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shrutichopra

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Posted: 02 October 2006 at 3:01am | IP Logged

hey ppl

i had started a ff but cudnt complete it or even start it properly fr tht matter...now i cant find it..

so here goes my frst ever ff...

this one of the frst times im writing something...

hope ul like it!!!

 

BANI AND JAI ARE AT A PARTY...JAI IS DRUNK AND DOESNT HAVE ANY IDEA ABOUT WHTS GOING ON...IN THIS STATE OF INTOXICATION HE DOES SOMETHING HE WOULDNT EVEN THINK OF DOING OTHERWISE....

bani- mr walia can we go home its gettin late and im nt feeling too well

jai- nahi bani abhi to mazaa shuru hua hai thodi deer pls...

bani- teekh hain lekin peena band karo...ur already in a state of intoxication

jai- bani aaj pia ki shadi ki party hai...dont stop me today its a happy occasion...

bani-whateva (saying this she walks of)

AFTER A WHILE JAI IS COMPLETELY SLOSHED SOMETHING THT DOESNT HAPPEN VERY OFTEN....HE IS SAD ABOUT THE FACT THAT HE LOST MORE THAN THE FACT THAT A LOVE IS LOST...ALL HE CAN SEE ARE GLIMPSES OF HER...JAI IS DANCING AND FOOLING AROUND...LAUGHING...ALL THIS TO HIDE HIS SADNESS...HIS HURT...HIS LOSS...

bani- mr walia its gettin really late and we have to get u home now...its gettin out of hand!!!

jai- no bani...

BANI HOWEVER FORCES HIM TO LEAVE AND JAI AT THE END HAS TO COMPLY...THY REACH HOME AND AS JAI IS NOT IN THE STATE TO WALK UP TO THEIR ROOM THY GO INTO THE GUEST ROOM...

bani- mr walia app so jayo...its too late....

jai- (hes nt in his senses and almost in the state of slumber he is talking stuff he shudnt have...) bani....u no...im feelin bad i lost cos at the party i realised i didnt love pia....she was just somethin i had to win cos she is so in demand all the time....

part1-pg1, part2-pg2, part3-pg3, part4-pg4, part5-pg5, part6-pg5,        &n bsp;   part7-pg6, part8-pg7, part9-pg8, part10-pg9,& nbsp;part11-pg11, part12-pg14,   part13-pg17, part14-pg19, part15-pg21, part16 -pg23, part17-pg ,     &n bsp;    part18-pg27, part19-pg36, part20-pg37, part21-pg40, part22-pg43,         part23-pg44, part24-pg46, part25-pg48, part26-pg50, part27-pg51, part28-pg56, part29-pg59 , part30-pg60

 

 



Edited by babethatsme - 25 January 2007 at 11:48am

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anjananazir

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love it please cont...!!! Clap

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Posted: 02 October 2006 at 3:17am | IP Logged
nice start u shall continue dis!

shrutichopra

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Posted: 02 October 2006 at 3:43am | IP Logged

Originally posted by guglu88

One more fanfic. Tongue That's really very nice. Tongue And don't worry about being good. Once you start writing, the flow comes automatically. Smile Smile Smile So just go on.
And anyway, who said its not good. Its good, in fact very good. Just make the parts a little longer.
Waiting for the next part.
Luv
Guglu LOL LOL LOL

il surely try making the parts longer the next time!!!

and thanx a lot!!!

shrutichopra

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Posted: 02 October 2006 at 5:05am | IP Logged
hey guys...plsss temme wht ul thnk bt this...no1 is replyin or i dunno even readin...guys ppplsssCryCry

swati_bhatia

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Posted: 02 October 2006 at 5:57am | IP Logged
yar nice plz continue

Mrs. SIR

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Posted: 02 October 2006 at 6:56am | IP Logged
whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa then??? haila he got drunk at pia's weddin bash and bani's his dream grl and he luvs her.. then then then??? plz cont soon that was gr8888888888 Clap

shrutichopra

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Posted: 02 October 2006 at 7:18am | IP Logged
thnx navs...means a lot Smile

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