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Posted: 9 years ago

beautiful update dear...continu

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Anusuya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow Angel..

Another SS of Ragna 😳

Loved d way Kalpi n Rags relate to each other.. d love and care..

Im just guessing Neetuis d one whose smiling and Kamla is d frowning one..😆😆

Lookin f forward for ur next update.

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hathway

@hathway

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh Fuzz!! Again you are in the mood of writing, I am all set to read.

Nice Prologue! But again an incomplete chappy 😳
And why is Kalpi so shy? May be the flashback of 18 years will tell us why. But loved the interaction b/w Raghav & Kalpi!!
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Ushoshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice... Loved the RagNa moments

Who watched with a frown n who watched with a smile? Update soon...

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Rubina

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hahaha too good ya just a gem of a person, u know ur plot too well n how to memerize us. Too good writer ya. Now commin to ur story Neetu is rags, spammy n Pakhis mom...so no chance of Pakhi with both n rags has a clear way for kalpi n I hope this time Neetu is smiling n this Kamla Dumla ka kuch nah in ho sakta... Reading rags ki entry Waala scene n d dinning table wala reminded me of hum aapke hain kaun ka dinning table wala scene... ❤️❤️ U've made me ur fan...just love it. Update d next part soon...

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SUGANDHII

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Posted: 9 years ago

👏 Awesome update fuzz👏👏⭐️

Ohh... RagNa...😳 in ur stories😳😳

Just loved it...

shy kalpi😳

N raghav u r in my arms n ur attention is still on other😆😆😆

no doubt y I love ur raghav in ur stories...

Love their dinning table scene really nyc😛😳😳

I now neetu stopped kamla saying kalpi does all d work for raghav so definitely she is d one who was smiling n kamla was frowned hmm hope m correct

Vry interesting

complete it soon...

waiting

See d moment I refresh u add something😆😉

Aww Terrace surprise 😳

n paakhi calling him BHAI Awwsh what a reliefff😛

N if paakhi knows about them n she is asking about their wedding date.. then y one mother was frowned😕 now to m sure that one is kamla Dumbla...😡

Finally m going to complete m comment with ur complete update😆

so I was ryt she was kamla who frowned...

gosh she never changed.. but y she doing this may b bcz she is maid n her raghav baba gosh Idk kamlaa😡

Poor kalpi has to return his gift

N he has drawer of full with ur returned gifts😭 poor Raghav😭

Now she is going to meet him...😳

update d nxt part soon...

Edited by sugandhii - 9 years ago

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Lolor

@lolor

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Posted: 9 years ago

lovely...& pakhi is rags sis... 😊

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MagicalMadness

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Posted: 9 years ago

Omg so it's Kamla frowning. Kamla makes poor kalpi return rags gifts. She is such a mean mom. Love how pak teases kalpi about blush. Kalpi saying she won't go but she is going to terrace. How romantic 😳 why doesn't Kamla like rags? Omg I almost fainted when rags says r u going to kiss it better. 😆 poor shy kalpi. Just love this angel. Update soon.Edited by sunyy - 9 years ago

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Anjinie

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Posted: 9 years ago

is kamala frowning, lovely relationship has formed between the Kapoors snd kamala, please continue also waiting to see if Kalpi goes to meet Raghav, and where is Sammy

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Aanchu

@aanchuxoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Omg It was awesome...plzz continue soo nd v want long updates

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