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Can Best Friends be Lovers (part 4)

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Posted: 12 November 2014 at 5:50am | IP Logged

Hello friends, 

M Priya new to ff writing and IF hope I am welcome here 

I always wanted to write a FF n AR but never knew of this recently came to know about it so I wrote an FF. Hope u people will like it 

this FF s based on two friends who fall in love but will their love succeed or will their friendship would suffer. To know more you all are welcome to read my ff 






Edited by PriyalovesAR - 26 November 2014 at 11:35pm

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Part 1: Below 
Part 2: Pg. 3
Part 3: Pg 6
Part 4: Pg 8


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                                                                            PART 1


As the story starts we see a apartment building with many floors and apartments. Lets see what's happening in one of these apartments.

There is a name plate which says Gupta House

As we move in the apartment  we see a drawing room with a seven seater sofa kept in drawing room. Then some noices are heard from the master bedroom which is the last room in the apartment lets see what's this noise is. We move to master bedroom and see a couple fighting actually not fighting but arguing.

We look at the room coloured in blue with a huge king size bed in middle and a photo of a couple of their marriage hung above the bed. Next to the bed is coffee table where a jug full of water and some medicines are kept.

On the bed we see a 8 month pregnant lady arguing with her husband let's see why is she arguing

 

Lady: mujhe ni pata kahi se bhi lao par mujhe chaat khani hai wo bhi abhi

Man: par is samay chaat kahan milegi. Tumhe pata hai na mujhe khana banana ni ata ni to main tumhe banakr de deta

Lady: shashank tumhari beti ko chahiye tum apni beti ke liye itna ni kar sakte making a crying face

Shashank: par padma tum kuch or khalo icecream pastries kuch bhi chaat main pakka subha le aungi.

 

Here this argument was going on, in another room we see a 3 year old girl waking up listening to her parents arguing. She gets up and went to her parents room thinking now on which topic they are arguing.

Girl: mom dad what happened

Padma: oh my angel woke up sorry baby to disturb you but see na your father is not giving me chaat

Shashank : angel now u only tell me at 3 in the night from where do i get chaat

Angel: papa ask billy uncle na he must have a solution for this problem

Shashank: good idea angel

Shashank calls billy his best friend

Billy (in sleepy voice): kaun hai yar rat ko 3 bje bhi shanty ni hai.

Shashank: hello billy main shashank

Billy (now wide awake ): kya hua shanky sab thek hai na padma bhabi thek hai na

Shashank: wo thek hai meri halat khrab hai

Billy: kyo kya hua

Shashank: yar padma ko is samay chaat khani hai kya karoon

 

In meanwhile

Angel: dad mom so gayi ab aap bhi relax ho kar so jao.

Shashank: ok beta

Billy sorry yar tujhe disturb kiya sab thek ho gaya

Billy: chal na bada aya thank you wala so ja ab

Shashank picks up her angel and moves towards her room. He makes her lie on bed give her a teddy and cover her with blanket kissing her forehead he leaves.

And comes to his room and sees his wife sleeping peacefully he kisses her forehead and stomach just as he kisses her stomach he felt some movement and smiles felling baby kick. And then sleeps peacefully

 

In malik house

Lady (who is also 8 months pregnant)  kya hua billy padma bhabhi thek hai na

Billy: han ananya wo thek hai bus unhe chaat khane ka man tha

Ananya: chalo thek hai

Billy: chalo tum bhi so jao our baby also needs rest and kisses her forehead


Here goes the first part 

Do tell how it is and please give ur honest views

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Posted: 12 November 2014 at 6:46am | IP Logged
hey nice starting 
continue soon

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48 views and single comment 
itna bura hai kya 

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Posted: 12 November 2014 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
awsume start priya... loved it...do continue soon n PM me next time :)

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Posted: 12 November 2014 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PriyalovesAR

48 views and single comment 
itna bura hai kya 

hahah donn't go with views no...
it increase very speedly when coment an like don't...

res for me

will read and then comment later after reading...
till then sharing ur this FF link on FB ... 

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nice start

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