Kumkum Bhagya


Kumkum Bhagya
Kumkum Bhagya

Abhigya OS Evil Thoughts Never Overpower The Good

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Posted: 21 December 2014 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Hi just a little something I would like to see!!

Abhi was all ready for a concert that he was leaving for in a few minutes. He had asked Pragya to place everything in the car including his guitar, not like last time when he had found it broken. Abhi took blessings from Daadi one last time, checked with Pragya that the guitar was in there and left. Tanu smirked to herself waiting for Abhi to come back from the concert and blast at Pragya again because she had taken the guitar out from the car and placed it back in their room. Daadi and the family waved bye he left. Pragya went back in hoping that his concert would go well once again just like last time. She walked in her room and sat down watching TV before giving Daadi her medicines and coming back in the room again. It had been an hour since Abhi had left and his show would start in half an hour. Pragya walked into the washroom and when she came out she noticed something sticking out of the bottom of the bed. She bent down and picked it up surprised to see Abhis guitar. What was it doing there? She remembered clearly placing it in the boot of the car. Who could have taken it out. She remembered Tanu walking past her in a hurry. It had to be her. Pragya had become used to their stupid plans to get her in trouble and she tried to stay aware but she thought that Tanu would only want the best for Abhi. She loved him after all but maybe not. Pragya picked it up and ran out of the room and down the stairs. Tanu saw her going out of the room and followed. Pragya was about to ask the driver to take her to the concert but Aliya had already got in the car and left. The other drivers were either off or had left for something else. She had twenty more minutes. Pragya looked around helplessly before leaving the gate. Tanu smirked to herself, there was no way she was going to get there in time.

Pragya waved her hands infront of autos but no one stopped. Pragya ran across the street and a man on a bike stopped. He looked at her up and down before coming over. He asked her name but Pragya carried on walking. He pulled her hand but Pragya slapped him. She was not a weak girl that was going to stand helplessly. A few women and men gathered around asking her if the man was misbehaving. Pragya walked away in the commotion. She had fifteen minutes.

She got the auto that finally stopped but after a while they got stuck in traffic. Pragya had 5 minutes and there was only a little while to go before reaching the show. She got out handed the money and ran with the guitar. Tanu was driving in the car and was surprised to see Pragya running past hurriedly. How the hell had she managed to get there? She wasn't going to let her plan fail, she slowed the car and got a man to come over. Giving him some money she sent him away. He drove the auto and stopped it abruptly near Pragya which made her walk into it and fall on the floor. She hit her head in the floor while a crowd gathered around. She rubbed her head and got up again glad that the guitar had not broken. She ran knowing she had about 2 minutes to spare.

She arrived at the gates where there was a huge crowd inside cheering. A man had already started to introduce the show. Pragya tried to get in but a guard asked for her ticket for the show. She said she didn't have one but it was important for her to meet Abhi. The man asked her to leave but she wouldn't. Angry he went into Abhis room.

Abhi was pacing the room. Chashmish had done it again. She knew how much each show meant to him then why had she not put the guitar in the car. He punched the chair in anger. There were a few minutes to spare and he would have to go on stage. But how? He didn't have his guitar and no other felt right. He cursed when the guard came in saying a girl wanted to meet him. He told him to tell her to leave, he didn't have time for fans. The guard said he had tried hard but she wouldn't listen. Abhi told him to send her in wondering who the hell it was.

He put his jacket on and turned around shocked to see Pragya standing at the door. Her hair was in a mess, she was bleeding slightly from the head, her suit was covered in dust and the sleeves were ripped but she was still smiling, her eyes shining. Abhi was so shocked looking at her he forgot she was holding his guitar. She handed it over to him and he realised what she was giving to him. Abhi was glad he had his guitar but the sight of Pragya worried him.

"Chashmish!" He said, the worry in his voice clearly noticeable. "What have you done to yourself?"
He made her sit on the chair and got some water. He got the first aid box and rubbed her wound on her head.
"What was you thinking?" He asked

"What? I just wanted to give you the guitar? At least say thanks!" Moaned Pragya.

"Yeah thanks but what have you done to yourself?" He asked

"I know how much this concert meant to you so I wanted to give you the guitar." She said

"Well why didn't you keep it in the car in the first place?" He said.

"I did but I found it your room." She said

Abhi still worried about Pragya was so lost in thought he didn't hear his announcement to come on stage. Pragya shook him and told him to go on stage. He picked the guitar and walked on stage to find a crowd screaming their heads off. He started his song and with each word he only saw an image of his chashmish flash before him. As he finished the last song the crowd burst into cheers and Abhi waved and thanked before leaving the stage.

Arriving in the green room he saw Pragya smiling at him and congratulating him. Abhi was so lost in her smile he forgot everything and just hugged her. Pragya surprised hugged him back.

"You are her best chamshmish!" He said happily. "I love you..."

Hope you liked it!

Edited by simsim25 - 04 April 2015 at 6:34am

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Posted: 21 December 2014 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
wow lovely os
loved it
very nicely written 

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abhiya23 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 December 2014 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Absolutely amazing Clap I wish they could have done this before MMS track started, at least one misunderstand would have been less 
This line 

"At least say thanks" LOL our old Pragya would say it 

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Posted: 21 December 2014 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Lovely os!!
Loved it

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Posted: 22 December 2014 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Aww really nice os

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Posted: 22 December 2014 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
So sweet ... I loved it Tongue!!!!   Thank you!!!

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