OS: His Sparkling Eyes (Note page 10) - Page 7

How could you kill him off just like that? 😡
You're so heartless.

Seriously though, this was amazing, just like every time.👏 You just blow me away with your writing. It was so quirky and like Zoya to rush in late and then offer those absurd explanations. I miss Zoe. And Asad! So like him to admire and love her from a far and protect her in his own aloof way.
AsYa are Love. <3

Do you still watch Qubool Hai?

😭 😔
plz make it much more beautiful by giving it a happy ending... warna janta maaf nahi karegi... 😔

This content was originally posted by: rosamale

I loved this OS except the ending How could you end such  a beautiful story in a tragedy😭 Would you please a sequel or another part to it? Please Please. I have  never asked anything from you, wont you fulfill my first wish?😳😉😆

Hahaha your first wish is the wish of everyone who read this OS 😆 But how can I write a sequel when killed him off with my own two hands? 😃

This content was originally posted by: nikki.171

How could you kill him off just like that? 😡
You're so heartless.

Seriously though, this was amazing, just like every time.👏 You just blow me away with your writing. It was so quirky and like Zoya to rush in late and then offer those absurd explanations. I miss Zoe. And Asad! So like him to admire and love her from a far and protect her in his own aloof way.
AsYa are Love. <3

Do you still watch Qubool Hai?

Thank you for loving the OS even when I showed my heartlessness in it 😆 And I agree. AsYa were and are LOVE <3

And no, I don't watch it anymore. I watched some of Ahil and Saman episodes but they didn't have to AsYa magic in them so left it 😳

This content was originally posted by: najma123

The last line was by far the best. 

"Zoya Farooqui would never know that his eyes sparkled only while looking at her."

Asad died... But, the impact of the story lies in his death. Without it, it would have been different. Amazing story.

I don't want to kill you. I want to applaud you for killing Asad... It is difficult to kill a hero but you did. Wow!

I love you for getting what I had in mind 😆 The impact of the story lies in his death.

This is exactly why I killed him. Had I not killed him, it would've been just another love story 😉😆

Thanks sweetie 🤗

Hello Everyone!

I can see everyone's seething with anger at me for killing Asad 😆 BUT the story had a lesson in it. Under 18 people shouldn't be allowed to drive 🤣

And people you have to realize that as Najma123 pointed it out in plain words, 'The impact of this story lies in Asad's death.' I planned that I wanted to write a story in which Asad died at the end and then I wrote this accordingly. So Asad kay bachnay kay tou chances hi nahi the to be honest 😆 (Whoever has watched Pyare Afzal can place the blame on that drama because though it made me cry buckets, it also made me appreciate tragic endings because they stay with you longer than happier endings 😆)

And people I have another tragic OS in mind, something I've had sketched in my head and it looks pretty good (I'm pretty excited about penning it down too) but all your sadness has me worried. Should I pen it or not? 😕 Will you people like to read it??!

Please don't ask me to write a happier one instead because this sad one won't let me write anything until its on the paper and out of my head 😆

This content was originally posted by: SmileyStar

I love you for getting what I had in mind 😆 The impact of the story lies in his death.

This is exactly why I killed him. Had I not killed him, it would've been just another love story 😉😆

Thanks sweetie 🤗

This content was originally posted by: SmileyStar

Hello Everyone!

I can see everyone's seething with anger at me for killing Asad 😆 BUT the story had a lesson in it. Under 18 people shouldn't be allowed to drive 🤣

And people you have to realize that as Najma123 pointed it out in plain words, 'The impact of this story lies in Asad's death.' I planned that I wanted to write a story in which Asad died at the end and then I wrote this accordingly. So Asad kay bachnay kay tou chances hi nahi the to be honest 😆 (Whoever has watched Pyare Afzal can place the blame on that drama because though it made me cry buckets, it also made me appreciate tragic endings because they stay with you longer than happier endings 😆)

And people I have another tragic OS in mind, something I've had sketched in my head and it looks pretty good (I'm pretty excited about penning it down too) but all your sadness has me worried. Should I pen it or not? 😕 Will you people like to read it??!

Please don't ask me to write a happier one instead because this sad one won't let me write anything until its on the paper and out of my head 😆

This content was originally posted by: SmileyStar

Hello Everyone!

I can see everyone's seething with anger at me for killing Asad 😆 BUT the story had a lesson in it. Under 18 people shouldn't be allowed to drive 🤣

And people you have to realize that as Najma123 pointed it out in plain words, 'The impact of this story lies in Asad's death.' I planned that I wanted to write a story in which Asad died at the end and then I wrote this accordingly. So Asad kay bachnay kay tou chances hi nahi the to be honest😆 (Whoever has watched Pyare Afzal can place the blame on that drama because though it made me cry buckets, it also made me appreciate tragic endings because they stay with you longer than happier endings 😆)

And people I have another tragic OS in mind, something I've had sketched in my head and it looks pretty good (I'm pretty excited about penning it down too) but all your sadness has me worried. Should I pen it or not? 😕 Will you people like to read it??!

Please don't ask me to write a happier one instead because this sad one won't let me write anything until its on the paper and out of my head 😆

go ahead dear aur rula lo hame
but pehle ek promise karna hoga ki usk baad ek happy ending wala os bhi milega!

This content was originally posted by: najma123

Thank you for giving us such briliant works! Exactly! It is not as if I don't like happy stories. In fact, I prefer happy endings. But, a tragic conclusion makes a much stronger impression. And this story was just that. I would not ask you to continue this because its beauty lies in its end. 😳

Thank you for appreciating my work sweets! 😳 And yes same here, of course I love happy endings but sometimes sad endings bhi dil jeet laiti hain :') 😆