mandy it's totally amazing. i alwaus appreciate a good story and it doesnt matter if Abhiya isn't in it. you wrote Rehan and Zeishas story really well. it was heartbreaking. the way Rehan loved her and staked everything for her in danger. his life, his future, his mother and he suffered it, he lost his rock. his mother. the way he loved her with so much intensity. one can only imagine how much he is going to hate her for her betrayal. and Avnis character was really strong. i loved her even though she was here for a small portion. waiting to read part 2 soon. 

Thanks Tanzie Smile It was emotionally draining for me to write the last part Ouch Even as a DFL reader I felt a strong connect with Rehan. I guess everybody hated him for what he did to Abhiya but that one small segment about his past had haunted me and every time Rehan attacked Abhiya I saw how readers cursed him and lashed out at him. I would never say what he did was justifiable but nothing justifies what happened with him either. He has suffered the worst over here. I was really curious to know how readers would react if they were to read only about him and all the pain he had endured. Every mother will protect her child till her last breath and that is what Avni did as well. She had protected him from her greedy power hungry clan and from the supernatural world but alas, she could not save him from a heartbreak that would shatter him forever Ouch
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Posted: 20 January 2016 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meerubzara

finally you come back mandy i was missing u
that was awesome update
very beautifully written

Thank u Embarrassed
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Posted: 20 January 2016 at 1:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hema_rawat

amzing os mandy ... wowClapClap
wonderful peice of writting ...i dont care if there is no abhiya in it... i loved it .. u have described Rehan story so well .
waitng for part 2 Smile

Thanks Hema Embarrassed and yes I will finally finish this OS LOL Sorry to keep u waiting though Ouch

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