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ARHI FF T#6 Falling in love with enemy season II C27 on T#7 22Nov link (Page 17)

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Good update. Khushi has a wrenching past, and in real life too there are many with such disturbing pasts. You said it well, her pain and the way Arnav supported her. 
A good writer can play with the reader's feelings... my heart is beating fast now, I'm suffocating, my head is throbbing too. I shouldn't have gone too deep into it, the image of an eleven year old Khushi is flashing in my mind. Painful.

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Hw can u say u hv writer block when u gv us such a intense n heart wrenching updt . What can i say about khushi past am speechless. Iam cryied reading that part. Hw eleven yr old khushi felt while watching that brutual act. This is shame for being human. Those men were animal. Nw i realy want arnav nevr left khushi side n love her til his last breath. Hats of u deep for writing this butiful parts. Pl dont mk us wait long for next part

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Wonderful update.
That was really a bad past for Khushi.
Waiting for next.

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Wonderful upd dear u penned down both parts superbly it was really emotional though,  glad to see how khushi shared her past to arnav, both arhi r truly soulmates,  do upd soon

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
Loved it

Arnav hid khushi's clothes so that she will have to wear the saree he gave her. Arnav is so cute! He is just like a kid

Arnav's mother and anjali got shocked in return when khushi opened arnav's door. Now she also knows about arnav's relationship

And then the dinner

Finally khushi's past got revealed. Gosh she has a very bad past. She has come a long way from that day. I m proud of hed. I didnt expect khushi to have depression. Arnav has fallen in love with khushi all over again.
Is it her past that stops herself from admitting that she loves arnav?

Loved the way khushi told what she feels for arnav

Will be waiting for the next update

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 2:54am | IP Logged
thanks dear,
thats really emotional update.

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Thanks a lot for the update.

I still find myself insufficient to post a comment on this FF.
yes i truly am..
khushi's past is quite horrible, no one can understand that except the person who have suffered.

I seriously find Khushi's mother as an admirable figure,I have always liked Khushi's character very much.
Strong Confident Free Realistic Practical lady words are always less for her. 
Can say that she had inherited them from her mother.

As for Arnav the love he does to khushi  is quite commendable, the love where he not want any thing in return, just want to shower her with his love and care. Supporting her whenever she needs, i like him very much.

Can't say more..

really waiting for next update!!!
thanks for the pm.

you are one of the writer which have depth in her writing, capability to bind the readers with you..
love you a lot.

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 3:45am | IP Logged
it was beautiful...the past was so painful...it makes sense the way u have shaped khushi, with a past like that...
now, I sincerely hope that Shyam helps Arnav n Khushi...they will become the awesome threesome...

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