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A Glimpse Of Paradise - IshRa OS (Page 2)

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Posted: 22 December 2014 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Too good Aani...Loved it... Thanx for PM

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Posted: 22 December 2014 at 5:24am | IP Logged
Oh wow Aani!
This and every other version of "Date Night" reminds me how it could have been, if it wasn't for Aadi. I don't blame the kid but I agree with Mr. Bhalla. Something always comes up when he wants to spend some quality time with his lovely wife.
I love the way Ishita reacts to Raman's love. She is a great combination of shyness, embarassment, excitement and nervousness. I admire how frank and accepting she is about her feelings which normally heroines are shown to hide. Your Ishita was quite flirty. I am waiting to see the same on-screen.

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Posted: 22 December 2014 at 5:25am | IP Logged
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Okay Aani, glad you're back first of all :)
& this was awwh, SO SO SO SO BEAUTIFULLL <333 I loved it yaar! :)
Really, fantastic! It was super cute, the verbal foreplay AAAH! I never knew it could be this attractive, sexy, pleasing, beautiful, interesting!  LOVED Mr & Mrs Bhalla! Embarrassed
They had such an adorable conversation and HAYE! Heart Raman just wins me over EACH TIME! Day Dreaming Heart loved the path of the conversation, and how realistically you portrayed what could have happened, however i was SO SO SO glad that the Adi interruption wont be there but ALAS! Unhappy Ek baat kahoon?? Itnaaa aage tak jaake adi ka phone aana is even more teasingly hurtful Stern Smile isse acha toh as in the episode, bina kuch kiye Tongue because, you know... this interruption i was like NOOO! NAHI NAHI NAHI, PLEASE NAHI! Stern Smile LOL Like i could visualize ALL that could have happened had the kid not called Blushing Ermm Tongue

Anyways, this was really amazing, PLEASE we're in some serious need of and for romance, PLEASE treat us like this! Embarrassed


Edited by serendipity. - 23 December 2014 at 1:55am

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Posted: 22 December 2014 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Aaah...love this alternative scenario.. thank u so much for this lovely piece of writing. Hope to see u soon..waise I wish u were the one who decides ishra's dialogues @ the show...

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Posted: 22 December 2014 at 5:29am | IP Logged
What a fab OS it was!Day Dreaming ...the way you started the OS was beautiful, and the way whole room was described with so much detailing was gorgeous...then raman came, each and every touch by him was so electrifying, she had this feeling for the first time.feeling of being loved by someoneEmbarrassed
And then their conversation...raman was in full flirty mood,and all those cute talks they had...then he puts her hand on his heartDay Dreaming...for the first time got to see the bold ishita.Embarrassed All those cuddling moments were damn adorableHeart raman getting naughty,pulling her so close that there is no gap left between themBlushingand the way they were talking...i didnt felt that there was need of any action,as they almost had evrything through their conversationBlushing 
And in the midst of the beautiful date,there comes adiOuch the name on the cell is enough for feeling his presenceSleepy.
Anywz  the whole OS was beautifully writtenBig smile thanks alot for the pmHug


Edited by Jenny.. - 22 December 2014 at 9:59am

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Posted: 22 December 2014 at 5:35am | IP Logged
Beautiful Aani...
The scene of your imagination took my heart dear...awesome...
Reading your OS, my mind could only think about Raman admiring his wife, along their talks...may be because I loved that scene on screen too, and i could imagine a lot more reading your OS. And after reading your OS Aani, i could only remember Lord Byron's lines from the poem  "There be none of Beauty's daughters"

"There be none of Beauty's daughters
With a magic like Thee; 
 And like music on the waters 
 Is thy sweet voice to me: 
 When, as if its sound were causing 
 The charmed ocean's pausing,
 The waves lie still and gleaming, 
 And the lull'd winds seem dreaming: 
 And the midnight moon is weaving
 Her bright chain o'er the deep,
 Whose breast is gently heaving
 As an infant's asleep:
 So the spirit bows before thee 
 To listen and adore thee;
 With a full but soft emotion, 
 Like the swell of Summer's ocean."

Your writings are so poetical Aani, such that they always makes me remind of verses which
I have read and long forgotten.
This was a wonderful piece of work Aani
Lovely.



Edited by remya1990 - 22 December 2014 at 6:51am

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Posted: 22 December 2014 at 5:35am | IP Logged
awsome...Loved it

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Posted: 22 December 2014 at 5:42am | IP Logged
thats beautifully written aani..

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