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A Glimpse Of Paradise - IshRa OS (Page 10)

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by krikumar.91

Too good Aani...Loved it... Thanx for PM

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Metamorphmagus

Oh wow Aani!
This and every other version of "Date Night" reminds me how it could have been, if it wasn't for Aadi. I don't blame the kid but I agree with Mr. Bhalla. Something always comes up when he wants to spend some quality time with his lovely wife.
I love the way Ishita reacts to Raman's love. She is a great combination of shyness, embarassment, excitement and nervousness. I admire how frank and accepting she is about her feelings which normally heroines are shown to hide. Your Ishita was quite flirty. I am waiting to see the same on-screen.


Hey Sneha thanks a lot

LOL if the romance wouldnt get interrupted the show would wrap up in less than a 100 episodes LOL the fact Ishita is shy yet not a prude is what makes me love her frankly I dont get the logic of Indian tv shows where even if they have shown the couple has consummated and have a horde of kids the woman behaves like a bumbling green girl with her husband and never seems confident about their romanctic/sexual life Confused

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by serendipity.

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Okay Aani, glad you're back first of all :)
& this was awwh, SO SO SO SO BEAUTIFULLL <333 I loved it yaar! :)
Really, fantastic! It was super cute, the verbal foreplay AAAH! I never knew it could be this attractive, sexy, pleasing, beautiful, interesting!  LOVED Mr & Mrs Bhalla! Embarrassed
They had such an adorable conversation and HAYE! Heart Raman just wins me over EACH TIME! Day Dreaming Heart loved the path of the conversation, and how realistically you portrayed what could have happened, however i was SO SO SO glad that the Adi interruption wont be there but ALAS! Unhappy Ek baat kahoon?? Itnaaa aage tak jaake adi ka phone aana is even more teasingly hurtful Stern Smile isse acha toh as in the episode, bina kuch kiye Tongue because, you know... this interruption i was like NOOO! NAHI NAHI NAHI, PLEASE NAHI! Stern Smile LOL Like i could visualize ALL that could have happened had the kid not called Blushing Ermm Tongue

Anyways, this was really amazing, PLEASE we're in some serious need of and for romance, PLEASE treat us like this! Embarrassed

Hey Reens thanks a lot Big smile

Glad to have had the pleasure of introducing you to the multifaceted and mutipurpose verbal foreplay LOL

Will try to keep the treats coming Reens 
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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shalz_123

Aaah...love this alternative scenario.. thank u so much for this lovely piece of writing. Hope to see u soon..waise I wish u were the one who decides ishra's dialogues @ the show...

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jenny..

What a fab OS it was!Day Dreaming ...the way you started the OS was beautiful, and the way whole room was described with so much detailing was gorgeous...then raman came, each and every touch by him was so electrifying, she had this feeling for the first time.feeling of being loved by someoneEmbarrassed
And then their conversation...raman was in full flirty mood,and all those cute talks they had...then he puts her hand on his heartDay Dreaming...for the first time got to see the bold ishita.Embarrassed All those cuddling moments were damn adorableHeart raman getting naughty,pulling her so close that there is no gap left between themBlushingand the way they were talking...i didnt felt that there was need of any action,as they almost had evrything through their conversationBlushing 
And in the midst of the beautiful date,there comes adiOuch the name on the cell is enough for feeling his presenceSleepy.
Anywz  the whole OS was beautifully writtenBig smile thanks alot for the pmHug

Hi Jenny thanks a lot for this wonderful comment Smile

This was a take on the date like I said and hence was always meant to be interrupted hopefully I can get inspired again to write something uninterrupted in the future sometime soon WinkLOL


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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by remya1990

Beautiful Aani...
The scene of your imagination took my heart dear...awesome...
Reading your OS, my mind could only think about Raman admiring his wife, along their talks...may be because I loved that scene on screen too, and i could imagine a lot more reading your OS. And after reading your OS Aani, i could only remember Lord Byron's lines from the poem  "There be none of Beauty's daughters"

"There be none of Beauty's daughters
With a magic like Thee; 
 And like music on the waters 
 Is thy sweet voice to me: 
 When, as if its sound were causing 
 The charmed ocean's pausing,
 The waves lie still and gleaming, 
 And the lull'd winds seem dreaming: 
 And the midnight moon is weaving
 Her bright chain o'er the deep,
 Whose breast is gently heaving
 As an infant's asleep:
 So the spirit bows before thee 
 To listen and adore thee;
 With a full but soft emotion, 
 Like the swell of Summer's ocean."

Your writings are so poetical Aani, such that they always makes me remind of verses which
I have read and long forgotten.
This was a wonderful piece of work Aani
Lovely.


that is such a lovely poetry Remya its an honor to know my words reminded you of someone as great as Lord Bryon also I must thank you for introducing me to this wonderful work I had no idea about EmbarrassedSmile
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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pri12

awsome...Loved it

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Dipsi_

thats beautifully written aani..

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