hey ppl
i had started a ff but cudnt complete it or even start it properly fr tht matter...now i cant find it..
so here goes my frst ever ff...
this one of the frst times im writing something...
hope ul like it!!!
BANI AND JAI ARE AT A PARTY...JAI IS DRUNK AND DOESNT HAVE ANY IDEA ABOUT WHTS GOING ON...IN THIS STATE OF INTOXICATION HE DOES SOMETHING HE WOULDNT EVEN THINK OF DOING OTHERWISE....
bani- mr walia can we go home its gettin late and im nt feeling too well
jai- nahi bani abhi to mazaa shuru hua hai thodi deer pls...
bani- teekh hain lekin peena band karo...ur already in a state of intoxication
jai- bani aaj pia ki shadi ki party hai...dont stop me today its a happy occasion...
bani-whateva (saying this she walks of)
AFTER A WHILE JAI IS COMPLETELY SLOSHED SOMETHING THT DOESNT HAPPEN VERY OFTEN....HE IS SAD ABOUT THE FACT THAT HE LOST MORE THAN THE FACT THAT A LOVE IS LOST...ALL HE CAN SEE ARE GLIMPSES OF HER...JAI IS DANCING AND FOOLING AROUND...LAUGHING...ALL THIS TO HIDE HIS SADNESS...HIS HURT...HIS LOSS...
bani- mr walia its gettin really late and we have to get u home now...its gettin out of hand!!!
jai- no bani...
BANI HOWEVER FORCES HIM TO LEAVE AND JAI AT THE END HAS TO COMPLY...THY REACH HOME AND AS JAI IS NOT IN THE STATE TO WALK UP TO THEIR ROOM THY GO INTO THE GUEST ROOM...
bani- mr walia app so jayo...its too late....
jai- (hes nt in his senses and almost in the state of slumber he is talking stuff he shudnt have...) bani....u no...im feelin bad i lost cos at the party i realised i didnt love pia....she was just somethin i had to win cos she is so in demand all the time....
part1-pg1, part2-pg2, part3-pg3, part4-pg4, part5-pg5, part6-pg5, &n bsp; part7-pg6, part8-pg7, part9-pg8, part10-pg9,& nbsp;part11-pg11, part12-pg14, part13-pg17, part14-pg19, part15-pg21, part16 -pg23, part17-pg , &n bsp; part18-pg27, part19-pg36, part20-pg37, part21-pg40, part22-pg43, part23-pg44, part24-pg46, part25-pg48, part26-pg50, part27-pg51, part28-pg56, part29-pg59 , part30-pg60
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