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A Glimpse Of Paradise - IshRa OS - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Anuhyaa

This is so beautifully written...Thank you...
You know in your world you don't need to accommodate Adi & Shagun..πŸ˜›

I wish you have completed the entire date night...The settings and everything were so perfect to waste it...

But...its ok...May be someother time with someother setting...

I seriously don't know what the Cvs have in their mind for the confession...since they let go of the beautiful mood...


Thanks Anuhyaa 

I meant to write this as a take on the date so it was always bound to happen 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: florine_20

Wow
Awesome as always


thanks Florine 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: meenu_taarey

amazing os

lovely
very well written
keep writing
thanx for pm
take care


thanks Meenu 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: s_kavya

Awww that was lovely... we didn't get much in the show... ishra didn't even talked properly and phone rang... but this OS wow loved it... 😳 😊


thanks Kavya 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: RomComFan

 WOW! πŸ‘

Love this- both the way you went into detail about the scene we saw and the way you altered it.
The  'verbal foreplay' is amazing- I can so see them doing this, I wish they had done this.  It's simply perfect for ISHRA.

Hope to see you writing again more often!😊


thanks dear 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Arooj.M

Wow Aani, their conversation is so well written! I loved this, it's a shame they got interrupted though!


thanks Arooj 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: appuss

there is no need for me to say it is awesome... whatever you write is awesome😳

wish it was just not a glimpse... thanks aaniπŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ


thanks Anju 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Iloveishra

Reading this I was actually transported to a paradise. ...loved every bit of it...romantic and beautifully written. ...keep writing


thanks dear 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: sweety2585

It is actually an Paradise..loved it so much..😳

Beautifully written..πŸ‘πŸ‘


thanks Sweety 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: rajkona

Thanks for the pm! And superb story. I can just imagine their expressions and this is exactly what they would probably do being them! You've captured the essence of their nok-jhoks really well!


thanks Raj